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It well written, the pacing is relatively consistent. However the plot/storyline is a bit of a mess. It’s almost as if it can’t decide between being a slice of life ‘game dev’ story, an action adventure story, or a romance story. The flow between genres could be polished to allow for a smoother transition between the story’s mood/atmosphere. Still a good story though, lots of nostalgia points and fun moments.
Story is good but the update is super irregular also the author started a new series cuz this one can not be monetized so even less updates
Can you make in this book horizon multiplayer picus for the boys and wanna se Steve Roger fighting wuit T. rex robot
This is the worst fanfic I have ever read. The author is too busy writing one-handed, and the romance feels like wet socks. The Naruto arc is like Naruto filler but twice as bad. You put mediocre content behind a paywall. I mean this with 100% disrespect: delete your story. The characters feel like wet paper, made by someone with no talent, even below Jordinio trash. You are at Chinese tier.
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It's an interesting story so long as you're familiar with the background. I feel there could be more exploration of the Marvel world's reaction towards the MC and his technology. The MC's splurging GP is definitely welcome instead of just making him flat out OP.
This story is great, the amount of thought that has been put into this is incredible. While some of the paragraphs have their ending words repeated and it lowers immersion, the repeats are periodic and everything else has good grammar itself. The way the worlds react to the Games is plausible, and the character's development is also convincing. On another note, just my idea, but if the two worlds will eventually interact in Oasis, I think that there should be an announcement that says [Dear Citizens of Japan, due to the cultural similarities of your history and the New World's, you have been chosen to be able to access Hubs 73-75 prematurely. We hope you will serve as moderators when the new Hubs go public and help the World of Ninjas adapt to the World of Marvel's technology. Best Regards, Oasis Managment.] Just in case 😁
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an incredible story one of Marvel's best stories there's only one question going harem because it's already been working that Jean is interested in Mc
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Uno de los mejores fanfics que he visto, tiene una historia que al principio dudas de ella, pero luego te va enganchando, personalmente, no me gusta tanto la forma del protagonista de esconderse tanto, pero no por eso la historia pierde calidad, el desarrollo de personajes en muy vivo y divertido en muchos casos (hulk xd), si no que te emociona con cosas muy tontas (la defensa del mundo de minecraft), la ortografía tendrá errores, pero he estado tan enganchado a la historia que sinceramente no me he dado cuenta de esos errores. El romance está bien, no es increíble, pero bueno, pasable, es lo poco que pediría mejorar, así como un harem si se va a ir a mas mundos. Un bezote molto grande.
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Good story, but the update of the chapters is slow 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 ً
Muito bom . No começo tava com um pé atrás mas conforme eu fui lendo mais fui gostando pela história e os personagens .............................
Hello, its my first time to review a book and dont mind me. The story development is great and the story is great till now, its just that i kinda miss the daily update anyway good luck.
This story is trash, with a stupid and naive teenager in the role of the main character. don't waste your time. --------------------------------------------------
Cheating is a deal breaker for me , I always told the previous men I’ve had relationships with, the moment you are unfaithful is the moment you end our relationship. If I’ve ever felt so disconnected from my partner that I have felt myself drawn even into a hypothetical affair in my mind, I end the relationship. I’ve been in many abusive relationships (that I ultimately ended) but never once have I been unfaithful. Why? Because no failing relationship is worth sacrificing my morals and integrity for. No matter how it unfolds with a partner, there should be a base level of respect and empathy towards them as a human being. A failed relationship will not pollute your mind and foster insecurities anywhere near as being on the receiving end of adultery. I didn’t know what was happening all along for years that he’s been cheating until I met Hackerone975 at g ma il c om
Very good. Hope some science fiction games to give high tech gear. Really want to see game like Halo, Mass Effect, Crysis, Deus Ex, Prototype, Batman, the Division and Metroid to see heroes with powerfull gear like power armour, mechas and gear. Hope some tank, ship, overcraft and other car or mechs. Cant wait what other games the shinobi world will play and see what happens when the games for Naruto and Marvel are accessible to the two worlds !!! Really want to see some worlds like gundam, Justice league, overwatch, transformers, stargate, starcraft, stargate, startrek, robotech / maccross, battlemech / mechwarrior, metal gear, armored core, babylon 5, the orville, xcom, code geass... And you can make them appear in games and after in reality ! It would be cool to see some People find link between Alex game and other earth planet or reality.
I found this novel on scribblehub. Believe me when I say I only started reading this story because it had a tag of Fanfiction with additional tag Minecraft. But it became a fun ride.
how do i get to the patreon thing.. i would love to get 20 extra chapters in this novel.. and this is the first time I've ever seen a novel good enough to pay. lol
A good story, interesting plot. Some of the earlier chapters do need to be reexamined by an editor. It would be a good idea to slow down on the number of worlds that you crossover in the fic. Otherwise, keep up the good work.
История интересная и соответствует названию. Но после Марвел готовьтесь к миру Наруто. Это не спойлер, а необходимая информация. В истории нет пока указанного гарема, но есть Наруто. Это необходимо указать в описании. О чем эта история? О том, что хотели игроки от самых популярных игр, и о восторгах игроков от этих "новых" игр. Развития персонажа нет, окружение в восторженной стагнации. К сожалению много пустых глав, которые отведены лишь восторгам безымянных игроков. Появление мира Наруто считаю обманом автора. Всем удачи.
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Just Like the other Story about the Gamer Rockstar this is some Peak Reading with good pacing . . .shame i caught Up already. Keep it up i read the other Storys later.
I’ll start by saying that I do enjoy reading this… at certain spots. I didn’t go into this expecting it to be professional, and it’s not like I think I can do better. That doesn’t mean I can’t criticize the flaws, which some are pretty major. tldr; it’s okay if you don’t think too hard, but would’ve probably been better as it’s own story rather than an MCU fanfic. Most of its major problems are including already existing characters The story is wildly inconsistent or abrupt. The author changes things, or just straight up ignores crucial plot points that he made as recently as a few chapters ago. They could easily be solved by editing the chapter, or not even exist if he simply reread the previous chapters or kept notes. It’s also so hard to read for someone who’s knows Marvel because the timelines are all wrong and characters don’t act the way you think they should. I’ll give that some slack because Marvel timeline is already screwy and this is a fanfic so I don’t expect it to be 1 to 1 anyways. But! For people who don’t know Marvel well it’s even worse because he doesn’t explain any background, even simply. So why certain crucial plot points or timelines are changed are never explained, and if you don’t have pretty decent knowledge of all the MCU it’s almost impossible to follow unless you turn your brain off and don’t think at all. Grammar is also pretty bad, but good enough as the Authors main language isn’t English. However it would be nice if he actually edited them out when people tell him it’s wrong.
I love this and their interaction between the world changing games that are introduced. idea for a story: multiversal cinema think about it fictional characters go to the movies
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It well written, the pacing is relatively consistent. However the plot/storyline is a bit of a mess. It’s almost as if it can’t decide between being a slice of life ‘game dev’ story, an action adventure story, or a romance story. The flow between genres could be polished to allow for a smoother transition between the story’s mood/atmosphere. Still a good story though, lots of nostalgia points and fun moments.
Story is good but the update is super irregular also the author started a new series cuz this one can not be monetized so even less updates
Can you make in this book horizon multiplayer picus for the boys and wanna se Steve Roger fighting wuit T. rex robot
This is the worst fanfic I have ever read. The author is too busy writing one-handed, and the romance feels like wet socks. The Naruto arc is like Naruto filler but twice as bad. You put mediocre content behind a paywall. I mean this with 100% disrespect: delete your story. The characters feel like wet paper, made by someone with no talent, even below Jordinio trash. You are at Chinese tier.
Membuka SPOILER It's an interesting story so long as you're familiar with the background. I feel there could be more exploration of the Marvel world's reaction towards the MC and his technology. The MC's splurging GP is definitely welcome instead of just making him flat out OP.
This story is great, the amount of thought that has been put into this is incredible. While some of the paragraphs have their ending words repeated and it lowers immersion, the repeats are periodic and everything else has good grammar itself. The way the worlds react to the Games is plausible, and the character's development is also convincing. On another note, just my idea, but if the two worlds will eventually interact in Oasis, I think that there should be an announcement that says [Dear Citizens of Japan, due to the cultural similarities of your history and the New World's, you have been chosen to be able to access Hubs 73-75 prematurely. We hope you will serve as moderators when the new Hubs go public and help the World of Ninjas adapt to the World of Marvel's technology. Best Regards, Oasis Managment.] Just in case 😁
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an incredible story one of Marvel's best stories there's only one question going harem because it's already been working that Jean is interested in Mc
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Uno de los mejores fanfics que he visto, tiene una historia que al principio dudas de ella, pero luego te va enganchando, personalmente, no me gusta tanto la forma del protagonista de esconderse tanto, pero no por eso la historia pierde calidad, el desarrollo de personajes en muy vivo y divertido en muchos casos (hulk xd), si no que te emociona con cosas muy tontas (la defensa del mundo de minecraft), la ortografía tendrá errores, pero he estado tan enganchado a la historia que sinceramente no me he dado cuenta de esos errores. El romance está bien, no es increíble, pero bueno, pasable, es lo poco que pediría mejorar, así como un harem si se va a ir a mas mundos. Un bezote molto grande.
Membuka SPOILER Good story, but the update of the chapters is slow 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢 ً
Muito bom . No começo tava com um pé atrás mas conforme eu fui lendo mais fui gostando pela história e os personagens .............................
Hello, its my first time to review a book and dont mind me. The story development is great and the story is great till now, its just that i kinda miss the daily update anyway good luck.
This story is trash, with a stupid and naive teenager in the role of the main character. don't waste your time. --------------------------------------------------
Cheating is a deal breaker for me , I always told the previous men I’ve had relationships with, the moment you are unfaithful is the moment you end our relationship. If I’ve ever felt so disconnected from my partner that I have felt myself drawn even into a hypothetical affair in my mind, I end the relationship. I’ve been in many abusive relationships (that I ultimately ended) but never once have I been unfaithful. Why? Because no failing relationship is worth sacrificing my morals and integrity for. No matter how it unfolds with a partner, there should be a base level of respect and empathy towards them as a human being. A failed relationship will not pollute your mind and foster insecurities anywhere near as being on the receiving end of adultery. I didn’t know what was happening all along for years that he’s been cheating until I met Hackerone975 at g ma il c om
Very good. Hope some science fiction games to give high tech gear. Really want to see game like Halo, Mass Effect, Crysis, Deus Ex, Prototype, Batman, the Division and Metroid to see heroes with powerfull gear like power armour, mechas and gear. Hope some tank, ship, overcraft and other car or mechs. Cant wait what other games the shinobi world will play and see what happens when the games for Naruto and Marvel are accessible to the two worlds !!! Really want to see some worlds like gundam, Justice league, overwatch, transformers, stargate, starcraft, stargate, startrek, robotech / maccross, battlemech / mechwarrior, metal gear, armored core, babylon 5, the orville, xcom, code geass... And you can make them appear in games and after in reality ! It would be cool to see some People find link between Alex game and other earth planet or reality.
I found this novel on scribblehub. Believe me when I say I only started reading this story because it had a tag of Fanfiction with additional tag Minecraft. But it became a fun ride.
how do i get to the patreon thing.. i would love to get 20 extra chapters in this novel.. and this is the first time I've ever seen a novel good enough to pay. lol
A good story, interesting plot. Some of the earlier chapters do need to be reexamined by an editor. It would be a good idea to slow down on the number of worlds that you crossover in the fic. Otherwise, keep up the good work.
История интересная и соответствует названию. Но после Марвел готовьтесь к миру Наруто. Это не спойлер, а необходимая информация. В истории нет пока указанного гарема, но есть Наруто. Это необходимо указать в описании. О чем эта история? О том, что хотели игроки от самых популярных игр, и о восторгах игроков от этих "новых" игр. Развития персонажа нет, окружение в восторженной стагнации. К сожалению много пустых глав, которые отведены лишь восторгам безымянных игроков. Появление мира Наруто считаю обманом автора. Всем удачи.
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Just Like the other Story about the Gamer Rockstar this is some Peak Reading with good pacing . . .shame i caught Up already. Keep it up i read the other Storys later.
I’ll start by saying that I do enjoy reading this… at certain spots. I didn’t go into this expecting it to be professional, and it’s not like I think I can do better. That doesn’t mean I can’t criticize the flaws, which some are pretty major. tldr; it’s okay if you don’t think too hard, but would’ve probably been better as it’s own story rather than an MCU fanfic. Most of its major problems are including already existing characters The story is wildly inconsistent or abrupt. The author changes things, or just straight up ignores crucial plot points that he made as recently as a few chapters ago. They could easily be solved by editing the chapter, or not even exist if he simply reread the previous chapters or kept notes. It’s also so hard to read for someone who’s knows Marvel because the timelines are all wrong and characters don’t act the way you think they should. I’ll give that some slack because Marvel timeline is already screwy and this is a fanfic so I don’t expect it to be 1 to 1 anyways. But! For people who don’t know Marvel well it’s even worse because he doesn’t explain any background, even simply. So why certain crucial plot points or timelines are changed are never explained, and if you don’t have pretty decent knowledge of all the MCU it’s almost impossible to follow unless you turn your brain off and don’t think at all. Grammar is also pretty bad, but good enough as the Authors main language isn’t English. However it would be nice if he actually edited them out when people tell him it’s wrong.
I love this and their interaction between the world changing games that are introduced. idea for a story: multiversal cinema think about it fictional characters go to the movies
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