Adopted Children

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Eva_Fingers

hello I'm Eva Fingers author of Adopted Children. and this is my first English novel, please give me suggestions and input so that I can develop even more, thank you

Ithe best story, i like this. Mesya the cute girl, with creepy familly. They is pyshicopat familly....... [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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its_naratime

first time making English story but the result is good??? oh dude.. 😭😭 think I have to learn more, it's a good story. the plot is so interesting!

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Risma_Devana

Amazing story' ... Interesting to read and makes me can't stop being curious.. I really like this work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Vienna_Gu

Mesya, her wish become come true but the facts are so different with her hopes. New scary life for Mesya, i can not imagine how the way she facing the murder in her new family.

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Pendi_Klana

bagus kak ceritanya. alur ceritanya jelas dan mudah untuk di pahami. semangat buat pengarangnya. aku tunggu bab bab selanjutnya, pokoknya segara yaaaa

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Ayu_Kristin

Very interesting story. I really like. waiting for the continuation bro[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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ema_helma

It's in English… I'll put it in the library and I'll read it. If you read the synopsis, it makes you curious. Basically, keep the author motivated🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

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Ay_wandira

At first I was only interested in reading it... it turned out to be an interesting and interesting story... recommended for friends who have not read to visit the novel... Thor's spirit... 💪💪💪

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Mufy_Mc

very interesting story'..... ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ i can read this story' bcs i love hororrrrrr and thrillerrrrrrrrr... love thissss so mucheeeee 😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️

wow ... very interesting and makes me curious. Stories with this genre are my favorite, keep the spirit for the author 💪💪💪💪💪💪 👍👍👍 Very recomended

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Razilee

bagusss ceritanya thorr[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Febyola_Manoppo

wow.....I Like it...Your Story is very touched my heart....so...continue the Chapter....I will put in my library.....good luck❤❤❤❤❤⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

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Angles_cute

Arumi's strange gaze depicts the soul of a psychopath. Be careful Mesya😌😌😌 This really interesting, 👍👍👍 Please next chapter soon🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

This verry recommended, for horor lovers. Me to, and the plot so verry Interinsting. Mesya is cute gilr verry poor. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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miss_rempong

This story verry interesting, i love thriller. I hope the Author soon to updet this story really excited 😍😍😍😍😍 Keep strong 💪💪💪💪 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

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lyns_marlyn

Wooow, a story full of mystery makes readers spoiled with various curiosity. Continue author, I Will continue to follow Mesya's story'. Spirit!!

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leorichard2021_0515

Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leozhan2020*@*gmail.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.