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Did you know that WN inflates your book views by x10? That means for one true genuine read or view you have it is inflated 10 times in fake views. Not to mention they don't protect your work from bots inflating your reads and stealing your content for pirate sites. Additionally, contracts with WN are boderline exploitative. Some big famous WN writers with millions of views (which by the way that million is not actually a million due to fake inflated views), only earn about 10-20% of the revenue they should be earning for writing thousands of words every day. And then on the reader side of the equation, WN just straight up doesn't care and readers pay insane amount of fees but only about 5% of that actually goes to the writers. And, what already is worse, get even more worse. When writers sign contracts with WN, WN takes full complete copyright and creative control of writers works and can finish the story without the writer. Enough is enough. No more can we allow writers or readers to be taken advantage of. Now is the time for change. Now is the time for another option. Audertist Novels is made by writers and readers designed for all of us, and we need your help to get the word out about Audertist Novels. Audertist Novels is here to be the game changer in online reading and writing. It is one of the *first and only online writing/novel reading sites to utilize a community monetization system where you can earn real world cash just from interacting on the site through reading AND writing. So creating review clubs and cover shops or commenting and reading each other's works? You can earn money. The system is simple. Your site interactivity aka: comments, liking a book, visiting the site, reading books, writing books, posting chapters, and more. All of these things are ways you can earn site coins which are exchanged for real world cash. The higher site interactivity from the community the higher the exchange rate from coin to real world money increases. So, whether you're a reader or a writer, the more we earn, the more you earn. Let make waves together. Join us now and share this message around. If you are sharing this message, thanks. You are an agent of change here to revolutionize the online writing and reading world. audertist.com novels.audertist.com
Nice story. It has a beginning that captures the reader's imagination. I love it and hope for more chapters. can't wait to see what will unfold next.
vampireeeee i lovee vampiresss tyy author very much my type novel obviously WITH vampire gonna wait for your update love the story thus far immaa waitinnn
Twilight meets Beauty and the Beast! Love Elsa already and I'm barely ten chapters in. Her pure innocence is honestly so refreshing! I can't wait to see how her personality contrasts with our MC. A small complaint is that there are a few grammatical errors, but it doesn't ruin the overall reading experience. Honestly, I'd say it doesn't even matter, especially when the plotline is so interesting. Great work author!!
The book cover is awesome🤩..the story chapters pulled me in..👌world background was cool..I love vampires and would love too read more..👍Keep updating..
Your style creates a sense of fear and excitement in the readers mind. The character design is just perfect. I am eager to read more of this novel, i have it has a lot of plot twists in store! The book cover is on fire! I got interested the moment i saw it. Added to library! I hope you exceed my expectations!
If you're drawn to this novel because of the title, it certainly doesn't disappoint. No other way to describe the relationship between the MC and this vampire than an obsession. The pace of the story flows nicely and it is in fact quite interesting. Although there are things I wasn't able to understand due to what seems to be a language barrier (I'm assuming English may not be the author's first language) but despite that I was still able to enjoy reading it. Having an editor would help this novel a lot. Nice work, author 👍
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Now this is what I call a vampire novel, bloody and dark themed just the way I like. Characters were nicely build and described with the world background made it more intriguing to read. Well overall the novel was really enjoyable. Hope you write more!!
An extremely powerful story. This theme, which has implications far beyond the obvious racial parallel, is skillfully handled. The incidents of the story are wholly absorbing. Parts of this experience may have been told before, but never with such freshness, intensity and power!
First of all, I utterly love the concept of this novel, I highly think that it is interesting and has potential. And not to mention I'm In love with the book cover, it kinda reminds my fav game (Witcher) which the main character is Geralt of Rivia, he also had white hair. But yh back to the book itself, the title is also a perfect choice for the MC himself and for the characters, I think it is written well, mainly Gabriel, well based on his cold aura I can sense that he'll have great character development. Meanwhile, the story is intriguing in every aspect. I simply love it. A little flaw with the writing but it doesn't remove my enjoyment as I read the book. So it can easily be fixed by proofreading.
Heres my honest review, the story is quite good, many story nowdays are quite lacking. I have to admit the concept of vampire is good.. the characters are pretty solid, the developments is alsoexcellent. keep up the good work.
When I read the synopsis for the novel, goosebumps went all over my body. 'God' did you see I am having fun. you have taken away my mother I will take away your children. I love reading about vampires, and this story promises to be very interesting. Good luck!
Amazing start! And that's rarely a common occurrence among new novels. Nothing to say about the stability of updates, author is doing well. Characters well crafted thus far, easy to connect to them. World background also well developed. I can't wait to see more. A good read overall, keep it up, author-kun! I'll be looking forward to read what's yet to come.
I think everything about it is great; the authors writing stile, characters description, intriguing plotline, coupled with the attractive cover. I'll rate this novel five stars.
From the beginning, you get a vivid image of the storyline. The stakes are raised and I could feel the suspense as a read more and more into the story. I love the concept and can't wait to read further.
Very intriguing start. Well done author! The pace, word building, writing style are all good. It's still in the early phases of the story, and I look forward to more chapters from the author!
Amazing start! Exciting premise and the characters are portrayed realistically and are easy to connect to. I can't wait to see more. A great read on a lazy weekend. Good luck, author!
The story of a witch and vampire is really intriguing. Your writing is marvellous and the story plot is awesome. I really like the twists and turns of this story. I am looking for more chaps and recommend everyone to give this story a try.. you will love it💜😊 All the best and keep going author.🔥
it's a great start to an interesting (what I assume to be a)love story that reminds me of the castle Vienna. Gabriel seems to be the anti-hero type which is my favorite type of MC
Here are my thoughts based from what I read so far, World Building: Well to be honest the world building decent especially with the village and the vampire place. I also like that author indeed shows some of the atmosphere in this world especially with the vampire side. But, I truly believe the author will expand more about the world itself and how the human will react with the vampire especially the main girl, Elsa. Character; I personally think the characters in this novel are very distinct with one another either on appearance and even the personality. Gabriel is ruthless type of vampire that love to speak in dramatic fashion, while Elsa is typical clumsy girl that I hope the author giver her development and also Gabriel too. Because of those character development, it can make the story more exciting to read. Overall, I do like the author smooth writing style and quite descriptive at the same time, but I also find some nitpicky things in my opinion. Which is I found in some chapters, there are a dialogue that becoming a wall of text or just very long dialogue that become like a paragraph even thought only one character speaks. My suggestion about this is just spacing out the dialogue or give a brief context before continue the dialogue if only one character talks. Thank you very much and Keep up the good work!! ![img=recommend]
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I've read several vampire stories in the past and though some are like formula-based, I still find them interesting and entertaining to read. Same goes with this one, the story is unique in its own way and the distinctions between the characters are clearly shown. There are just some technical errors and confusing parts but catching up with the plot is not that difficult. I expect more from this novel and I have faith the writer will meet those. Best of luck!
Gabriel’s narcissistic personality really mirrors a pureblood vampire. His obsession to the girls gaves a mysterious effect to the novel. I really love how you described his personality. Keep up the good work author!
The world of vampires with the dark theme has always been my fav this story already got me hooked up not gonna lie. The MC is really scary T_T but still cant help to fall in love with him! cant wait to read what happens next!!
Vampire stories can be tricky to write. The author has been able to get past that. With an intriguing plot and mysterious and alluring lead characters holding it all together perfectly. A great read.
I really love the story. not a Vampire Fan but this one got me. hope to read more!!! I recommend this book. hope to read more. write soon. I can't read enough.
It was interesting to see the vampire's point of view, and how this will affect the story going forwards. Definitely a different vibe from other vampire novels, and therefore recommended.
Good story and I specifically like the cover pic.I read some chapters and really liked this novel . I highly reccomend to read this novel if you love vampire fiction novels like me .
Action✔ Blood✔ Gore✔ Vampires✔ what more could you ask for? It's a fight between good and evil but not your typical one. The MC and the other characters are very well written and so far it has not disappointed in what it promises to offer!
Love the cover page! It's original and very catchy. First of all, I have to confess that vampires, elves, etc... that's not my cup of coffee, but I will try to be objective ;) The plot is intriguing, and I have got an impression from the first few chapters that you have an idea for the whole story (a huuuuge plus for that). Your characters are interesting, you describe the backgorund from the beginning. I think you're doing great! Don't worry about the errors, we all make them. Ask your readers to point it, so it will be easier for you to correct them. Good luck with the contest!
So let me start by saying, the book cover alone made me want to read it and when I did I just had to keep it, am a huge fan of vampires so this book got me smiling, the ruthless vampire made my heart swell 😉keep up the good work author.
The book cover is fantastic as it made me excited to read the novel even before opening it. I also like the way how Gabriel is described. It's a mix of mystery and fear.
Did you know that WN inflates your book views by x10? That means for one true genuine read or view you have it is inflated 10 times in fake views. Not to mention they don't protect your work from bots inflating your reads and stealing your content for pirate sites. Additionally, contracts with WN are boderline exploitative. Some big famous WN writers with millions of views (which by the way that million is not actually a million due to fake inflated views), only earn about 10-20% of the revenue they should be earning for writing thousands of words every day. And then on the reader side of the equation, WN just straight up doesn't care and readers pay insane amount of fees but only about 5% of that actually goes to the writers. And, what already is worse, get even more worse. When writers sign contracts with WN, WN takes full complete copyright and creative control of writers works and can finish the story without the writer. Enough is enough. No more can we allow writers or readers to be taken advantage of. Now is the time for change. Now is the time for another option. Audertist Novels is made by writers and readers designed for all of us, and we need your help to get the word out about Audertist Novels. Audertist Novels is here to be the game changer in online reading and writing. It is one of the *first and only online writing/novel reading sites to utilize a community monetization system where you can earn real world cash just from interacting on the site through reading AND writing. So creating review clubs and cover shops or commenting and reading each other's works? You can earn money. The system is simple. Your site interactivity aka: comments, liking a book, visiting the site, reading books, writing books, posting chapters, and more. All of these things are ways you can earn site coins which are exchanged for real world cash. The higher site interactivity from the community the higher the exchange rate from coin to real world money increases. So, whether you're a reader or a writer, the more we earn, the more you earn. Let make waves together. Join us now and share this message around. If you are sharing this message, thanks. You are an agent of change here to revolutionize the online writing and reading world. audertist.com novels.audertist.com
Nice story. It has a beginning that captures the reader's imagination. I love it and hope for more chapters. can't wait to see what will unfold next.
vampireeeee i lovee vampiresss tyy author very much my type novel obviously WITH vampire gonna wait for your update love the story thus far immaa waitinnn
Twilight meets Beauty and the Beast! Love Elsa already and I'm barely ten chapters in. Her pure innocence is honestly so refreshing! I can't wait to see how her personality contrasts with our MC. A small complaint is that there are a few grammatical errors, but it doesn't ruin the overall reading experience. Honestly, I'd say it doesn't even matter, especially when the plotline is so interesting. Great work author!!
The book cover is awesome🤩..the story chapters pulled me in..👌world background was cool..I love vampires and would love too read more..👍Keep updating..
Your style creates a sense of fear and excitement in the readers mind. The character design is just perfect. I am eager to read more of this novel, i have it has a lot of plot twists in store! The book cover is on fire! I got interested the moment i saw it. Added to library! I hope you exceed my expectations!
If you're drawn to this novel because of the title, it certainly doesn't disappoint. No other way to describe the relationship between the MC and this vampire than an obsession. The pace of the story flows nicely and it is in fact quite interesting. Although there are things I wasn't able to understand due to what seems to be a language barrier (I'm assuming English may not be the author's first language) but despite that I was still able to enjoy reading it. Having an editor would help this novel a lot. Nice work, author 👍
Membuka SPOILER Now this is what I call a vampire novel, bloody and dark themed just the way I like. Characters were nicely build and described with the world background made it more intriguing to read. Well overall the novel was really enjoyable. Hope you write more!!
An extremely powerful story. This theme, which has implications far beyond the obvious racial parallel, is skillfully handled. The incidents of the story are wholly absorbing. Parts of this experience may have been told before, but never with such freshness, intensity and power!
First of all, I utterly love the concept of this novel, I highly think that it is interesting and has potential. And not to mention I'm In love with the book cover, it kinda reminds my fav game (Witcher) which the main character is Geralt of Rivia, he also had white hair. But yh back to the book itself, the title is also a perfect choice for the MC himself and for the characters, I think it is written well, mainly Gabriel, well based on his cold aura I can sense that he'll have great character development. Meanwhile, the story is intriguing in every aspect. I simply love it. A little flaw with the writing but it doesn't remove my enjoyment as I read the book. So it can easily be fixed by proofreading.
Heres my honest review, the story is quite good, many story nowdays are quite lacking. I have to admit the concept of vampire is good.. the characters are pretty solid, the developments is alsoexcellent. keep up the good work.
When I read the synopsis for the novel, goosebumps went all over my body. 'God' did you see I am having fun. you have taken away my mother I will take away your children. I love reading about vampires, and this story promises to be very interesting. Good luck!
Amazing start! And that's rarely a common occurrence among new novels. Nothing to say about the stability of updates, author is doing well. Characters well crafted thus far, easy to connect to them. World background also well developed. I can't wait to see more. A good read overall, keep it up, author-kun! I'll be looking forward to read what's yet to come.
I think everything about it is great; the authors writing stile, characters description, intriguing plotline, coupled with the attractive cover. I'll rate this novel five stars.
From the beginning, you get a vivid image of the storyline. The stakes are raised and I could feel the suspense as a read more and more into the story. I love the concept and can't wait to read further.
Very intriguing start. Well done author! The pace, word building, writing style are all good. It's still in the early phases of the story, and I look forward to more chapters from the author!
Amazing start! Exciting premise and the characters are portrayed realistically and are easy to connect to. I can't wait to see more. A great read on a lazy weekend. Good luck, author!
The story of a witch and vampire is really intriguing. Your writing is marvellous and the story plot is awesome. I really like the twists and turns of this story. I am looking for more chaps and recommend everyone to give this story a try.. you will love it💜😊 All the best and keep going author.🔥
it's a great start to an interesting (what I assume to be a)love story that reminds me of the castle Vienna. Gabriel seems to be the anti-hero type which is my favorite type of MC
Here are my thoughts based from what I read so far, World Building: Well to be honest the world building decent especially with the village and the vampire place. I also like that author indeed shows some of the atmosphere in this world especially with the vampire side. But, I truly believe the author will expand more about the world itself and how the human will react with the vampire especially the main girl, Elsa. Character; I personally think the characters in this novel are very distinct with one another either on appearance and even the personality. Gabriel is ruthless type of vampire that love to speak in dramatic fashion, while Elsa is typical clumsy girl that I hope the author giver her development and also Gabriel too. Because of those character development, it can make the story more exciting to read. Overall, I do like the author smooth writing style and quite descriptive at the same time, but I also find some nitpicky things in my opinion. Which is I found in some chapters, there are a dialogue that becoming a wall of text or just very long dialogue that become like a paragraph even thought only one character speaks. My suggestion about this is just spacing out the dialogue or give a brief context before continue the dialogue if only one character talks. Thank you very much and Keep up the good work!! ![img=recommend]
Membuka SPOILER I've read several vampire stories in the past and though some are like formula-based, I still find them interesting and entertaining to read. Same goes with this one, the story is unique in its own way and the distinctions between the characters are clearly shown. There are just some technical errors and confusing parts but catching up with the plot is not that difficult. I expect more from this novel and I have faith the writer will meet those. Best of luck!
Gabriel’s narcissistic personality really mirrors a pureblood vampire. His obsession to the girls gaves a mysterious effect to the novel. I really love how you described his personality. Keep up the good work author!
The world of vampires with the dark theme has always been my fav this story already got me hooked up not gonna lie. The MC is really scary T_T but still cant help to fall in love with him! cant wait to read what happens next!!
Vampire stories can be tricky to write. The author has been able to get past that. With an intriguing plot and mysterious and alluring lead characters holding it all together perfectly. A great read.
I really love the story. not a Vampire Fan but this one got me. hope to read more!!! I recommend this book. hope to read more. write soon. I can't read enough.
It was interesting to see the vampire's point of view, and how this will affect the story going forwards. Definitely a different vibe from other vampire novels, and therefore recommended.
Good story and I specifically like the cover pic.I read some chapters and really liked this novel . I highly reccomend to read this novel if you love vampire fiction novels like me .
Action✔ Blood✔ Gore✔ Vampires✔ what more could you ask for? It's a fight between good and evil but not your typical one. The MC and the other characters are very well written and so far it has not disappointed in what it promises to offer!
Love the cover page! It's original and very catchy. First of all, I have to confess that vampires, elves, etc... that's not my cup of coffee, but I will try to be objective ;) The plot is intriguing, and I have got an impression from the first few chapters that you have an idea for the whole story (a huuuuge plus for that). Your characters are interesting, you describe the backgorund from the beginning. I think you're doing great! Don't worry about the errors, we all make them. Ask your readers to point it, so it will be easier for you to correct them. Good luck with the contest!
So let me start by saying, the book cover alone made me want to read it and when I did I just had to keep it, am a huge fan of vampires so this book got me smiling, the ruthless vampire made my heart swell 😉keep up the good work author.
The book cover is fantastic as it made me excited to read the novel even before opening it. I also like the way how Gabriel is described. It's a mix of mystery and fear.