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Very good in terms of quality and word count. Overall interesting and hopes to see more of this. In terms of writing quality, I see no problem in grammar or spelling. In story development, not much I can say about as it has just been 1 chapter. Character design is pretty decent and I see no reason to make qualms over it. Updating stability is unknown for now. And finally, world background Likewise I don't have much info as this like I said recently started but based on how the author write, it is likely to be very good. I see potential in this and have high expectations for this to succeed. Have a pleasant time whoever reads this.
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Very good in terms of quality and word count. Overall interesting and hopes to see more of this. In terms of writing quality, I see no problem in grammar or spelling. In story development, not much I can say about as it has just been 1 chapter. Character design is pretty decent and I see no reason to make qualms over it. Updating stability is unknown for now. And finally, world background Likewise I don't have much info as this like I said recently started but based on how the author write, it is likely to be very good. I see potential in this and have high expectations for this to succeed. Have a pleasant time whoever reads this.
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