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Bab 425: Who are you going to make things difficult for

Can you guys read a/n? I need to make things clear once and for all.

Immediately, Ye Liu's face flushed to the tip of his side partitioned bangs like he has been thrown on a hot pan, with his hand that was raised to block his face, he sputtered, " What are you talking about? What .. when did I say that I missed her?" 

Ye Liu tried to carefully remember if he said something like that but then he couldn't think of anything, that was how he knew that he hasn't said anything like that, " You should not say lies like that Mi," with his face still flushed he continued somewhat angrily. " I mean I never once said that I miss Dong Dong, did I brother Li?" 

Shen Li raised his head in surprise, he didn't know why the ball dropped in his lap all of sudden but he still replied to what Ye Liu has asked him, " He is right, he never said that he misses Dong Dong." 


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Problems that readers have with this book:

1)Grammar: I have said earlier that English is not my first language in fact even my teachers didn't know much about grammar they just taught what they knew, I swear I didn't even know about the rules till now and I passed with flying colours with my broken grammar I am tryng to learn so please bear with me. I am trying my best to get it better but learning all the grammar of my schooling is not easy so give me time, okay?

2) not describing characters physical traits: chapter are short if I publish about physical traits than you all will complain more.,

3) not describing the world: I will change it and start describing it in detail please don't complain then.

4) spacing --- it's not my fault it happens on its own, I can do nothing abot it.

5) Yu Dong being too manly, if I change the character setting then she will be more submissive than dominant whch will change the entire setting of the world but I will make her feminine if that's what you all want

6) mers being too feminine they were raised as women!!!1 but I will try to lower their feminity I guess

7) story line being boring ---I am trying sobs I am trying!

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