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Well written, the story develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is undeniably beautiful with great use of words that complement the subject of the story as a whole.
An interesting story 😍😍😍😍 love the characters and I love this kind of book. I would definitely recommend this to anyone who likes fantasy novel.
It's my first story but I've been holding on to this idea since I was 12 years old and now I'm finally getting it out there. I would appreciate any form of support. If you are into Brandon Sanderson's and his contemporaries' works, I know you will enjoy this story. Give it a shot. As always, thanks for simply being here. 🙂
vey nice story plot! Definitely will follow this all the way through. Keep this up author![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Superb 😱 I just read all the available chapters 🤓 The story is unique and very well written 👏👏👏 I will definitely wait for the next chapters 🔥🤩🤗 Getting curious and excited for the main characters too ❤️
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more more more please.... i like the way who the author tells his story.. very enticing... i hope the author will continue to write this awesome story.[img=coins][img=exp][img=fp]
more chapters pls. got hooked reading the first chapter. more please. 🙂☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
I Find the story unique and surely there will be amazing, magical , exciting scenes and interesting characters... Looking forward to more chapters .. 🙂👍👍👍
This looks like a promising new light novel. It's very descriptive - I could imagine detailed scenes in my head. I think the author love to use the letter 'Z' [img=fp]
Very Compelling story 💕 I only wanted to browse but I was hooked and ended up reading the entire prologue...Can't wait for the next chapter ☺️♥️🤗 Kudos to the author 👌
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Beautifully written. Nice play of words. More chapters please! Beautifully written. Nice play of words. More chapters please! Beautifully written. Nice play of words. More chapters please! Beautifully written. Nice play of words. More chapters please!
I love to read so I devour mostly fantasy. The character development is superb, the progression of the story is fluid. It's a pleasure to follow. Read it and you won't regret it!
Well written, the story develops well throughout the chapters and the picture created is undeniably beautiful with great use of words that complement the subject of the story as a whole.
An interesting story 😍😍😍😍 love the characters and I love this kind of book. I would definitely recommend this to anyone who likes fantasy novel.
It's my first story but I've been holding on to this idea since I was 12 years old and now I'm finally getting it out there. I would appreciate any form of support. If you are into Brandon Sanderson's and his contemporaries' works, I know you will enjoy this story. Give it a shot. As always, thanks for simply being here. 🙂
vey nice story plot! Definitely will follow this all the way through. Keep this up author![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Superb 😱 I just read all the available chapters 🤓 The story is unique and very well written 👏👏👏 I will definitely wait for the next chapters 🔥🤩🤗 Getting curious and excited for the main characters too ❤️
Omg, more more more.... I need updates... Omg, more more more.... I need updates... [img=faceslap][img=update][img=coins][img=fp][img=coins][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap]
more more more please.... i like the way who the author tells his story.. very enticing... i hope the author will continue to write this awesome story.[img=coins][img=exp][img=fp]
more chapters pls. got hooked reading the first chapter. more please. 🙂☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
I Find the story unique and surely there will be amazing, magical , exciting scenes and interesting characters... Looking forward to more chapters .. 🙂👍👍👍
This looks like a promising new light novel. It's very descriptive - I could imagine detailed scenes in my head. I think the author love to use the letter 'Z' [img=fp]
Very Compelling story 💕 I only wanted to browse but I was hooked and ended up reading the entire prologue...Can't wait for the next chapter ☺️♥️🤗 Kudos to the author 👌
nice. very well written [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Beautifully written. Nice play of words. More chapters please! Beautifully written. Nice play of words. More chapters please! Beautifully written. Nice play of words. More chapters please! Beautifully written. Nice play of words. More chapters please!
I love to read so I devour mostly fantasy. The character development is superb, the progression of the story is fluid. It's a pleasure to follow. Read it and you won't regret it!