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Doubt this will make you pick this story up again but I hope you do know that hyperion and ikaris are different characters Anyways,hope you start another mcu fic in the near future(this site needs them)
this was made to POWER UP RATING , because some people wanted to lower it,,, and also to ask,.............. would you ever continue this story...... there is so much potential......
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The idea seems pretty interesting. It's not written in the conventional way. Sad to see another work get thrown away but not every project makes it to where it meets a satisfying end in this world.
One of the best I've ever read, it has a no-nonsense story and still doesn't lose readers' interest......................................................
Another book on the must read list. The 1st chapter is so left up mentally for your heart you just gotta keep reading. The story is amazing and well written. Just wish there was more of it like always. Hopefully authorson can keep it going.
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I'm going through chapter one and I came back here before I finished reading to say how tired I am of the beginnings where they make the protagonist see the protagonist as a pro, the best, the maximum of the maximum that made the maximum sacrifice for the world and then the fantastic entity on duty gives him super praise or is the only one for something mildly stupid or not very credible as it is the only one who escaped his death destined for shooting ... as if suicide did not exist. Anyway, this beginning is from my perspective of the recent generic animes, a Prota Pro for no reason, because I don't know why, to later draw convenient memories at convenient times. Well ... this is a strike, so I will continue reading it, skipping the fight scene for the protagonist of the higher entities and blabla I'm going to raise or lower stars depending on the content. ... I'm going for 5 and honestly I don't like it. I mean, at the beginning of 5. The protagonist is going to be a nonsensical good-natured and I saw a lot of fanfics like that, therefore, I quit. I mean, I understand those characters who want to be heroes, but this one is not understood. There are other factors but I honestly don't think that part of my point of view matters. It's just a matter of I've seen the same theme, sometimes being ruined. I will leave the four stars, since I can not find ... well, inconsistencies beyond the beginning, but the initials are normally like that. The rest of the All; I have no knowledge about it, therefore, I cannot judge something about which I do not know.
Love the story so far. I like MC's personality, even though some don't, but I disagree with them. I think the MC's personality fits the marvel universe in general, because he has that hero mindset, but some edgy kids might complain, but author, you should just ignore them. The only thing I had problem with was the dialogue, it was hard to get used to it because there were like 3 and 4 different dialogues, but all of them belonged to same person, so that needed some time to get used to it, but otherwise everything was good. Keep it up.
good story and good concept, typical mc hero, in my opinion the problem with the story is that the chapters are too much to give an accurate judgment in various pieces of the story, there are too many time jumps on how the character interacts and progresses, none progression of the character in the story after a long time (the problem is that the author has made the time jumps and I think he has forgotten the time spent in the world) reading the story we see that there is continuity and the author knows mcu and tries to put in some comics but the character character seems too naive after he has spent a lifetime (albeit not complete) and enough time in the marvel world to make him realize that the world is complicated, mc is overwhelmed and has darkseid difference does not have all of its powers but is limited in various ways (such as mastering its powers, losing various powers and more) and does not need armor to control and contain omega power, it has fewer weaknesses than darkseid and is more weaker than the original looks darker seid in comics, mc is too compassionate and too many problems like too much guilt for owning the body, looking after family just because they are related and various things, mc is not very strong but tries to interact with the plot even when he has been told not to when he is weak. in short, nice story nice concept, but too many time jumps and long chapters, little progression of the character and too many psychological problems for mc, the story also has some insertion of the marvel series so it's not just that of the movie
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I'm a little disappointed that it's almost a word for word rewrite of the Hyperion fic just with a different character (at least it Is around where I'm up to in the fic). besides that it's good and keep it up
It's early for me to give a good review with only 7 chapters but so far I like it. Strong writing with a robust marvel world to dive into and a mc that I can understand and like. Really I'm just excited to see where you take it. Keep up the great work.
7 chapters in and I can already see that this fanfic will be a masterpiece. My only issue is that the updates takes too slooow. Other than that keep up the good work!
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I lament at the scarcity nowadays on this site of good, thought-out stories. That said, this fic is one of the few; of the 6 chapters out so far, all were released within a single day, showing the author's ability to either make up incredibly detailed plotlines within a single session, or to show the restraint nessesary to making a coherent, long-term plan. Both of which are incredible skills to have. Alongside that, the setting of the story itself is as original as a fan-fic can get. as far as I know, there are no similar fics with this kind of match up. Another good point is the MC. He is able to be related to, or at least empathized with. as observed by the Ancient One, he is broken inside due to his experience with loss and career as a soldier, but he is able to move on. He is selfish in his actions, but almost always finds a way to benefit someone other than himself. And still there is more! The writing is amazing compared to most other fics on Webnovel. I have already discussed the author's ability to actually plan a coherent story, so I will instead focus on the grammar, which is just as good. There are very few minor punctuation mistakes and no major errors such as misspelled or repeated words. I look forward to new updates and give my heartfelt recommendation to anyone looking for a good read.
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i konow nothing of the dc universe, should i read this ? ....................................................................................
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Me encanta mucho como va llendo la historia, es divertida y emocionante al menos desde mi perspectiva espero el proximo capitulo y autor sama cuales van a ser las waifusss
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Doubt this will make you pick this story up again but I hope you do know that hyperion and ikaris are different characters Anyways,hope you start another mcu fic in the near future(this site needs them)
this was made to POWER UP RATING , because some people wanted to lower it,,, and also to ask,.............. would you ever continue this story...... there is so much potential......
cette critique a pour but de baisser la note puisque annulé, inutil de faire rever les gens.cette critique a pour but de baisser la note puisque annulé, inutil de faire rever les gens.
The idea seems pretty interesting. It's not written in the conventional way. Sad to see another work get thrown away but not every project makes it to where it meets a satisfying end in this world.
One of the best I've ever read, it has a no-nonsense story and still doesn't lose readers' interest......................................................
Another book on the must read list. The 1st chapter is so left up mentally for your heart you just gotta keep reading. The story is amazing and well written. Just wish there was more of it like always. Hopefully authorson can keep it going.
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I'm going through chapter one and I came back here before I finished reading to say how tired I am of the beginnings where they make the protagonist see the protagonist as a pro, the best, the maximum of the maximum that made the maximum sacrifice for the world and then the fantastic entity on duty gives him super praise or is the only one for something mildly stupid or not very credible as it is the only one who escaped his death destined for shooting ... as if suicide did not exist. Anyway, this beginning is from my perspective of the recent generic animes, a Prota Pro for no reason, because I don't know why, to later draw convenient memories at convenient times. Well ... this is a strike, so I will continue reading it, skipping the fight scene for the protagonist of the higher entities and blabla I'm going to raise or lower stars depending on the content. ... I'm going for 5 and honestly I don't like it. I mean, at the beginning of 5. The protagonist is going to be a nonsensical good-natured and I saw a lot of fanfics like that, therefore, I quit. I mean, I understand those characters who want to be heroes, but this one is not understood. There are other factors but I honestly don't think that part of my point of view matters. It's just a matter of I've seen the same theme, sometimes being ruined. I will leave the four stars, since I can not find ... well, inconsistencies beyond the beginning, but the initials are normally like that. The rest of the All; I have no knowledge about it, therefore, I cannot judge something about which I do not know.
Love the story so far. I like MC's personality, even though some don't, but I disagree with them. I think the MC's personality fits the marvel universe in general, because he has that hero mindset, but some edgy kids might complain, but author, you should just ignore them. The only thing I had problem with was the dialogue, it was hard to get used to it because there were like 3 and 4 different dialogues, but all of them belonged to same person, so that needed some time to get used to it, but otherwise everything was good. Keep it up.
good story and good concept, typical mc hero, in my opinion the problem with the story is that the chapters are too much to give an accurate judgment in various pieces of the story, there are too many time jumps on how the character interacts and progresses, none progression of the character in the story after a long time (the problem is that the author has made the time jumps and I think he has forgotten the time spent in the world) reading the story we see that there is continuity and the author knows mcu and tries to put in some comics but the character character seems too naive after he has spent a lifetime (albeit not complete) and enough time in the marvel world to make him realize that the world is complicated, mc is overwhelmed and has darkseid difference does not have all of its powers but is limited in various ways (such as mastering its powers, losing various powers and more) and does not need armor to control and contain omega power, it has fewer weaknesses than darkseid and is more weaker than the original looks darker seid in comics, mc is too compassionate and too many problems like too much guilt for owning the body, looking after family just because they are related and various things, mc is not very strong but tries to interact with the plot even when he has been told not to when he is weak. in short, nice story nice concept, but too many time jumps and long chapters, little progression of the character and too many psychological problems for mc, the story also has some insertion of the marvel series so it's not just that of the movie
Membuka SPOILER I'm a little disappointed that it's almost a word for word rewrite of the Hyperion fic just with a different character (at least it Is around where I'm up to in the fic). besides that it's good and keep it up
It's early for me to give a good review with only 7 chapters but so far I like it. Strong writing with a robust marvel world to dive into and a mc that I can understand and like. Really I'm just excited to see where you take it. Keep up the great work.
7 chapters in and I can already see that this fanfic will be a masterpiece. My only issue is that the updates takes too slooow. Other than that keep up the good work!
Happy New Year!!!!!!! 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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I lament at the scarcity nowadays on this site of good, thought-out stories. That said, this fic is one of the few; of the 6 chapters out so far, all were released within a single day, showing the author's ability to either make up incredibly detailed plotlines within a single session, or to show the restraint nessesary to making a coherent, long-term plan. Both of which are incredible skills to have. Alongside that, the setting of the story itself is as original as a fan-fic can get. as far as I know, there are no similar fics with this kind of match up. Another good point is the MC. He is able to be related to, or at least empathized with. as observed by the Ancient One, he is broken inside due to his experience with loss and career as a soldier, but he is able to move on. He is selfish in his actions, but almost always finds a way to benefit someone other than himself. And still there is more! The writing is amazing compared to most other fics on Webnovel. I have already discussed the author's ability to actually plan a coherent story, so I will instead focus on the grammar, which is just as good. There are very few minor punctuation mistakes and no major errors such as misspelled or repeated words. I look forward to new updates and give my heartfelt recommendation to anyone looking for a good read.
Membuka SPOILER i konow nothing of the dc universe, should i read this ? ....................................................................................
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Me encanta mucho como va llendo la historia, es divertida y emocionante al menos desde mi perspectiva espero el proximo capitulo y autor sama cuales van a ser las waifusss
Hello man! Do you have a great story, when is the sequel planned?👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✌👍👍👍👍✌✌✌👍✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌?👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✌👍👍👍👍✌✌✌👍✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌?👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✌👍👍👍👍✌✌✌👍✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌✌
Great novel. hello .... .. ............,..,,.,.,.,..,.,.,,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,
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