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Hace mucho que no veo un fanfic de One Punch Man, Este me encanta . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . ... . . . . . . .
Siempre quise ver un buen Fanfic de Saitama, gracias bro. .... .............................. .............................. .............................. ...........................
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Please update more The novel is so good . It is the best one punch man novel ever with the imagination so vivid and things saitama would have done are so great
Where is ken dedes.......????????????????????????????????????????????????????.................................................................................... ................................... ... .....
When I read that the MC transmigrated as Saitama then I thought that maybe it will be a good fanfic as the potential was huge. But the starting few chapters are the same and the MC even found a ring that turns things to gold so he won't even join the Hero Association where he might interact with others. But the last 7-8 chapters were the worst as there was no MC on it and instead Mosquito Girl's story was shown for some unfathomable reason out of nowhere. It was pike like the author didn't knew what to right ahead in the story.
Very good author-sama, it has potential keep it up π....................................................ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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..........................................................................................................................................|One of the best I've ever read
So slow........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I like the story ..............................................................................................................................................
this has a lot of potential... English/W. style - While they're not that polished, they are still readable unlike an MTL. Plot- It broke the canon timeline ,as in. he doesn't wanna burden himself with duty and out of obligation, he still hunts monsters thaf cause trouble but he's mouch more tolerant and forgiving. though that's probably because he's bored as saitama. character- a mixture of SI and Saitama, nothing much change other than taking a bit lighter on his hobbies .
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In around 7 chapter mosquito girl became Mc and in the first few there is almost np change from cannon. So pretty bad... Maybe it will pick up in the future. It has potential.
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Man, this is so good Lets go to another chapters and take my power stones![img=update] PSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPPSPS
Good novel . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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Interesting one punch man fanfic.ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
FF pretty good so far, hope it doesn't make it the same as the original and gives king all the credit. Also, make tatsumaki obedient. Thanks.
Havent Read it yet but is there lemons? JxjdndnckdmndndMdjdmsnsjxjxjddnndjdjddnbddbjdndbdjdnddbjdjdbddjdbdbsjx nvm ks nvm iron gdjsjnsbxkx Msm nzm
Hace mucho que no veo un fanfic de One Punch Man, Este me encanta . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . ... . . . . . . .
Siempre quise ver un buen Fanfic de Saitama, gracias bro. .... .............................. .............................. .............................. ...........................
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Please update more The novel is so good . It is the best one punch man novel ever with the imagination so vivid and things saitama would have done are so great
Where is ken dedes.......????????????????????????????????????????????????????.................................................................................... ................................... ... .....
When I read that the MC transmigrated as Saitama then I thought that maybe it will be a good fanfic as the potential was huge. But the starting few chapters are the same and the MC even found a ring that turns things to gold so he won't even join the Hero Association where he might interact with others. But the last 7-8 chapters were the worst as there was no MC on it and instead Mosquito Girl's story was shown for some unfathomable reason out of nowhere. It was pike like the author didn't knew what to right ahead in the story.
Very good author-sama, it has potential keep it up π....................................................ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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..........................................................................................................................................|One of the best I've ever read
So slow........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I like the story ..............................................................................................................................................
this has a lot of potential... English/W. style - While they're not that polished, they are still readable unlike an MTL. Plot- It broke the canon timeline ,as in. he doesn't wanna burden himself with duty and out of obligation, he still hunts monsters thaf cause trouble but he's mouch more tolerant and forgiving. though that's probably because he's bored as saitama. character- a mixture of SI and Saitama, nothing much change other than taking a bit lighter on his hobbies .
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In around 7 chapter mosquito girl became Mc and in the first few there is almost np change from cannon. So pretty bad... Maybe it will pick up in the future. It has potential.
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
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pokraΔovat !!!!!!!!pokraΔovat !!!!!!!!pokraΔovat !!!!!!!!pokraΔovat !!!!!!!!pokraΔovat !!!!!!!!pokraΔovat !!!!!!!!pokraΔovat !!!!!!!!pokraΔovat !!!!!!!!pokraΔovat !!!!!!!!pokraΔovat !!!!!!!!pokraΔovat !!!!!!!!pokraΔovat !!!!!!!!pokraΔovat !!!!!!!!pokraΔovat !!!!!!!!
Nice ...... . . .. . . . . . . .. . .................................................................................... ...... . . .. . . . . . . .. . .................................................................................... ...... . . .. . . . . . . .. . .................................................................................... ...... . . .. . . . . . . .. . ....................................................................................
Man, this is so good Lets go to another chapters and take my power stones![img=update] PSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPSPPSPS
Good novel . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.Harem.
Interesting one punch man fanfic.ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
FF pretty good so far, hope it doesn't make it the same as the original and gives king all the credit. Also, make tatsumaki obedient. Thanks.
Havent Read it yet but is there lemons? JxjdndnckdmndndMdjdmsnsjxjxjddnndjdjddnbddbjdndbdjdnddbjdjdbddjdbdbsjx nvm ks nvm iron gdjsjnsbxkx Msm nzm
can you continue thidsstory again it's gold you know....