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My Parasite Skill System

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    Tomorrowceases

    hey let's shake hands Do please proceed to read the following if you want to further comprehend the concept of the book: How would I write the story of a ‘game’? I mean it for real. A real ‘game,’ with a real ‘player.’ Not just a game-like story as we all have had the occasion to read already – but something genuinely catching and transcendent (if I may put it that way). 1. Having a game is one thing. A game-like world, with game-like features and constructions – that’s one thing. 2. Having a player. A genuine player. A player that is just like us when we do actually go about playing some video game. In a few words, not only some player influenced by social conventions and values like you would get to see elsewhere, no. We’re talking about a real player, that lives outside of the world he plays in and isn’t compromised by any codes at all. A player free of his humanity. In a few words, then again, a cold-blooded yet very innocent killer (and player) – that’s another thing no one has; I have it. These two elements, reader, are what I present to you. The MC is a monster. And he is playing the Game. Which makes him the Player. And these two elements are what hasn’t ever been written about. I sell you the best. I dare say everything is perfect, or will somehow have to be; hence the five stars. Enjoy your reading.

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    Happy_Person_8656

    This is a great novel! The MC has a nice sense of humour, there is great character development and the story moves at a good pace. The world AND story building are commendable. Overall, wonderful work!

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    lilhawk

    A very unique story, and the power system is also an absolute breath of fresh air. It's a good read only problem being that it has far too little chapters

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    Lokthrys

    I’ve read a lot and few novels in this app are worthy enough to make me give a rating but the character design is different than most mainstream novels. Features a clueless mc that will stay clueless but will have enough knowledge not to die instantly. Arrogant but not to overbearing in a way that it’s amusing. The part in the story I got to was the end of the first hook (chap.70) and was glad I had read it as even though it’ the authors first work, the creativity outshines most of the authors in this app.

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    Tipota
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    Just a lot of procrastination and word dragging the author puts longer words and repeats himself to make it longer and waste time there will be times where the character would be talking to himself repeating the same things for chapters and it gets very annoying and irritating

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    Couth
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    how should i put this... its not exactly a bad story. compared to others this is way better. im dropping this book because it just seems lacking. the MC is ruthless. he doesn't even try to see if other humans were the same. he just killed them all when they tried helping it. its hard to understand what his objective is. ive read around 20 chapters. i know the author is new to this and all. and i respect his efforts in making a book with a more funny atmosphere. but this book is quite lacking. there isent much detail for the surroundings or the characters so i dont know what to visualize. im truly disappointed. but dont keep my opinion from reading this book! maybe you might see its value. and if you're the author reading this. see this as constructive criticism!

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    spectermerlin

    this is a great novel! Though what i could say is that at the beginning, it's quite hard to understand what is happening. The MC is also quite loveable, funny and cool (Description was correct that the Parasite was cool) This also reminds me of Tensura, the System which is similar to [ Great Sage ] and the Copy Skill to [ Predator ], and i quite like it! Weird how this isnt more popular yet. Good luck supreme author!

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    APPLE
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    Very good story. It has an interesting concept, cool characters, a good Story, daily updates, a nice Author, funny jokes and more. I really love it.

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    Aniki1

    A very unique story and the power system is also an absolute breath of fresh air. It's a lot better than the other parasite based novels I read before. I personally believe writing isn't perfect, but it's up there in quality. I think more chapters would be better, it's only been 15 days since it's been released.

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    leorichard2021_0515

    Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leorichard2021*@*outlook.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

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    Pixiepiu

    Inviting storyline with great writing. I read many System Novels but this is my first parasite-based, so I had a lot of fun reading it. A unique concept, this story has the potential to grow. Keep it up.

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    TurtleMaster6319

    i liked concept of this novel, it's something I haven't seen before and I like it, the Grammer is also great and I have to read more, keel up the good work

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    Proteety_Promi

    The writing style is great! And also I love the fact that there is almost no grammatical mistake. I mean, really, it's a bit turn-off for me if I see grammatical mistakes. So great work!

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    Jake_Aroling

    This was sort of a cool read. I was quite interested by how it progressed from the unique exposition with a parasite as a main character. Overall, really great idea for a LitRPG and I would recommend.

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    JJ_Prakoso

    Here are my honest thoughts about this novel based on what I read so far: World Building: The world-building in this world is so far okay, I meant there are some showing that the author provides and the system so far is fine. But, I do believe the author will expand more about the world in later chapters such as interesting places and many other things that in the future will come. Character: I do like the concept of the main character which is a parasite because for me is quite unique from other system novels and as a character so the parasite is quite likeable. However, I truly believe the author will give his character more fleshed out and upcoming development in the future to make the story more exciting to read Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel and thank you very much. Keep up the good work!!!

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    Akira_Monadelle

    The synopsis was long enough to be a chapter 😂 but the good thing is, it was at least entertaining. The author has a very wonderful way with words, while reading I felt as though I was in the novel watching everything unfold. There were no grammatical errors making this an extremely easy read. At some points I was a bit confused but I figured it out after. Overall, this novel was a very interesting read. I enjoyed it 100% and I highly recommend it if you're looking for an interesting plot. Thanks to this author I shall no longer underestimate small insects 😣 Color me terrified

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    Suroj_Sapayev

    I personally, was looking for something parasite-type story to read. Some fresh out of the oven. This particular story is very intriguing from the start. looking forward to new chapters and very good luck on a contest

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