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I'm only on chapter 13 right now, but I'm giving it 6 stars! Simply great! In the midst of the stench of terrible works, this is a small star! Excellent work! This is the first time in the last thousand or one and a half books, (not counting the complete analysis of Russian classics of the 17-20th century) you have to google something! Wow!
better off just not picking this up. long explanations for every myth that only matters to those who care, awkward and weird dialogue/writing, and a really bland main character to push the narrative.
Contrived, long drawn, and boring. In an attempt to sound smarter than it is and more philosophical, it ends up sounding goofy and juvenile. If only the grammar wasn’t like it was written like it was trying too hard to use words the author doesn’t know
A fairly mediocre novel, personally I don't like the protagonist and that's why every time there is armor of the plot it makes me unpleasant
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it. the the story now dead because if not when the next chapter because I actually really like this fanfic since it is really rare to have a campione fanfic anywhere.
Simplemente grandioso, me gusta la idea, el crecimiento del mc también es bueno, la historia hasta ahora se ha formado un camino interesante y me hace desear saber cuándo saldrá la próxima publicación.
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Agradecido por darse el trabajo de traducir la novela :3 El original es : The Holy Right of a Comic Tiene 1094 capitulos por si alguien no puede esperar :D
Wait, I just realised something, this is actually a translation and not an original novel. I never even noticed, so at least u can read the mtl version even if its way worse.
Mais capítulos por favor 🙇🏻♂️ .................................................................. .................................................................. ..................................................................
i like the beginning but mc suddenly become edglord complaining about little things.........................................................
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i accualy like this story, and i find both the "worlds" and quality of writing, pretty good, what i lack and its honestly a little anoying, is we are never told where Roy is on the Scale the angle is 8-3 and scatcha is 7-4 but where is he, we have no referance for neither him nor the gods in campione so all this strong not strong is abslutly useless, since we have no reference. nor a true reference to hos growth.
Totally worth it... But to truly enjoy it, you need the patience to understand all the..Technicals info provided. The info used in this novel are well researched and author has managed to capture the essence of the original characters very well...
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One of the best fanfiction novels i have read. The lore, the philosophical discussions, and the character, and their interactions in this book is simply amazing. A solid 5 outta 5.
It had the potential to be good, however, the pacing can be debilitating in some respects, and the quality drops off in the fate arc, I don't know if it will get better, however, because the dialogue is much worse than it was in the campione arc.
This is good................................................................................................................................
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Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.
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Very good story. I think its good because it makes me anticipate the chapters, good story good background. Overall very good. In my top 5, even though you should never trust my lists.
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What am I supposed to do again? To understand all the weird stuff MC was saying in some chapter amd they keep talking about meaning of that this or just stuff in general when I just want to read the FF but they keep rambling on about Philosophical stuff… Was all that supposed to be serious and that I actually had to read it and stuff like that cause this FF in a nutshell if Confusion itself if u don’t context which I don’t. I didn’t get that far in this FF so I don’t know if this weird talk about philosphical thing Is still here and yes Ik it’s supposed to be devoted to somewhat around religion or something like that but the part where he rambles is so confusing and out of nowhere that I don’t understand if Im supposed to read that or not.
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I'm only on chapter 13 right now, but I'm giving it 6 stars! Simply great! In the midst of the stench of terrible works, this is a small star! Excellent work! This is the first time in the last thousand or one and a half books, (not counting the complete analysis of Russian classics of the 17-20th century) you have to google something! Wow!
better off just not picking this up. long explanations for every myth that only matters to those who care, awkward and weird dialogue/writing, and a really bland main character to push the narrative.
Contrived, long drawn, and boring. In an attempt to sound smarter than it is and more philosophical, it ends up sounding goofy and juvenile. If only the grammar wasn’t like it was written like it was trying too hard to use words the author doesn’t know
A fairly mediocre novel, personally I don't like the protagonist and that's why every time there is armor of the plot it makes me unpleasant
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it. the the story now dead because if not when the next chapter because I actually really like this fanfic since it is really rare to have a campione fanfic anywhere.
Simplemente grandioso, me gusta la idea, el crecimiento del mc también es bueno, la historia hasta ahora se ha formado un camino interesante y me hace desear saber cuándo saldrá la próxima publicación.
Membuka SPOILER Agradecido por darse el trabajo de traducir la novela :3 El original es : The Holy Right of a Comic Tiene 1094 capitulos por si alguien no puede esperar :D
Wait, I just realised something, this is actually a translation and not an original novel. I never even noticed, so at least u can read the mtl version even if its way worse.
Mais capítulos por favor 🙇🏻♂️ .................................................................. .................................................................. ..................................................................
i like the beginning but mc suddenly become edglord complaining about little things.........................................................
Membuka SPOILER i accualy like this story, and i find both the "worlds" and quality of writing, pretty good, what i lack and its honestly a little anoying, is we are never told where Roy is on the Scale the angle is 8-3 and scatcha is 7-4 but where is he, we have no referance for neither him nor the gods in campione so all this strong not strong is abslutly useless, since we have no reference. nor a true reference to hos growth.
Totally worth it... But to truly enjoy it, you need the patience to understand all the..Technicals info provided. The info used in this novel are well researched and author has managed to capture the essence of the original characters very well...
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One of the best fanfiction novels i have read. The lore, the philosophical discussions, and the character, and their interactions in this book is simply amazing. A solid 5 outta 5.
It had the potential to be good, however, the pacing can be debilitating in some respects, and the quality drops off in the fate arc, I don't know if it will get better, however, because the dialogue is much worse than it was in the campione arc.
This is good................................................................................................................................
noiceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍
Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.
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Very good story. I think its good because it makes me anticipate the chapters, good story good background. Overall very good. In my top 5, even though you should never trust my lists.
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What am I supposed to do again? To understand all the weird stuff MC was saying in some chapter amd they keep talking about meaning of that this or just stuff in general when I just want to read the FF but they keep rambling on about Philosophical stuff… Was all that supposed to be serious and that I actually had to read it and stuff like that cause this FF in a nutshell if Confusion itself if u don’t context which I don’t. I didn’t get that far in this FF so I don’t know if this weird talk about philosphical thing Is still here and yes Ik it’s supposed to be devoted to somewhat around religion or something like that but the part where he rambles is so confusing and out of nowhere that I don’t understand if Im supposed to read that or not.
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Arthur thank you for this masterpiece even though you dropped it 😭👍