Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse

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Renovator

An Apocalyptic world with more than what meets the eye. Give it a try, you might grow attached. - Renovator. PS: I enjoy it reading it, if it counts.

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LeftPinky

It's only a few chapters but a really good read, I like your characters and the concept of your story, this story has a lot of potential, i will keep reading. Good luck author.

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MotivatedSloth

Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.

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IsekaiMan1

there's to much unnecessary conflict and strong characters. higivugvuvuguvugygygygygg66g6gyfyfygygyvyvyvyvyvyvyv7g6g7v7g7g7ggg7vg7g7gv7v7

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burningfightingfig

is this novel on hiatus ? or did he stop writing like he said he wouldn’t do? hate when authors make false promises it makes me not even want to start the novel tbh.

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Draco_Lucifer69

Author, the world background and the story development seems forced and rushed. I didn't really understand the whole labyrinth thing and world invasion fully and it seems like someone cleared all the floors. Also you still didn't tell the name of the horned beasts and casually avoided it. Overall the story is nice and amazing fight scenes, but it looks like the MC is always forced to fight something and no time to train. The last second saving cliches I didn't really like it but I guess after volume 1 the progression tones down a bit in order to understand the whole apocalypse thing.

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joelburch

When I started this , the actions of MC at the start almost dissuaded me since it's a really serious subject and for me to vibe with it, the writing has to feel from a genuine place. I think u handled it pretty well, if there was all this fake edgelord behavior throughout the novel or BS psudo psychology I would have dropped. Instead u wrote a really interesting novel with interesting powers, and lots of plots and characters driving it. I think what I most enjoy is how fast world events are unwinding, how things don't just wait for MC. He is barely keeping up and that style of writing is engaging, keep up the strong work

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Forgen

It's goooooooooooooooooooooooooooood👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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sunlightyellowx

Didnt think i’d be returning to webnovel after my favourite book ended but after reading this im glad i did! Enganging world, so many things happening at once to keep me entertained! This has potential.

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Vladislav_Romanov

MC is a punch bag. After every serious battle he is losing consciousness due to overexertion, wounds, or blood loss. He is mentally weak but somehow manage to survive. His sister is not smart as well. She accepted her forster parents after they took her by force from her beloved brother and even served in some organization.... Is it not clear that the one who divided you and your brother by force can not have any good will to you? The world is a mess. Huge holes in the middle of the cities, zomby apocalypse, alien invasion, beasts attacks what else? The future will show. The government sucks. Hidden organizations even more so. Reason for alien invasion simply stupid excuse. In short: "rest only in our dreams". People definetly lacking brains there. The more i read the more depressing and hopeless it be becomes.

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Arkham

I'm not gonna lie, the first couple of chapters made me want to stop reading but as you go forward it get more interesting to read.................

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PYTN

The plot seems a bit forced and fast at first, but you just need to get used to it, as that is the author's style. The lemons are nice, and the story so far seems stable. Unless somewhere this takes a sharp turn, ill like it

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Avalarous

This is actually pretty good. A few funny typos, an interactive author, and the harem is actually alright which is near impossible to find. The direction of the story is going well and I don't want to stop reading. Unfortunately I'm poor and could only unlock a few chapters and had to stop in the end. You should read cause it's good enough for me to review and I never leave reviews.

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Lord_Pluto

Hey author I really like this novel and I enjoy reading it, I recommend it for new readers, it is not a review but it is what I think..(140)

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therealstrejman

This is just the type of novel that everybody is dreading for, it's concept and creativity flamboyantly succeed my expectation, and I hope yours aswell, and has brought me bundles of satisfaction throughout the whole novel.I just started to read more consistently so I don't know if my review is acknowledged in the webnovel community but i hope it helps some people who are in the state of debate in which they want to or not read this novel. Thanks.

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Legend2005

It is a very interesting story that revolves around Gray's ability to pause stuff. One of the things I like about this book is the way the different abilities are used. You know when you think of a superpower in a movie and feel like you could destroy the world with that power used properly. That does not happen. While some abilities are obviously more powerful, you can also shape the abilities how you want them, making the battles interesting to read as they create counter-moves against each-other's moves. The story does feel a little accelerated though.

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Immortal3258

chapter 120 very good hopefully Lara and gray are together and hopefully Ruby too how exciting a novel that contains varieties hopefully it will be long author give it a try

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Noufumi

you gotta try this book.I have no words

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ImmortalGodslayer

Honestly hella well written. Action scenes are pretty thrilling and I enjoyed it a lot. Give it a read, it's a pretty fast-paced novel. .........