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I was studying for my exam then when I opened my phone I saw all of your comments. Reading your comments I felt I have made a big mistake this time. I will not lie reading your comments was really hard and I became really tense after reading everyone's comments.

Now every one is talking about how I changed my novel into something like trash. First please let me tell you my thought on the basic outline of the plot which I had in my mind.

From the beginning I told you that the novel was going to get darker but not clichés dramatic way. I wanted the MC to have something like a enemy that everyone will hate so I chose Ash and Oak in my plot.

secondly, oak affects MC life which also brings new changes and I am sure you will love the changes. The changes are not focused on character rather its about new character and purpose of the MC. The changes will be shown in few more chapters.

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The real villain's is not Oak nor Ash nor Gary. They are currently derived by emotions. Ash and Gary has inferiority complex and Oak has his own emotions. This also makes things even more harder for our Itsuki.

Trust me I don't want to lose any of reader that's why I constantly think and try to improve story. I don't even know how many times I have changed the outline of my story after reading your comments. But One thing I am sure of that everything will be resolved with Indigo League. That's why I keep mentioning Indigo League again ang again.

Also this change was made because I wanted to give a soft reboot to my MC. After Indigo league a new start will take place. I can't wait to let you all read what I have thought for this novel. And also someone of you might be disappointed because I didn't pick your suggestion, I just went with the follow. So I apologize.

Thank you to everyone for reading my story this far and I hope you will continue to read it in future as well.


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