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gave it a read, like it a lot, and good ya showing how a shockwave experiencing new things does not lead to mass self-destructive tendencies, nice to see another transformers fic do wonder how a shockwave with Nen would develop it with his big bot brains in the latest arc since can be quite fun to play with by experimenting with its properties, and driller would be epic with it if can teach him to use it by linking his brain and doing a pseudo drift with it
Finally a good Transformers/Shockwave fanfic. This fanfic is very good and enjoyable. I love it! ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
There is a repetitive pattern here. MC goes to new world... research there for 5 to 10 years...gets a power up had a pretty big fight where he miraculously survive and then move on...then same happen in the next world. What is the goal and purpose of this???...What is the endgame here???
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i like it ................................. ................................ ..............................,.......... ........... ...............
Yes yes yes good PLZ don't drop and good luck yehsjkalskgjkjbjhvhvhvgjvhjjlknkjgfgfytfjhhkljhjkugjfhffdtdhyghk bkhvhdgrsrezfdhgjknijbvugfdtxghjnluhgdrtsre lkijmnabcdefghijklmnopqrsdjskajsjsjsjsjsjjsjsjss
SANITY IS OVERRATED! MADNESS REIGNS SUPREME!! Mwahahahhaahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahhahahahaha!!!
Though I am the author, I still believe I should write a proper review of it. This is a Shockwave as MC in the multiverse Fanfic. This Fanfic is actually my second Fanfic. And I've made a LOT of improvements. For starters, the main character, has a proper personality, not like the "weird" personality that I gave to the MC of my previous Fanfic. Next is the abilities. In this Fanfic I've given the MC a great ability, but the story wouldn't revolve around that ability. Because the story is about Shockwave and not his ability. In this Fanfic I'm going to try to use the ability in the most logical way possible, because that's what Shockwave is, a purely logical being. Next, is the world background. In this story I'm TRYING to create a proper background for the world. And the results I would say are satisfactory. Yes, I can improve on it but for now I think it is ok. For my grammar, I think I don't make that many obvious grammar mistakes. Yes, I make many of them but they are not going to stop you from properly enjoying the story. Because frankly, If you have read other Fanfics on this website then I don't think I need to tell you about some stories that have so bad grammar that you would want to shoot yourself in the head. Update schedule. I would try to post atleast two chapters daily but sometimes due to my school I might only post a chapter two or three days. But at the minimum I would post atleast one chapter every 5 days, I promise. The only reason I might not be able to follow that will be when I can have an EXTREME emergency. So, I would suggest you to give a chance to this book and try it out. And to my readers, thanks for reading~
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I like this story sad the other one had to be discontinued though :( keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Mc is a wonderful person I enjoyed when he was in the world of giants, although it would have been great if he mixed with them to gain information before starting to kill directly because he is a new world that does not know the level of his strength, he must be careful and mix in each world and plan before starting to kill, so we can Enjoying his deception on the main characters and lying to them and taking advantage of them before getting rid of them, and the amount of abilities he acquires must be reduced because it will reduce the amount of competition and future plans, I hope to improve this novel and especially show the evil of Mc
gave it a read, like it a lot, and good ya showing how a shockwave experiencing new things does not lead to mass self-destructive tendencies, nice to see another transformers fic do wonder how a shockwave with Nen would develop it with his big bot brains in the latest arc since can be quite fun to play with by experimenting with its properties, and driller would be epic with it if can teach him to use it by linking his brain and doing a pseudo drift with it
Finally a good Transformers/Shockwave fanfic. This fanfic is very good and enjoyable. I love it! ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
There is a repetitive pattern here. MC goes to new world... research there for 5 to 10 years...gets a power up had a pretty big fight where he miraculously survive and then move on...then same happen in the next world. What is the goal and purpose of this???...What is the endgame here???
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awesome story love that truly awesome love ππππππππππππππππππππ[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=fp][img=fp][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
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i like it ................................. ................................ ..............................,.......... ........... ...............
Yes yes yes good PLZ don't drop and good luck yehsjkalskgjkjbjhvhvhvgjvhjjlknkjgfgfytfjhhkljhjkugjfhffdtdhyghk bkhvhdgrsrezfdhgjknijbvugfdtxghjnluhgdrtsre lkijmnabcdefghijklmnopqrsdjskajsjsjsjsjsjjsjsjss
SANITY IS OVERRATED! MADNESS REIGNS SUPREME!! Mwahahahhaahhahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahhahahahaha!!!
Though I am the author, I still believe I should write a proper review of it. This is a Shockwave as MC in the multiverse Fanfic. This Fanfic is actually my second Fanfic. And I've made a LOT of improvements. For starters, the main character, has a proper personality, not like the "weird" personality that I gave to the MC of my previous Fanfic. Next is the abilities. In this Fanfic I've given the MC a great ability, but the story wouldn't revolve around that ability. Because the story is about Shockwave and not his ability. In this Fanfic I'm going to try to use the ability in the most logical way possible, because that's what Shockwave is, a purely logical being. Next, is the world background. In this story I'm TRYING to create a proper background for the world. And the results I would say are satisfactory. Yes, I can improve on it but for now I think it is ok. For my grammar, I think I don't make that many obvious grammar mistakes. Yes, I make many of them but they are not going to stop you from properly enjoying the story. Because frankly, If you have read other Fanfics on this website then I don't think I need to tell you about some stories that have so bad grammar that you would want to shoot yourself in the head. Update schedule. I would try to post atleast two chapters daily but sometimes due to my school I might only post a chapter two or three days. But at the minimum I would post atleast one chapter every 5 days, I promise. The only reason I might not be able to follow that will be when I can have an EXTREME emergency. So, I would suggest you to give a chance to this book and try it out. And to my readers, thanks for reading~
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I like this story sad the other one had to be discontinued though :( keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Mc is a wonderful person I enjoyed when he was in the world of giants, although it would have been great if he mixed with them to gain information before starting to kill directly because he is a new world that does not know the level of his strength, he must be careful and mix in each world and plan before starting to kill, so we can Enjoying his deception on the main characters and lying to them and taking advantage of them before getting rid of them, and the amount of abilities he acquires must be reduced because it will reduce the amount of competition and future plans, I hope to improve this novel and especially show the evil of Mc