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Tulis ulasanTengo que decir que esto fue muy bueno mi única queja que no es una queja simplemente hubiera preferido que hubiera sido de otra manera es que nunca vas a volver a juego de tronos
Great story so far, author has just started his second world at the time of this review. Love the first game of thrones arc, it was a unique take on a game of thrones ff. The ending was a little sad and I wonder if the author is going to tie the stories together or keep them as individual stories. Lyanna was a great wife and deserves more.
Membuka SPOILERThis is probably one of the best stories i have read on here, and already, i can't wait to see how it continues. The first arc itself was an amazing story, and now, reading the beginning of the second arc I can't wait to see where it goes.
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I really enjoyed it there were sometimes it wasn’t really to my liking but I enjoyed it nonetheless bit sad about the ending of the GOT arc but excited to see whats next
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Everything from the first to last is perfect. This is the most perfect G.O.T fanfictionever. The end was also good, not perfect, but good it would be perfect if he reunited with his wife in the next world.
In the beginning, the story was great. Great character development. Especially about his attitude. Though the only problem I have with it was He dies and leaves his wife and kids behind and goes to another world to start over again. You pretty much watch him live his life. Just for it to end and start all over again. And to me, that's just sad. I feel like the author is just gonna keep doing it like there. So if you don't like that, I wouldn't recommend reading it. Other than that, it's not that bad.
Membuka SPOILERRuined it for me when he caused the MC to go unconscious for a few days due to the shock of Lynna getting kidnapped. He could have rescued her if he didn't but of course the author forced it and made him unconscious for no reason other than to force the plot.
Membuka SPOILERNeutral review The beginning is really good, I loved the MC, how he ended up in Westeros, what he became ect But when Robert enters the story everything has changed, he has become arrogant, he forgot what world he is in, that this Robert is the one who killed Raegar Targaryen and laughs over the corpse of two children who are his cousins and an innocent woman without any remorse, it is a lord who has every right to kill him without any pretext, he should have stayed away from them . But above all he should have lied about his history, said that he is the second son of an average family, wherever his father is from Pentos and that his mother is Westerosis, just to explain his upbringing. In short an explanation that does not place it at the bottom of the food chain but also not so high, He could have been an independent knight, in short, the way of acting does not correspond to Westerosis and therefore, it cringes. The story is quite readable and we get caught up in the rhythm, I recommend reading it, I had to stop at chapter 17 because of the problems announced above but I know that it won't bother everyone
The story is very fast paced but it is also very good. I liked how the story flowed and the mc didn't suddenly change personalities to pander to others. One of the issues I have is with the system, in the beginning it seemed like he could get new skills from training but that was never really used after his first few skills.
Good story. it's a pity that he killed all the future opponents too quickly especialy denarys and her future dragons it would have been good for him to travel and learn magic to fight against dragons and white zombies (I forgot their name )
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Excelente, me gusta mucho, quiero que siga mas, es lo primero que reviso para saber si hay mas capitulos. Sigue adelante por favor🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
I will give five stars because this author is trustworthy enough, he finished a few fanfics now. I think he will finish this one too!
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this story is so good at first I thought it was going to be boring but it started to get better each chapter
love the book so far. I wish there are more chapters but so far it's been really good I'm curious how this story will go cause most books of ASOFAI just follow the plot but our dear author here said. "here is some of the plot now for the rest let's yeet the f**king thing"
This just became one of my favorites. Story was always good but the ending of first arc just made it amazing. It is like i paid an author money to make a fanfiction. It has one of my favorite genres 'Gamer' but also 'World Hopping' and also managed to make both work. Most Gamer stories make main characters to op to even enjoy the story and most World Hopping ones changes the setting like author changes clothes. This here managed to both make gamer in that specific flavor that is extremely good to read and also managed to make the setting feel like mc really lived in there. My only complain is upload frequency. 'I want moar' in caveman language. I wish author good luck in future and just wanted to say this is a good fanfiction.
Tengo que decir que esto fue muy bueno mi única queja que no es una queja simplemente hubiera preferido que hubiera sido de otra manera es que nunca vas a volver a juego de tronos
Great story so far, author has just started his second world at the time of this review. Love the first game of thrones arc, it was a unique take on a game of thrones ff. The ending was a little sad and I wonder if the author is going to tie the stories together or keep them as individual stories. Lyanna was a great wife and deserves more.
Membuka SPOILERThis is probably one of the best stories i have read on here, and already, i can't wait to see how it continues. The first arc itself was an amazing story, and now, reading the beginning of the second arc I can't wait to see where it goes.
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I really enjoyed it there were sometimes it wasn’t really to my liking but I enjoyed it nonetheless bit sad about the ending of the GOT arc but excited to see whats next
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Everything from the first to last is perfect. This is the most perfect G.O.T fanfictionever. The end was also good, not perfect, but good it would be perfect if he reunited with his wife in the next world.
In the beginning, the story was great. Great character development. Especially about his attitude. Though the only problem I have with it was He dies and leaves his wife and kids behind and goes to another world to start over again. You pretty much watch him live his life. Just for it to end and start all over again. And to me, that's just sad. I feel like the author is just gonna keep doing it like there. So if you don't like that, I wouldn't recommend reading it. Other than that, it's not that bad.
Membuka SPOILERRuined it for me when he caused the MC to go unconscious for a few days due to the shock of Lynna getting kidnapped. He could have rescued her if he didn't but of course the author forced it and made him unconscious for no reason other than to force the plot.
Membuka SPOILERNeutral review The beginning is really good, I loved the MC, how he ended up in Westeros, what he became ect But when Robert enters the story everything has changed, he has become arrogant, he forgot what world he is in, that this Robert is the one who killed Raegar Targaryen and laughs over the corpse of two children who are his cousins and an innocent woman without any remorse, it is a lord who has every right to kill him without any pretext, he should have stayed away from them . But above all he should have lied about his history, said that he is the second son of an average family, wherever his father is from Pentos and that his mother is Westerosis, just to explain his upbringing. In short an explanation that does not place it at the bottom of the food chain but also not so high, He could have been an independent knight, in short, the way of acting does not correspond to Westerosis and therefore, it cringes. The story is quite readable and we get caught up in the rhythm, I recommend reading it, I had to stop at chapter 17 because of the problems announced above but I know that it won't bother everyone
The story is very fast paced but it is also very good. I liked how the story flowed and the mc didn't suddenly change personalities to pander to others. One of the issues I have is with the system, in the beginning it seemed like he could get new skills from training but that was never really used after his first few skills.
Good story. it's a pity that he killed all the future opponents too quickly especialy denarys and her future dragons it would have been good for him to travel and learn magic to fight against dragons and white zombies (I forgot their name )
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I will give five stars because this author is trustworthy enough, he finished a few fanfics now. I think he will finish this one too!
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this story is so good at first I thought it was going to be boring but it started to get better each chapter
love the book so far. I wish there are more chapters but so far it's been really good I'm curious how this story will go cause most books of ASOFAI just follow the plot but our dear author here said. "here is some of the plot now for the rest let's yeet the f**king thing"
This just became one of my favorites. Story was always good but the ending of first arc just made it amazing. It is like i paid an author money to make a fanfiction. It has one of my favorite genres 'Gamer' but also 'World Hopping' and also managed to make both work. Most Gamer stories make main characters to op to even enjoy the story and most World Hopping ones changes the setting like author changes clothes. This here managed to both make gamer in that specific flavor that is extremely good to read and also managed to make the setting feel like mc really lived in there. My only complain is upload frequency. 'I want moar' in caveman language. I wish author good luck in future and just wanted to say this is a good fanfiction.