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It's pretty good so far. I can't wait for more chapters. Now I dislike the system, especially how you need to acquire UP and how the cost of things in the shop is decided. For example, the MC could have 1,000,000 UP, but it could never be enough to get something good if the cost is scaled with the point he has.
Hello it's me the only commenter on your wattpad profile 💀 this is amazing so just wait for the rewrite, it's amazing so far I won't spoil much but know that the mc is totally heartless so be ready. Oh and somewhat complex plot which is always welcomed.
Okay I read till chapter 22 and this is my second review of this, first there are many confusing parts and changes to the rewrite version second I don't understand a thing about original and fake so about that please explain but it makes me wanna see the next chapter and please make interesting and lastly where's the SEGGGGS!!!!!??😑👹
so far the story is doing good pretty impressive to me because everything is well detailed, shocking actually, either way keep up the good work.
Me encanta, aunque no eh leído el original hasta ahora me a parecido muy bueno
As a shameless author, it is my responsibility to be extra shameless and give my Fanfic a 5 star. I really don't have much to say, but you can treat this review as a Question/Answer review. Anyway, I hope you enjoy the Fanfic of mine. Note: First World - Darling in the FranXX.
It's pretty good so far. I can't wait for more chapters. Now I dislike the system, especially how you need to acquire UP and how the cost of things in the shop is decided. For example, the MC could have 1,000,000 UP, but it could never be enough to get something good if the cost is scaled with the point he has.
Hello it's me the only commenter on your wattpad profile 💀 this is amazing so just wait for the rewrite, it's amazing so far I won't spoil much but know that the mc is totally heartless so be ready. Oh and somewhat complex plot which is always welcomed.
Okay I read till chapter 22 and this is my second review of this, first there are many confusing parts and changes to the rewrite version second I don't understand a thing about original and fake so about that please explain but it makes me wanna see the next chapter and please make interesting and lastly where's the SEGGGGS!!!!!??😑👹
so far the story is doing good pretty impressive to me because everything is well detailed, shocking actually, either way keep up the good work.
Me encanta, aunque no eh leído el original hasta ahora me a parecido muy bueno
As a shameless author, it is my responsibility to be extra shameless and give my Fanfic a 5 star. I really don't have much to say, but you can treat this review as a Question/Answer review. Anyway, I hope you enjoy the Fanfic of mine. Note: First World - Darling in the FranXX.