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Hello guys, author here. So I'll giving my own book a 5 star review. There is also few things I wants tell before you start reading, this story don't have any harem or any intimate scenes. The story progress is slowly until chapter 70/80. After that the stroy speed up. and another thing Yes I have made many Grammer error but it gradually decreases as I learn more. And Yes if you feel dropping at some point don't forget to comment the reason behind you dropping so I can easily avoid those mistake.
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good luck to author. The story is quite thrilling. I love how author depicted scenes uwu.What would happen to Noah...That is kinda thrilling.
Here is my thought about this story, the worldbuilding in this book so far it's okay or I can say fine. Yes, I can feel this is a magic novel and I can also feel the cultivation theme. But, I believe the author can make further exploitation on the world such as the environment, the detailed, or even the atmosphere. As for the character, so far they are quite fine and have a good startup especially the Mc Noah. Noah for now is pretty okay...at least, I mean yes a struggle in his life. However, I suggest the author to give more context about his past in the future or even more reactionary towards he lived in for making him more interesting to be rooted for. Overall, that's all I can so for now with this novel and thank you very much. Keep up the good work!!!
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I really loved reading this. Your imagination and description is so wonderful. I only came across one issue abd you've already mentioned it yourself, the grammatical errors. Except from that, you've really done a brilliant job author! Keep it up 🙂
Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.
Hello guys, author here. So I'll giving my own book a 5 star review. There is also few things I wants tell before you start reading, this story don't have any harem or any intimate scenes. The story progress is slowly until chapter 70/80. After that the stroy speed up. and another thing Yes I have made many Grammer error but it gradually decreases as I learn more. And Yes if you feel dropping at some point don't forget to comment the reason behind you dropping so I can easily avoid those mistake.
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good luck to author. The story is quite thrilling. I love how author depicted scenes uwu.What would happen to Noah...That is kinda thrilling.
Here is my thought about this story, the worldbuilding in this book so far it's okay or I can say fine. Yes, I can feel this is a magic novel and I can also feel the cultivation theme. But, I believe the author can make further exploitation on the world such as the environment, the detailed, or even the atmosphere. As for the character, so far they are quite fine and have a good startup especially the Mc Noah. Noah for now is pretty okay...at least, I mean yes a struggle in his life. However, I suggest the author to give more context about his past in the future or even more reactionary towards he lived in for making him more interesting to be rooted for. Overall, that's all I can so for now with this novel and thank you very much. Keep up the good work!!!
Membuka SPOILER I really loved reading this. Your imagination and description is so wonderful. I only came across one issue abd you've already mentioned it yourself, the grammatical errors. Except from that, you've really done a brilliant job author! Keep it up 🙂
Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.