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Just the author leaving a shameless review! If love action, adventure, comedy, and reverse harem or just straight up harem stories! (I have no problem with 1v1 relationship, but ya girl is kinda shameless! LoL! Watched and enjoyed both Diabolik Lovers and Highschool DxD!!) Anyway, and if your fan of either of those two, then this is the story for you! I hope you will give this story a chance, especially the MC Dawn! Yeah, she can be kind of crybaby, but she does try her best to improve and protect those precious to her. But Dawn is not the only important character as so is the rest of the cast. I know my writing isn't top notch, but I'm striving to improve myself! This story also features commission art which can be found on my Instagram which is posted in the summary~!
The pacing of the story is very appropriate and interesting..................... Whether it's a novel or a webtoon, it will have a lot of potential❤
Interesting concept and a fascinating read. It’s got a lot in it. A rollercoaster of a read. Well done author. Well written and has potential. Not to mention: interesting lead.
Pretty nice story. I do love the FL. She is somewhat a mix of paranoid because of the situation she is in, but also still rationale. So, keep writing! Fingers crossed that you will have more readers in the future!
These are amazing chapters, can't wait to see this book get more popular, keep it up and keep writing a great job!!! can't wait to see more updates from you.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
A very nice story with an interesting MC. I really like the interactions with the side characters and I feel how the author is entertained while writing it. I recommend keeping a stack of chapters to have more constant updates, I see a lot of promise to this story!
Just the author leaving a shameless review! If love action, adventure, comedy, and reverse harem or just straight up harem stories! (I have no problem with 1v1 relationship, but ya girl is kinda shameless! LoL! Watched and enjoyed both Diabolik Lovers and Highschool DxD!!) Anyway, and if your fan of either of those two, then this is the story for you! I hope you will give this story a chance, especially the MC Dawn! Yeah, she can be kind of crybaby, but she does try her best to improve and protect those precious to her. But Dawn is not the only important character as so is the rest of the cast. I know my writing isn't top notch, but I'm striving to improve myself! This story also features commission art which can be found on my Instagram which is posted in the summary~!
The pacing of the story is very appropriate and interesting..................... Whether it's a novel or a webtoon, it will have a lot of potential❤
Interesting concept and a fascinating read. It’s got a lot in it. A rollercoaster of a read. Well done author. Well written and has potential. Not to mention: interesting lead.
Pretty nice story. I do love the FL. She is somewhat a mix of paranoid because of the situation she is in, but also still rationale. So, keep writing! Fingers crossed that you will have more readers in the future!
These are amazing chapters, can't wait to see this book get more popular, keep it up and keep writing a great job!!! can't wait to see more updates from you.
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
A very nice story with an interesting MC. I really like the interactions with the side characters and I feel how the author is entertained while writing it. I recommend keeping a stack of chapters to have more constant updates, I see a lot of promise to this story!