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The story was a great read, though a bit rough in the first few chapters. I hope that the author continues to write this story till the end.
The mc has no personality or interesting traits and doesn't have a goal, so his actions don't have any weight, and the character interactions feel like they were written by an AI with how bland and rushed they are
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I read through chapter three. It's not great, and I don't believe I will miss anything from further reading. I can't say anything positive about the novel. What I dislike most are the characters and dialogue. Their unlikeable, unoriginal, and have no personalities. The conversations felt too stiff and impassive. From the comments, I believe the author mentioned that this was their first written novel. It's completely understandable, but it feels like a Chinese MTL, even though they said it wasn't. Besides the problems with writing and world knowledge, I'll give this a 1.8/5.
I'm only reading to see how bad can this be. Zero emotions cardboard cutouts or robots instead of characters and author did zero research.
It's really confusing with the pace the story is going it's like a weird mixture of fast pace and slow pace, sometimes the chapters feel small and sometimes decent.
it was great but it's super slow paced fanfic mc still a child. don't know if the update is fast for a slow paced novel. if you gonna read it should wait it to have more chapters.
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it's a good story my only problem is it feels that the mc isn't creative with his magic he just follows what bisclow does.--------------------
It's a very good concept for a character to have seith magic because we always get other kinds of magic. I hope we get more updates and that the author won't get discouraged.
L'histoire est plutôt bonne, le personnage est intéressant il a bien était intégré au monde fairy tail son pouvoir est bien équilibrer pas trop OP mais à beaucoup de potentiel le seul hic n'arrive pas à savoir l'âge du MC par rapport au reste du personnage du cannon
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Une très bonne histoire. J'avais peur que son cheat soit trop puissant mais l'équilibre des puissances est bien établi. De plus les relations entre les membres sont plutôt bien réalisées (même si ce n'est que le début de la fanfiction). Je trouve très intéressant que le MC possède la magie des totems, et non pas une magie cheat comme la magie de la barrière; magie de l'espace; magie du temps; magie du haki ... J'aime beaucoup le fait que le MC créer des stratégies, ne se repose pas que sur les totems mais aussi sur la lance et sur son corps... Beaucoup de potentiel et un très bon début. Continuer comme ça
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Following my senpais in this industry I shall shamelessly rate myself five stars!!! anyways go read the story i tell ya it's gon be a good fanfic.
loved the story mostly wanted to see a little bit more of the totems before he switched to puppets but overall it was good to bad it abandoned really was enjoying it
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The story was a great read, though a bit rough in the first few chapters. I hope that the author continues to write this story till the end.
The mc has no personality or interesting traits and doesn't have a goal, so his actions don't have any weight, and the character interactions feel like they were written by an AI with how bland and rushed they are
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I read through chapter three. It's not great, and I don't believe I will miss anything from further reading. I can't say anything positive about the novel. What I dislike most are the characters and dialogue. Their unlikeable, unoriginal, and have no personalities. The conversations felt too stiff and impassive. From the comments, I believe the author mentioned that this was their first written novel. It's completely understandable, but it feels like a Chinese MTL, even though they said it wasn't. Besides the problems with writing and world knowledge, I'll give this a 1.8/5.
I'm only reading to see how bad can this be. Zero emotions cardboard cutouts or robots instead of characters and author did zero research.
It's really confusing with the pace the story is going it's like a weird mixture of fast pace and slow pace, sometimes the chapters feel small and sometimes decent.
it was great but it's super slow paced fanfic mc still a child. don't know if the update is fast for a slow paced novel. if you gonna read it should wait it to have more chapters.
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for his larger soldiers use the ruin graders, ruin guard, ruin serpent, aeonblight drakes and the other series from genshin impact[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
it's a good story my only problem is it feels that the mc isn't creative with his magic he just follows what bisclow does.--------------------
It's a very good concept for a character to have seith magic because we always get other kinds of magic. I hope we get more updates and that the author won't get discouraged.
L'histoire est plutôt bonne, le personnage est intéressant il a bien était intégré au monde fairy tail son pouvoir est bien équilibrer pas trop OP mais à beaucoup de potentiel le seul hic n'arrive pas à savoir l'âge du MC par rapport au reste du personnage du cannon
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Une très bonne histoire. J'avais peur que son cheat soit trop puissant mais l'équilibre des puissances est bien établi. De plus les relations entre les membres sont plutôt bien réalisées (même si ce n'est que le début de la fanfiction). Je trouve très intéressant que le MC possède la magie des totems, et non pas une magie cheat comme la magie de la barrière; magie de l'espace; magie du temps; magie du haki ... J'aime beaucoup le fait que le MC créer des stratégies, ne se repose pas que sur les totems mais aussi sur la lance et sur son corps... Beaucoup de potentiel et un très bon début. Continuer comme ça
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Have not read yet but since it's a fairy tail fanfic I'll give it a try 🏣❌🍀🐳🐳🐳🍀🏣🏤🔰💝😍😏😉🍰😍💝❌🏣☁️🐀🐔🐇🐂🐤🐹🐀🐏🐇🐥🐹🐏🐶🐏🐁🐏🐹🐰🐹
Fairy tail 💪💪💪👍👍👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆👆
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Following my senpais in this industry I shall shamelessly rate myself five stars!!! anyways go read the story i tell ya it's gon be a good fanfic.
loved the story mostly wanted to see a little bit more of the totems before he switched to puppets but overall it was good to bad it abandoned really was enjoying it