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I like reading on pet beasts and cheatcodes!! ๐ฌ So hoping this book to be picked ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐ฆพ๐ฆพ๐ฆพ๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ผ๐๐ป๐๐ป
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story without context _______________________________________________________________=__=__=__=_____=_=_=_=_==_=__=_=__=_==_=__=_==_____=__=__=_=_=_:__=__:_?__?:_________:__=__=__=_
Membuka SPOILER
Although the the system isnt too pervertedly possessing type but the way the beasts talk , think , This Is just ridiculously stupid ๐
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Great potential.. keep it up!!!.. the plot story of the beast who not different from human.. gave us.. a special taste in this story.. Waiting for another chapter.. wish you could keep the great work..
this is the great novel actually,hope you can continue write this novel brother ๐ you're talented and awesome โฃ๏ธ๐๐๐ hope i become a writer too
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a great novel............. it has a lot of potential...................................................................................................
i am too disappointed mmc os too braindead and story have much more potential to become a better work hufffff what a waste . . . . . . . . . . .
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what is this?Every beast here has EQ equal to humans!Even wolves in this novel longs for familial love.Even being a bad beast in this novel is by bullying girls.
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Translation quality isn't bad at all and since its trial read, It will most likely have a stable update in groups of 5 chapters. It is nothing new as we have had pet trainer novels before however it is a good read.
Needs edited by a human again. Too many wrong pronouns which at some points were 2 or 3 different wrong pronouns per sentence severely breaking up my reading enjoyment and even confusing me as to who was supposed to be saying what. I like the story though! Keep it up!
The story is great and really entertaining. I am quite glad that MC first beast is not something with a divine beast bloodline. Looking forward to the development of this story. I sincerely hope that it would be picked and published soon.
Membuka SPOILER ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
This is pretty dope guys, please let there be more because I found the raw it's not bad.. ................... ................................. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
First 5 chapters review and some spoilers โน๏ธโน๏ธ Read too many Chinese novel and similar plot... Power system - N/A Worldbuilding - N/A Character - 1/10 Started the novel with good feeling with high hope. Start of the novel was good, kept me interested. First interaction Still manage to keep my attention. Boom Mob characters introduced and started dissing MC (Iโm like cmon focus on the MC and his inner thought and actions instead of this bs but no~) More pointless dialogue then โyour pet only have 1 skillโ (something like that) Here comes the MC with the tipical CN MC move โI will prove you wrongโ. Started showing off (suppose to be face slapping but all I can think of is โwhat is the point of this, u are here to test out your pet power so do it and leaveโ) Destroyed the machine (MC is poor and doesnโt have enough money to pay for the machine) Couldnโt continue reading
Suprisingly the translation quality is pretty good but thats pretty much everything praiseworthy for this novel. I read 5 chapters and the story is about a pet trainer with a system? (the translation calls it that) which is basicly only a translator that lets it hear the thoughts of pets and gives it missions/ rewards to for basic quest The story is pretty basic but boring because the mc has no goals/ resolutions besides becoming a pet trainer (not even something cliche as getting stronger since his parents died mysteriously) The character design? whats that? can you eat it? It doesnt describe the mc at all and only gave a basic description of the female childhood friend (fair, tail and heroic with a ponytail..) World background: Who needs that if you can have faceslaps and gender bias instead.. The female childhood friend and a man called his pet lousy and he is completely enraged at the guy and didnt even care about his friend saying the same. Hes also "forced" to faceslap at a training center because no one believes his "lousy pet" to be strong and everyone needs to comment how bad he is. The only thing (its not even mentioned properly) is that pets need 5 stars to get to the next stage
Membuka SPOILER
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THE NOVEL RAW IS ๅพกๅ ฝ๏ผๆ่ฝๅฌๅฐๅ ฝๅฎ ็ๅฟๅฃฐ . I HAVEN'T READ IT SO IDK . I'M GOING TO START SO CHAOO
Had good potential, unfortunately it is in the we novel trash bag now. Hope it continues updating tbh though... DO NOT READ IF THERE ARE ONLY 40 CHAPTERS POSTED AS IT IS GIVEN UP ON.
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Quite fun. Hopefully it gets pick up this year. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I like reading on pet beasts and cheatcodes!! ๐ฌ So hoping this book to be picked ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐๐ผ๐ฆพ๐ฆพ๐ฆพ๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ป๐๐ผ๐๐ป๐๐ป
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story without context _______________________________________________________________=__=__=__=_____=_=_=_=_==_=__=_=__=_==_=__=_==_____=__=__=_=_=_:__=__:_?__?:_________:__=__=__=_
Membuka SPOILER Although the the system isnt too pervertedly possessing type but the way the beasts talk , think , This Is just ridiculously stupid ๐
๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Great potential.. keep it up!!!.. the plot story of the beast who not different from human.. gave us.. a special taste in this story.. Waiting for another chapter.. wish you could keep the great work..
this is the great novel actually,hope you can continue write this novel brother ๐ you're talented and awesome โฃ๏ธ๐๐๐ hope i become a writer too
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a great novel............. it has a lot of potential...................................................................................................
i am too disappointed mmc os too braindead and story have much more potential to become a better work hufffff what a waste . . . . . . . . . . .
๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
what is this?Every beast here has EQ equal to humans!Even wolves in this novel longs for familial love.Even being a bad beast in this novel is by bullying girls.
๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
Translation quality isn't bad at all and since its trial read, It will most likely have a stable update in groups of 5 chapters. It is nothing new as we have had pet trainer novels before however it is a good read.
Needs edited by a human again. Too many wrong pronouns which at some points were 2 or 3 different wrong pronouns per sentence severely breaking up my reading enjoyment and even confusing me as to who was supposed to be saying what. I like the story though! Keep it up!
The story is great and really entertaining. I am quite glad that MC first beast is not something with a divine beast bloodline. Looking forward to the development of this story. I sincerely hope that it would be picked and published soon.
Membuka SPOILER ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
This is pretty dope guys, please let there be more because I found the raw it's not bad.. ................... ................................. ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
First 5 chapters review and some spoilers โน๏ธโน๏ธ Read too many Chinese novel and similar plot... Power system - N/A Worldbuilding - N/A Character - 1/10 Started the novel with good feeling with high hope. Start of the novel was good, kept me interested. First interaction Still manage to keep my attention. Boom Mob characters introduced and started dissing MC (Iโm like cmon focus on the MC and his inner thought and actions instead of this bs but no~) More pointless dialogue then โyour pet only have 1 skillโ (something like that) Here comes the MC with the tipical CN MC move โI will prove you wrongโ. Started showing off (suppose to be face slapping but all I can think of is โwhat is the point of this, u are here to test out your pet power so do it and leaveโ) Destroyed the machine (MC is poor and doesnโt have enough money to pay for the machine) Couldnโt continue reading
Suprisingly the translation quality is pretty good but thats pretty much everything praiseworthy for this novel. I read 5 chapters and the story is about a pet trainer with a system? (the translation calls it that) which is basicly only a translator that lets it hear the thoughts of pets and gives it missions/ rewards to for basic quest The story is pretty basic but boring because the mc has no goals/ resolutions besides becoming a pet trainer (not even something cliche as getting stronger since his parents died mysteriously) The character design? whats that? can you eat it? It doesnt describe the mc at all and only gave a basic description of the female childhood friend (fair, tail and heroic with a ponytail..) World background: Who needs that if you can have faceslaps and gender bias instead.. The female childhood friend and a man called his pet lousy and he is completely enraged at the guy and didnt even care about his friend saying the same. Hes also "forced" to faceslap at a training center because no one believes his "lousy pet" to be strong and everyone needs to comment how bad he is. The only thing (its not even mentioned properly) is that pets need 5 stars to get to the next stage
Membuka SPOILER yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes
THE NOVEL RAW IS ๅพกๅ ฝ๏ผๆ่ฝๅฌๅฐๅ ฝๅฎ ็ๅฟๅฃฐ . I HAVEN'T READ IT SO IDK . I'M GOING TO START SO CHAOO
Had good potential, unfortunately it is in the we novel trash bag now. Hope it continues updating tbh though... DO NOT READ IF THERE ARE ONLY 40 CHAPTERS POSTED AS IT IS GIVEN UP ON.