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there is nothing wrong, just i recommended read and add this to library it has good plot [img=exp] [img=exp] [img=exp] [img=exp] [img=exp]
The volume 1 was really, I’m witing the vol 2 with impatience. I like that not every thing goes the way of the mc and that Konoha is just another shinobi village who is as bad as the others.
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Good beginning keep it up , as I have seen lot of Fanfics either dropped or put on indefinite hiatus. Well just my suggestion do not make the character being just in few more chapters if you are planning a long fanfic as it just becomes boring .
story is great till chapter 10. before that it is immersive af. my main criticism is on the ra*e of the child and the fact that the mc got done in the way he did. like ya really did minato and the rest pretty fkin dirty by putting the mc in that situation, it just felt really forced. i am not marking down anything on the rating due to the fact that it IS your story, and it would be unfair to mark ya down just cuz the story changed too much for my liking 😅 no hard feelings author-sama, i just couldn't stand the fact that the mc got removed/killed off like that... or that the village turned on such a powerhouse who obviously cared for konoha (from at least his actions)
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overall my taste i think the way the plot goes is pretty good as well i would say more but im too lazy just accept 4.2 stars ...............,
gbt has been a major contributor to the floor of the strong one is the most popular and most popular and most important part in this country in
Idea is good but it's kinda cringe! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Membuka SPOILER there is nothing wrong, just i recommended read and add this to library it has good plot [img=exp] [img=exp] [img=exp] [img=exp] [img=exp]
The volume 1 was really, I’m witing the vol 2 with impatience. I like that not every thing goes the way of the mc and that Konoha is just another shinobi village who is as bad as the others.
TOO CRINGE TOO CRINGE TOO CRINGE TOO CRINGE TOO CRINGE TOO CRINGE TOO CRINGE TOO CRINGE TOO CRINGE TOO CRINGE TOO CRINGE TOO CRINGE TOO CRINGE TOO CRINGE TOO CRINGE TOO CRINGE TOO CRINGE TOO CRINGE TOO CRINGE TOO CRINGE
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Membuka SPOILER Good beginning keep it up , as I have seen lot of Fanfics either dropped or put on indefinite hiatus. Well just my suggestion do not make the character being just in few more chapters if you are planning a long fanfic as it just becomes boring .
story is great till chapter 10. before that it is immersive af. my main criticism is on the ra*e of the child and the fact that the mc got done in the way he did. like ya really did minato and the rest pretty fkin dirty by putting the mc in that situation, it just felt really forced. i am not marking down anything on the rating due to the fact that it IS your story, and it would be unfair to mark ya down just cuz the story changed too much for my liking 😅 no hard feelings author-sama, i just couldn't stand the fact that the mc got removed/killed off like that... or that the village turned on such a powerhouse who obviously cared for konoha (from at least his actions)
Membuka SPOILER overall my taste i think the way the plot goes is pretty good as well i would say more but im too lazy just accept 4.2 stars ...............,
gbt has been a major contributor to the floor of the strong one is the most popular and most popular and most important part in this country in
Idea is good but it's kinda cringe! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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