12Ulasan-ulasan
3.12
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
Bagikan pikiran Anda dengan orang lain
Tulis ulasan
Not gonna say anything. 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
I will be short. I love the story and how the author managed to get the mc into the main plot and I would have really liked to see GT in his hands but it's a shame that 9 months passed and there is no movement. I have an irritating problem that the author decided to remove the mc's memories of dbz and gave too much prominence to his "mental problem" about self-confidence, this shook me throughout the story. Removing these problems this is one of the ff that I liked the most about dbz, I would have liked more contact with broly and that the mc is stronger but good.
70% canon up until chapter 46, but when the author starts writing again he promised major plot changes which I’m excited for. Be warned that the MC has a couple issues with how he views himself so a lot of people are just quick to write this off because of it. All I can say is that if you don’t mind a non-op mc off the bat you’ll enjoy this :) Also the comedy is top tier thanks to dbza references 😂
hahahahahahaha ... the MC gives too much information, it seems like a soap opera when the MC begins with his dialogues. the part where Frieza mentions killing his mother angers the MC but then he continues to act calm and joking as if nothing had happened💩💩 [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Pero que asco de fic acabo de leer estuvo con cooler 31 años y su poder solo subió a 5000 no me jodas va la tierra para reunirse con su hermano ahora quiere pelear para la tierra sabe muy bien que cooler es más fuerte que Freezer y solo falta que el autor le de un súper senkai y salte Alós millones de poder
More[img=update] More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]
Mc is boring 0 romance and very weak. you wanna only doing canon things I dont like it. ////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Mc is pathetically weak and weak willed just following canon events and not really doing anything to progress story he is just an extra. Love dbz but this new mc adds nothing to the universe and actually subtracts from it. Aside from these issues it well written story and mostly grammatically correct.
the mc is just trash the person he follows was coldblooded in the regular one but he change I don't like killing you have to the at dragon ball someone die all most every 3 episodes then the mc I have to save everyone hes just like goku but goku look smart compared to him
My opion mc personality Is like a goku wannabe but more Ann oying And he’s Too weak for he was seven and his power level was 1200 24 years passed and his power level is around 5000 that’s Pitiful he should at least be 10000 or more
Membuka SPOILER
There aren’t a lot of Dragon Ball fics on this site that have a good story without being super overpowered and fighting beerus in a few chapters. While this story has the cliche of following the OG story. It has it’s own unique twists to change and make sense of those developments. Some people may not like the soft character of the MC, but sometimes it’s a nice change to have a MC who doesn’t want to become a ball of violence and manipulation. This is just my two cents, thanks for the story.
Not gonna say anything. 😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑
I will be short. I love the story and how the author managed to get the mc into the main plot and I would have really liked to see GT in his hands but it's a shame that 9 months passed and there is no movement. I have an irritating problem that the author decided to remove the mc's memories of dbz and gave too much prominence to his "mental problem" about self-confidence, this shook me throughout the story. Removing these problems this is one of the ff that I liked the most about dbz, I would have liked more contact with broly and that the mc is stronger but good.
70% canon up until chapter 46, but when the author starts writing again he promised major plot changes which I’m excited for. Be warned that the MC has a couple issues with how he views himself so a lot of people are just quick to write this off because of it. All I can say is that if you don’t mind a non-op mc off the bat you’ll enjoy this :) Also the comedy is top tier thanks to dbza references 😂
hahahahahahaha ... the MC gives too much information, it seems like a soap opera when the MC begins with his dialogues. the part where Frieza mentions killing his mother angers the MC but then he continues to act calm and joking as if nothing had happened💩💩 [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Pero que asco de fic acabo de leer estuvo con cooler 31 años y su poder solo subió a 5000 no me jodas va la tierra para reunirse con su hermano ahora quiere pelear para la tierra sabe muy bien que cooler es más fuerte que Freezer y solo falta que el autor le de un súper senkai y salte Alós millones de poder
More[img=update] More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]More[img=update]
Mc is boring 0 romance and very weak. you wanna only doing canon things I dont like it. ////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Mc is pathetically weak and weak willed just following canon events and not really doing anything to progress story he is just an extra. Love dbz but this new mc adds nothing to the universe and actually subtracts from it. Aside from these issues it well written story and mostly grammatically correct.
the mc is just trash the person he follows was coldblooded in the regular one but he change I don't like killing you have to the at dragon ball someone die all most every 3 episodes then the mc I have to save everyone hes just like goku but goku look smart compared to him
My opion mc personality Is like a goku wannabe but more Ann oying And he’s Too weak for he was seven and his power level was 1200 24 years passed and his power level is around 5000 that’s Pitiful he should at least be 10000 or more
Membuka SPOILER There aren’t a lot of Dragon Ball fics on this site that have a good story without being super overpowered and fighting beerus in a few chapters. While this story has the cliche of following the OG story. It has it’s own unique twists to change and make sense of those developments. Some people may not like the soft character of the MC, but sometimes it’s a nice change to have a MC who doesn’t want to become a ball of violence and manipulation. This is just my two cents, thanks for the story.
A disappointment. A MASSIVE DISAPPOINTMENT.