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I like this book a lot.Thanks for the work Author. _________________________________ _________________________________ _________________________________ โ-
The author has made an extremely creative story.That allows you to kind of know the surrounding characters better.He also is perfectly creating what we call a fan fic.So thanks to the author and his inspirations or sources.
I find this fan fiction amazing and I hope that when you have time you will come back to it and update it more as it's one of few good fan fics i have found I wish you the best
interesting use of multiple characters and good use of mashups of different fictions. love the direction its heading so far and even tho the mc is super powerful I like how the enemies are being made powerful enough to fight him on equal terms
This is honestly my first review on WN and I can say that this novel is worth it. You rarely get any Disney novels on this site but even with the grammar errors which he has addressed, this is one of the best novels out there. Ignore those hate comments and give this book a try, you might just fall in love with it they way I did.
I love this book and was afraid that it was forgotten!! I'm glad you're back and look forward to the continuation of it!๐๐๐ Hope you pass your collage stuff!
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Good novel. โฆ. . . . . . . . โฆ . โฆ โฆ . . .. .. . . . . .. .. . .. . . . . . . .. .. . . . .. .. . . .. . .. โฆ. . . . . .. โฆ .. . . .. . . . .
A good read..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I love the choices of world and powers, but, the grammatical is not so good but is legibly .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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the story as a whole is decent, the biggest problem is the grammer. its like the author doesnt even read what hes publishing. i recommend using grammerly to fix this as its almost completely unreadable in a lot of places.
i'v never seen a fanfic with such worlds i love it. no joke i did not sleep at all yesterday for read that. plz more chapter (ใคโงฯโง)ใค แห ๊ ห แ
I grew up on these movies that you wrote on so far it makes me happy seeing somebody still enjoys them๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
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I like the story ........................................................................................................................................................................
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Curti d+. Histรณria abrange vรกrias coisas e vc comeรงa a se pergunta como vai ser os prรณximos cap. Excelente trabalho, ansioso para os prรณximos
Well this is a good fanfic novel 3 chapters per week, good story development of the mc but can you at least extend the chapters a little bit if you have some time to do it.
So far I like it , so I will give this a 5 star for now and it's for motivation to continue this fanfic [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
so far i like it keep the good work up..................tztixys5foyrdotcuxtdoyxtuvxyxyxtixt8f69xt8fuxsyf9ht8otfitxtixtixtctchdtct8cocfict8cyt8x8t
Se puderem faรงam uma crรญtica ou digam algo que gostariam de ver no livro , compartilhem suas ideias cmg , pois me ajuda demais a escrever . vou tentar postar pelo menos de 3/4 Capรญtulos por semana , as vezes mais as vezes menos mas por enquanto estarei por aqui . amo vcs.
I like this book a lot.Thanks for the work Author. _________________________________ _________________________________ _________________________________ โ-
The author has made an extremely creative story.That allows you to kind of know the surrounding characters better.He also is perfectly creating what we call a fan fic.So thanks to the author and his inspirations or sources.
I find this fan fiction amazing and I hope that when you have time you will come back to it and update it more as it's one of few good fan fics i have found I wish you the best
interesting use of multiple characters and good use of mashups of different fictions. love the direction its heading so far and even tho the mc is super powerful I like how the enemies are being made powerful enough to fight him on equal terms
This is honestly my first review on WN and I can say that this novel is worth it. You rarely get any Disney novels on this site but even with the grammar errors which he has addressed, this is one of the best novels out there. Ignore those hate comments and give this book a try, you might just fall in love with it they way I did.
I love this book and was afraid that it was forgotten!! I'm glad you're back and look forward to the continuation of it!๐๐๐ Hope you pass your collage stuff!
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Good novel. โฆ. . . . . . . . โฆ . โฆ โฆ . . .. .. . . . . .. .. . .. . . . . . . .. .. . . . .. .. . . .. . .. โฆ. . . . . .. โฆ .. . . .. . . . .
A good read..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I love the choices of world and powers, but, the grammatical is not so good but is legibly .[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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the story as a whole is decent, the biggest problem is the grammer. its like the author doesnt even read what hes publishing. i recommend using grammerly to fix this as its almost completely unreadable in a lot of places.
i'v never seen a fanfic with such worlds i love it. no joke i did not sleep at all yesterday for read that. plz more chapter (ใคโงฯโง)ใค แห ๊ ห แ
I grew up on these movies that you wrote on so far it makes me happy seeing somebody still enjoys them๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Membuka SPOILER I like the story ........................................................................................................................................................................
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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love it [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Curti d+. Histรณria abrange vรกrias coisas e vc comeรงa a se pergunta como vai ser os prรณximos cap. Excelente trabalho, ansioso para os prรณximos
Well this is a good fanfic novel 3 chapters per week, good story development of the mc but can you at least extend the chapters a little bit if you have some time to do it.
So far I like it , so I will give this a 5 star for now and it's for motivation to continue this fanfic [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
so far i like it keep the good work up..................tztixys5foyrdotcuxtdoyxtuvxyxyxtixt8f69xt8fuxsyf9ht8otfitxtixtixtctchdtct8cocfict8cyt8x8t
Se puderem faรงam uma crรญtica ou digam algo que gostariam de ver no livro , compartilhem suas ideias cmg , pois me ajuda demais a escrever . vou tentar postar pelo menos de 3/4 Capรญtulos por semana , as vezes mais as vezes menos mas por enquanto estarei por aqui . amo vcs.