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A very nice ff, with a good mc who does not r*pe women and rather respect them...An op mc....lemons are nice.....harem obviously....nice pacing....Definitely a worth read....Good work author-san...don't drop it pleaseeeeeeeeeeee.....
I don't know why but i feel like im reading the "in mha as madara" fanfic. Its like carbon copy. Its just in this fanfic mc surname is uzumaki not utchiha like from the other fanfic mc mother died when he's born and momo parents adopt him. Lols
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This is a copy of MHA with Madara’s power except the mc’s background and future I assume after MHA. I started reading it and kept feeling like I read the same thing before and it’s a 100% copy paste besides not being Madara.
Likes to read as it explained everything clearly even every girls of MC's are given proper time until now....Keep updat[img=coins][img=coins]ing.
- Writing quality: I've got no problem with it; the grammar is good, and it isn't only an enormous paragraph, so it's pretty easy to read. Although the 'foreshadowing' is a turn-off, I understand that it is the way the author writes. - Updating stability: No problem here as the author release quite a lot of chapters rapidly. - Story development: An interesting take of the MHA world with Madara's power. I'm only slightly sad that the author didn't go more into the uses of chakra as we didn't see big jutsus to show off, haha, and we have only seen about two fire ninjutsu, Chidori, Rasengan and susano. The others are told about but not shown, which I find a pity. - Character design: The MC, his girlfriends and his parents are 'developed slightly more than others as others are almost not mentioned except for a few lines. - World Background Well, it's a multiverse story, and he's currently in the MHA world, so there's not much background to write on as we almost all know about MHA if we read this. Finally, thanks for the chapters. I love reading it. As for the character and the jutsus, well, it's only my preference, but I also understand that it is useless to spend time writing on characters who will not be mentioned again the moment he leaves that world. For jutsus well, it will depend on his strength in the future. Overall, I can't wait for the next chapter :) Keep up the great work!
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it's a really good novel so far and the Mystery behind his past life is really interesting and how he slowly gets his powers back and so far with the har*m there has not been any problem whatsoever so my opinion is you should try and read it and see for yourself because I love it so far😁👍🏼
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the beginning is similar to a novel call In MHA With Madara’s powers [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
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Very Good writing and giving updates daily. I like this version of fanfiction but try not to write foreshadow except it everything is fine.....and I also guessed the name of the author that you wanted to revenge..... Mutant Ascension? didn't it? correct me if I'm wrong..That author also got some reviews like copying from others... Anyways I like your story and keep updating regularly.😍💪
Needs editing or an editor badly. It's very difficult to read because of the poor syntax and formatting. The writing even if you ignore that is very on the nose. Breaking the show don't tell golden rule. Things like: "Little did the protagonist know. . ." No. Just foreshadow. Could not get into it. If it ever changes I'll come back and change my review.
Hey Guys! Help me here by commenting your views about my story.....Also I am an inexperience author, there will be many grammar mistakes...so help me correct it.... Thank You....😉😍
I'm not gonna say much or judge yall, but why is there harem in every fanfic, don't you guys get tired ot this disgusting stuff, harem this harem dat like every fanfic must have harem in them
A very nice ff, with a good mc who does not r*pe women and rather respect them...An op mc....lemons are nice.....harem obviously....nice pacing....Definitely a worth read....Good work author-san...don't drop it pleaseeeeeeeeeeee.....
I don't know why but i feel like im reading the "in mha as madara" fanfic. Its like carbon copy. Its just in this fanfic mc surname is uzumaki not utchiha like from the other fanfic mc mother died when he's born and momo parents adopt him. Lols
More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More
Membuka SPOILER This is a copy of MHA with Madara’s power except the mc’s background and future I assume after MHA. I started reading it and kept feeling like I read the same thing before and it’s a 100% copy paste besides not being Madara.
Likes to read as it explained everything clearly even every girls of MC's are given proper time until now....Keep updat[img=coins][img=coins]ing.
- Writing quality: I've got no problem with it; the grammar is good, and it isn't only an enormous paragraph, so it's pretty easy to read. Although the 'foreshadowing' is a turn-off, I understand that it is the way the author writes. - Updating stability: No problem here as the author release quite a lot of chapters rapidly. - Story development: An interesting take of the MHA world with Madara's power. I'm only slightly sad that the author didn't go more into the uses of chakra as we didn't see big jutsus to show off, haha, and we have only seen about two fire ninjutsu, Chidori, Rasengan and susano. The others are told about but not shown, which I find a pity. - Character design: The MC, his girlfriends and his parents are 'developed slightly more than others as others are almost not mentioned except for a few lines. - World Background Well, it's a multiverse story, and he's currently in the MHA world, so there's not much background to write on as we almost all know about MHA if we read this. Finally, thanks for the chapters. I love reading it. As for the character and the jutsus, well, it's only my preference, but I also understand that it is useless to spend time writing on characters who will not be mentioned again the moment he leaves that world. For jutsus well, it will depend on his strength in the future. Overall, I can't wait for the next chapter :) Keep up the great work!
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it's a really good novel so far and the Mystery behind his past life is really interesting and how he slowly gets his powers back and so far with the har*m there has not been any problem whatsoever so my opinion is you should try and read it and see for yourself because I love it so far😁👍🏼
Membuka SPOILER the beginning is similar to a novel call In MHA With Madara’s powers [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
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Very Good writing and giving updates daily. I like this version of fanfiction but try not to write foreshadow except it everything is fine.....and I also guessed the name of the author that you wanted to revenge..... Mutant Ascension? didn't it? correct me if I'm wrong..That author also got some reviews like copying from others... Anyways I like your story and keep updating regularly.😍💪
Needs editing or an editor badly. It's very difficult to read because of the poor syntax and formatting. The writing even if you ignore that is very on the nose. Breaking the show don't tell golden rule. Things like: "Little did the protagonist know. . ." No. Just foreshadow. Could not get into it. If it ever changes I'll come back and change my review.
Hey Guys! Help me here by commenting your views about my story.....Also I am an inexperience author, there will be many grammar mistakes...so help me correct it.... Thank You....😉😍
I'm not gonna say much or judge yall, but why is there harem in every fanfic, don't you guys get tired ot this disgusting stuff, harem this harem dat like every fanfic must have harem in them