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Great read. Just a really great read. I loved it. wordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswords
The constant grammar mistakes make this not worth the reading. .............................................................................
Its a huge mess tbh. some of the worst grammar known to mankind, (the kind where you can still read it but you have to work to understand it, opposed to the kind you just cant read which in my opinion is much better), bad developement, bad character design just overall bad. I read this cause of the good rating, and I havent checked other reviews yet but im 100% that all the 5 star reviews are just EXP or some other spam.
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I'm liking this novel it's been 3 days since last update tho pls dont tell it me its cancelled. ............................................
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Basically What if Wolverine was smart and Sabertooth was a girl. Is good. Some editing might be needed, but is readable as is. Looking forward to more.
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The book has a lot of potential but it also has a few large flaws. Which are 1. bad grammer, 2. wrong names, 3. confusing moments with characters and 4. problems telling who's who in a conversation.
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this novel is a gem. but it's not polished enough. u need an editor asap. because the grammer is giving a head ache to me even though I love this book.
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This got me excited as this is a Wolverine ff with 4.6 ratings so I thought this would be good. But it’s actually sooo badd!! The grammar, speech, and plot is terrible!!! This got me excited as this is a Wolverine ff with 4.6 ratings so I thought this would be good. But it’s actually sooo badd!! The grammar, speech, and plot is terrible!!! This got me excited as this is a Wolverine ff with 4.6 ratings so I thought this would be good. But it’s actually sooo badd!! The grammar, speech, and plot is terrible!!!
Great read. Just a really great read. I loved it. wordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswords
The constant grammar mistakes make this not worth the reading. .............................................................................
Its a huge mess tbh. some of the worst grammar known to mankind, (the kind where you can still read it but you have to work to understand it, opposed to the kind you just cant read which in my opinion is much better), bad developement, bad character design just overall bad. I read this cause of the good rating, and I havent checked other reviews yet but im 100% that all the 5 star reviews are just EXP or some other spam.
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I'm liking this novel it's been 3 days since last update tho pls dont tell it me its cancelled. ............................................
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(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(人 •͈ᴗ•͈)(☆▽☆)(☆▽☆)(☆▽☆)(☆▽☆)(☆▽☆)
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Basically What if Wolverine was smart and Sabertooth was a girl. Is good. Some editing might be needed, but is readable as is. Looking forward to more.
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The book has a lot of potential but it also has a few large flaws. Which are 1. bad grammer, 2. wrong names, 3. confusing moments with characters and 4. problems telling who's who in a conversation.
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this novel is a gem. but it's not polished enough. u need an editor asap. because the grammer is giving a head ache to me even though I love this book.
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This got me excited as this is a Wolverine ff with 4.6 ratings so I thought this would be good. But it’s actually sooo badd!! The grammar, speech, and plot is terrible!!! This got me excited as this is a Wolverine ff with 4.6 ratings so I thought this would be good. But it’s actually sooo badd!! The grammar, speech, and plot is terrible!!! This got me excited as this is a Wolverine ff with 4.6 ratings so I thought this would be good. But it’s actually sooo badd!! The grammar, speech, and plot is terrible!!!