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The story is far to short and slow paced to be any decent and the author doesn’t do himself any favors with the dc and marvel mix. Pretty sure they only did it for Diana to be his partner. Other then that it’s stale
The story is far to slow paced and to short for the story to be any good. The author decided to do both marvel and dc which honestly is not a great idea ever unless it’s done well which here it’s not the best.
Honestly, The first 20 chapters were pretty decent. I enjoyed my read up until then but.. Soon after? I just couldn't get back into the story the moment time travel was introduced. Not a fan of it, I suppose. I only made it roughly to chapter 29, unfortunate as I did enjoy the story up until this point. The author has some work to do with descriptive writing but otherwise, things are fine. The battle scene's are mostly bland, truth be told, but it gets the job done. Overall rating, I'd Say my total score is accurate! If you don't mind time travel in anyway, Give this a read!
Here we go again. Another unique and interesting fan-fic. I like this piece a lot. Start of book wasn’t cringe or embarrassing. Romance of story was fast paced and main female interest wasn’t obsessive or clingy. On other side, I didn’t like some vague terms. We all know she wasn’t virgin based on DC movie, but then author mentioned things like “had fun with Thor”. Power system was awesome. I like cultivation system and in this case it was simple system. I don’t find any complicated realms of power or weird chinese half-translated words. Don’t worry this isn’t typical xianxia where character found ancient/primordial/heaven-defying cultivation method. Even that typical mini-hades arc is nice concluded. So thanks for great work Mr. Author.
Honestly a fairly well done crossover. There's not enough Marvel/DC crossovers at all. Really sad you dropped it One of my few complaints was how repetitive the author became at some points while describing something. Otherwise keep up the great work!
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To The Author, Kindly continue the novel Make the MC an Anti-Hero with Full Solid Black Assassin Suit with best material, A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Art( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts) Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer) and many more things to Mastery. Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne can't imagine. Make Mutants into Meta-Humans. Also, Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters. Hope to see these soon! Thanks! Reader.
The entirety of this novel is just too much for me. People are going crazy over the MCs "power" as if its some completely new and unique and crazy thing...yet its just cultivation. The author stated earlier on that the MC's power will be UNIQUE, yet took back that statement as if its not a big deal. MC and his interactions with Diana are just bland, and their relationship feels superficial...not to mention her being called back because of their relationship and then her conveniently disappearing. I feel like the authors goal in this fic was not just cultivation, but trying to make it as similar to typical Chinese novels tbh. Literally back to back to back to back problems YOU DON'T EVEN HAVE TIME TO BREATH. MC blaming himself for 'being too weak'. FL goes missing serves as 'motivation'. MC gets nerfed for 'character development'. Overall, can't recommend unless you DO like these kinds of things.
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Average at best that all i could say about this fanfic The mc is annoying asf Each chapter for me was filled with just cringe Interaction with Diana was horrible for me Overall if you have bunch of free time feel free to read this fanfic But i won't recommend it
best fanfi I've read... even some little details , gotta love them. gotta check out more of author-san's work hope it's gonna be as good as this...
I just wanted to say that the cover of this novel looks like a penguin production cover.....................................................🙂
i love how the synopsis says that this is a marvel dc fanfic because other marvel dc fanfics suck even though this isn't any better than said fanfics. it aint bad though just need to fix some weird stuff
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Melhor fanfic Marvel/DC que já li, espero que o autor volte algum dia, mesmo sendo improvável ...............................................................
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one of the better novels I've read.not suited for some but well liked for the rest. . .
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Очень жаль, что это конец. Я бы с удовольствием читал про lotr и дальше . Но спасибо автору за эту историю. Я ждал каждую главу и не был разочарован ни разу. Отдельное спасибо за стабильность выкладки глав. Скорее всего я буду перечитывать этот фанфик позже.
love this book . Totally worth reading you will not regret it . . .. ............................................................................................................................................ .
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Its a good story, but it happens all the time in this story that i just dont like a part and stop reading this for a while and when i read it again something stupid happens again wich i dont like.
This is an interesting read. I Can't decide that I like or not like how the author has mixed both DC and Marvel universes. Many people are yearly nerfed if i do say so myself,like gods dying very easily that was disappointing. Very excited to see how our dear author spins the lore of both universes considering the fact that some very unimaginably powerful being are in both, seems like a recipe for disaster .But I do like how the author has show how the Mc is becoming OP step by step. Keep up the good work.
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It is one of the best novel I have ever seen. The mc power is AWESOME. his power is very unique, I have never been more satisfied by mc power than this novel. I cant describe correctly because of my English but you wont regret reading this novel. I have read 1000+ novel but I have never seen a more satisfying and unique power.
this fanfic is a good one. writing quality - you don't really notice any big mistakes that will make you confuse as your reading it story development - the flow of story wont leave a bad taste in your mouth in otherwords its good, the mc travels to otherworlds like lord of the rings, mc is creating the cultivation path of marvel he also has magic, his romance partner is Dianna/Wonder Woman, mc has awesomely very flexible powers character design - are a bit bland compared to good novels but you won't notice it if you don't notice it and compared to other fanfics this is a good one so yeah, next updating stability - the fanfic regularly updates daily sometimes miss a day but updates next day world background - author doesn't explain every detail about the story but even if you don't really know much about marvel/dc/Lord of the rings you'll follow along the story so you won't really be confused and frustrated about not knowing about the source material
Author if you drop this novel, I'll drop kick you in the head. just a friendly warning from a friendly fan! 😃🖐 extra words for the worf count.
Está muy bueno# aunque la actitud del MC como esos chistes sarcasticos que hace siempre no me gustan. ....... .......... .. .. ............ .....
It’s not a bad story, it’s just a bit boring and jumpy. What I mean by that, is that out of all the powers in the marvel universe Chi is absolutely the most boring and it’s the MCs main power. (Just try and watch Iron Fist on Netflix without cringing every time Danny says Chi). There’s also the fact that your MC is more of a tag along hero than his own character. He’s not really doing his own hero thing most of the time, he’s just joining others hero’s and helping them. The reason I think it’s jumpy is because youre mainly introducing a new plot or character every single chapter. That would be fine if your chapters were over 10k words, but they’re not. It feels very rushed.
The story is far to convoluted and short for its slow pace to be anything decent
The story is far to short and slow paced to be any decent and the author doesn’t do himself any favors with the dc and marvel mix. Pretty sure they only did it for Diana to be his partner. Other then that it’s stale
The story is far to slow paced and to short for the story to be any good. The author decided to do both marvel and dc which honestly is not a great idea ever unless it’s done well which here it’s not the best.
Honestly, The first 20 chapters were pretty decent. I enjoyed my read up until then but.. Soon after? I just couldn't get back into the story the moment time travel was introduced. Not a fan of it, I suppose. I only made it roughly to chapter 29, unfortunate as I did enjoy the story up until this point. The author has some work to do with descriptive writing but otherwise, things are fine. The battle scene's are mostly bland, truth be told, but it gets the job done. Overall rating, I'd Say my total score is accurate! If you don't mind time travel in anyway, Give this a read!
Here we go again. Another unique and interesting fan-fic. I like this piece a lot. Start of book wasn’t cringe or embarrassing. Romance of story was fast paced and main female interest wasn’t obsessive or clingy. On other side, I didn’t like some vague terms. We all know she wasn’t virgin based on DC movie, but then author mentioned things like “had fun with Thor”. Power system was awesome. I like cultivation system and in this case it was simple system. I don’t find any complicated realms of power or weird chinese half-translated words. Don’t worry this isn’t typical xianxia where character found ancient/primordial/heaven-defying cultivation method. Even that typical mini-hades arc is nice concluded. So thanks for great work Mr. Author.
Honestly a fairly well done crossover. There's not enough Marvel/DC crossovers at all. Really sad you dropped it One of my few complaints was how repetitive the author became at some points while describing something. Otherwise keep up the great work!
Membuka SPOILER To The Author, Kindly continue the novel Make the MC an Anti-Hero with Full Solid Black Assassin Suit with best material, A Master of All Things in everthing beyond any level we can imagine - Magic( Rune, Wizardry, Sorcery, etc.,) Martial Art( Chi, Cultivator and varies combat Arts) Science(Inventor, Scientist, Engineer) and many more things to Mastery. Make him the best in intellect(Science) and Combat Arts In level beyond the level even Bruce Wayne can't imagine. Make Mutants into Meta-Humans. Also, Keep the Characters from Both Western and Eastern Heroes from Comics and already known characters. Hope to see these soon! Thanks! Reader.
The entirety of this novel is just too much for me. People are going crazy over the MCs "power" as if its some completely new and unique and crazy thing...yet its just cultivation. The author stated earlier on that the MC's power will be UNIQUE, yet took back that statement as if its not a big deal. MC and his interactions with Diana are just bland, and their relationship feels superficial...not to mention her being called back because of their relationship and then her conveniently disappearing. I feel like the authors goal in this fic was not just cultivation, but trying to make it as similar to typical Chinese novels tbh. Literally back to back to back to back problems YOU DON'T EVEN HAVE TIME TO BREATH. MC blaming himself for 'being too weak'. FL goes missing serves as 'motivation'. MC gets nerfed for 'character development'. Overall, can't recommend unless you DO like these kinds of things.
Membuka SPOILER Average at best that all i could say about this fanfic The mc is annoying asf Each chapter for me was filled with just cringe Interaction with Diana was horrible for me Overall if you have bunch of free time feel free to read this fanfic But i won't recommend it
best fanfi I've read... even some little details , gotta love them. gotta check out more of author-san's work hope it's gonna be as good as this...
I just wanted to say that the cover of this novel looks like a penguin production cover.....................................................🙂
i love how the synopsis says that this is a marvel dc fanfic because other marvel dc fanfics suck even though this isn't any better than said fanfics. it aint bad though just need to fix some weird stuff
I LOVE THANK YOU FOR THIS MASTER PIECE ..............................................................................................................................
Melhor fanfic Marvel/DC que já li, espero que o autor volte algum dia, mesmo sendo improvável ...............................................................
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one of the better novels I've read.not suited for some but well liked for the rest. . .
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Очень жаль, что это конец. Я бы с удовольствием читал про lotr и дальше . Но спасибо автору за эту историю. Я ждал каждую главу и не был разочарован ни разу. Отдельное спасибо за стабильность выкладки глав. Скорее всего я буду перечитывать этот фанфик позже.
love this book . Totally worth reading you will not regret it . . .. ............................................................................................................................................ .
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Its a good story, but it happens all the time in this story that i just dont like a part and stop reading this for a while and when i read it again something stupid happens again wich i dont like.
This is an interesting read. I Can't decide that I like or not like how the author has mixed both DC and Marvel universes. Many people are yearly nerfed if i do say so myself,like gods dying very easily that was disappointing. Very excited to see how our dear author spins the lore of both universes considering the fact that some very unimaginably powerful being are in both, seems like a recipe for disaster .But I do like how the author has show how the Mc is becoming OP step by step. Keep up the good work.
Membuka SPOILER It is one of the best novel I have ever seen. The mc power is AWESOME. his power is very unique, I have never been more satisfied by mc power than this novel. I cant describe correctly because of my English but you wont regret reading this novel. I have read 1000+ novel but I have never seen a more satisfying and unique power.
this fanfic is a good one. writing quality - you don't really notice any big mistakes that will make you confuse as your reading it story development - the flow of story wont leave a bad taste in your mouth in otherwords its good, the mc travels to otherworlds like lord of the rings, mc is creating the cultivation path of marvel he also has magic, his romance partner is Dianna/Wonder Woman, mc has awesomely very flexible powers character design - are a bit bland compared to good novels but you won't notice it if you don't notice it and compared to other fanfics this is a good one so yeah, next updating stability - the fanfic regularly updates daily sometimes miss a day but updates next day world background - author doesn't explain every detail about the story but even if you don't really know much about marvel/dc/Lord of the rings you'll follow along the story so you won't really be confused and frustrated about not knowing about the source material
Author if you drop this novel, I'll drop kick you in the head. just a friendly warning from a friendly fan! 😃🖐 extra words for the worf count.
Está muy bueno# aunque la actitud del MC como esos chistes sarcasticos que hace siempre no me gustan. ....... .......... .. .. ............ .....
It’s not a bad story, it’s just a bit boring and jumpy. What I mean by that, is that out of all the powers in the marvel universe Chi is absolutely the most boring and it’s the MCs main power. (Just try and watch Iron Fist on Netflix without cringing every time Danny says Chi). There’s also the fact that your MC is more of a tag along hero than his own character. He’s not really doing his own hero thing most of the time, he’s just joining others hero’s and helping them. The reason I think it’s jumpy is because youre mainly introducing a new plot or character every single chapter. That would be fine if your chapters were over 10k words, but they’re not. It feels very rushed.
The story is far to convoluted and short for its slow pace to be anything decent