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the start of the story was decent but them you made some oc gets reincarnated into fubuki body that is a major L and you gave the mc too much abilities and you forget some like limitless and how can boros even kick him to the moon and I'm happy with fubuki being the main girl but this is a girl that is just on funuki's body not fubuki, overall I am very disappointed 😮💨😮💨😮💨
it's pretty good can you make another one punch man fanfiction but the main character will have all the abilities from the eternal cylinder the game you can play it or watch videos about it please do this okay
It doesn't work for me, The idea of the creator of Saitama was to create a strong protagonist from the beginning, but the authors of FF can't create a good plot with that same idea, it would be better if you had made one Reincarnated in another body, or an oc entirely.
Not bad. Writing quality is Ok. But why don't I see any story development even after 20 chapter. Not to mention the fact that he keeps getting more and more dull. I don't see anything new here.🥲
Reading this fills me with a nearly uncontrollable rage for some reason. Besides that; The punctuation and grammar of the whole book is terrible. Its clear that they know to put a period at the end of a sentence but just typed this garbage out as fast as possible so no paragraph has a period at the end. The dialogue is boring and the mission system is stupid. The person who reincarnated as Saitama is a dumb simp with no character development or personality. I hate this book so much that my face grew too hot from anger so I had to go take a cold shower to not break anything. Author, I want to kill you.
OP garbage MC with system who doesn't want to mess with timeline or story line.. ......................
writing quality 3 stars Story development 1 star Character design 1 star updating stability 1 star World background it's a given since it's opm 4 .....
Gonna be honest, it is a meh type of story. It's "transmigrated" into Saitama with his powers so it is obviously that you should't expect anything serious from it. But, it stays strict to the true plot with little to no change which makes me question why even am I reading this. Sure, he gets power ups but... what is the point? He is already overpowered with Saitamas power. If it was "I transmigrated into saitama, don't have his power but obtain a overpower ability after doing quest" type of story it would be much better because then the plot would at least change a little bit more. My Fubuki ship went down the drain when you turned her into a transmigrator too. The grammar is average in my opinion too. Lines are striaght to the point, we lack some descriptions on some people or actions but overall it is way better than some chinese garbage. 3/5 seems like a good vote. For people who are bored and want to read something chill.
Writing Quality: Worst than MTL. But Ill give two stars for the sake of having an auto correct and auto paraphrase in my brain. Story Development: What is that? This fanfic doesnt have that. It just follows the plot with slight changes. Character Design: Imagine Saitama as MC but a simp. Fubuki is also what you didnt expect. she's a reincarnator so the author just wanted Fubuki for her body. Totally wasted my time reading this because of that. Updating Stability: Might as well the author drop this and start a new one. Since he barely updates this fanfic. World Background: Author expects us to have read the manga or anime so he didn't tell us about the time, place, etc. Overall: Would not suggest for you readers to read this if you expect a nice Fubuki X Saitama fluff. This is just disappointment. This is a low tier fanfic. Even worst than those harem gotta catch them all like pokemon fanfic. I tried my best persevering through reading it but I could only reach 40 chapters.
I really love your book please keep going this is one of the most interesting books i have ever read I create my own story's with Fubuki being the main character I'm happy you made her the 2nd main character it means alot to me
i love keep doing it ......................................................................................................................................
There is always an issue with giving your character way too many powers especially if it's someone OP like Saitama, also, why the heck would you stick to the plot and why the double heck is there another reincarnated person in your story? that's a taboo when it comes to reincarnation novels, if never bodes well for the story.
Hmmm.... Nothing too much what i want to say for this fanfict, cuzz i not read till the last chapter yet ... Imagining Saitama's hair not getting bald really excited n can't help but looking for some mood to read this fict again.
See; this is what I don't understand about these types of fanfics, It is basically just cannon with slight changes.. Author why would we read a fanfic, if the story is the same as cannon?!?!?! who would do that? I'd rather just read the original if that is the case,, apart from small changes here and there, it isn't anything interesting.. and not even funny like how this series was supposed to be.. (SD1/5) writing quality is "meh", if you ignore the random 4th wall breaks.. (WQ2/5) stability of updates is terrible.. (SOU1/5) character design, it is basically Saitama but boring (CD1/5).. world background, hardly any descriptions of locations, it is like Mc is here, the goes home, then goes to the supermarket or manga store.. I mean, where are they? whats the time when he did that? so yeah, no world building.. honestly.. this is a poor attempt at a fanfic.. that's my review.. (OVERALL1.2)
Can't say I'm impressed with the character given other abilities if already godlike. The power of Flight I'm rather content with, but the other powers were unnecessary...
dude the author is just not able to make original plot so he is rewriting OPM well up to chapter 9 i say 9 becous i droped it ther the mc is saitama with hair (that is all) and i was bored after 3chapters
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1)Качество письма - 5. 2)Обновление стабильности - 5. 3)Развитие сюжета - 3. 4)Дизайн персонажа - 3 5)фон мира - 2. 6)Общая оценка - 3. 1) Quality of writing - 5. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 3. 4) Character design - 3. 5) background of the world - 2. 6) Overall rating - 3.
Membuka SPOILER
Everything would be fine if not for the mc's attitude, dude this is a fanfic you should've made him an alpha, It's irritating to see our Idol acting like a beta male.
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Really like and good especially with the main character very OP because I'm a fan of MC OP ________________________/-------------------------------------------\________________________
It's Average,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
the story is good from the start and the Mc is to OP not until on chapter 30+ and when Fubuki is from another world too and he know all the plot and the you know is not what you think she's annoying keep asking the mc about his past and power and the suddenly become a simp and dumb he tell all his power to Fubuki and all he's secret as well.... I just waste my time reading this!!!!
Story is okay I guess.The Mc have too many superpower that is unnecessary to the story,this is not a Chinese novel lol.One last thing,for god sakes please choose Saitama or Camden as name not freaking both in the story,its making me mad just why can't you choose one to use.
I liked it for a while but he started staying completely on canon and it's really irritating I can't go through everything cause I have work but this is just my honest opinion
I have read till chapter 31 before losing interest. The grammar is somewhat ok, but the writing style is weird. The plot itself was nice until Fubuki appeared to be also a transmigrator. So overall I will give this fanfic 3 stars and recommend to others to give this a try as it might suit you.
the start of the story was decent but them you made some oc gets reincarnated into fubuki body that is a major L and you gave the mc too much abilities and you forget some like limitless and how can boros even kick him to the moon and I'm happy with fubuki being the main girl but this is a girl that is just on funuki's body not fubuki, overall I am very disappointed 😮💨😮💨😮💨
it's pretty good can you make another one punch man fanfiction but the main character will have all the abilities from the eternal cylinder the game you can play it or watch videos about it please do this okay
It doesn't work for me, The idea of the creator of Saitama was to create a strong protagonist from the beginning, but the authors of FF can't create a good plot with that same idea, it would be better if you had made one Reincarnated in another body, or an oc entirely.
Not bad. Writing quality is Ok. But why don't I see any story development even after 20 chapter. Not to mention the fact that he keeps getting more and more dull. I don't see anything new here.🥲
Reading this fills me with a nearly uncontrollable rage for some reason. Besides that; The punctuation and grammar of the whole book is terrible. Its clear that they know to put a period at the end of a sentence but just typed this garbage out as fast as possible so no paragraph has a period at the end. The dialogue is boring and the mission system is stupid. The person who reincarnated as Saitama is a dumb simp with no character development or personality. I hate this book so much that my face grew too hot from anger so I had to go take a cold shower to not break anything. Author, I want to kill you.
OP garbage MC with system who doesn't want to mess with timeline or story line.. ......................
writing quality 3 stars Story development 1 star Character design 1 star updating stability 1 star World background it's a given since it's opm 4 .....
Gonna be honest, it is a meh type of story. It's "transmigrated" into Saitama with his powers so it is obviously that you should't expect anything serious from it. But, it stays strict to the true plot with little to no change which makes me question why even am I reading this. Sure, he gets power ups but... what is the point? He is already overpowered with Saitamas power. If it was "I transmigrated into saitama, don't have his power but obtain a overpower ability after doing quest" type of story it would be much better because then the plot would at least change a little bit more. My Fubuki ship went down the drain when you turned her into a transmigrator too. The grammar is average in my opinion too. Lines are striaght to the point, we lack some descriptions on some people or actions but overall it is way better than some chinese garbage. 3/5 seems like a good vote. For people who are bored and want to read something chill.
Writing Quality: Worst than MTL. But Ill give two stars for the sake of having an auto correct and auto paraphrase in my brain. Story Development: What is that? This fanfic doesnt have that. It just follows the plot with slight changes. Character Design: Imagine Saitama as MC but a simp. Fubuki is also what you didnt expect. she's a reincarnator so the author just wanted Fubuki for her body. Totally wasted my time reading this because of that. Updating Stability: Might as well the author drop this and start a new one. Since he barely updates this fanfic. World Background: Author expects us to have read the manga or anime so he didn't tell us about the time, place, etc. Overall: Would not suggest for you readers to read this if you expect a nice Fubuki X Saitama fluff. This is just disappointment. This is a low tier fanfic. Even worst than those harem gotta catch them all like pokemon fanfic. I tried my best persevering through reading it but I could only reach 40 chapters.
I really love your book please keep going this is one of the most interesting books i have ever read I create my own story's with Fubuki being the main character I'm happy you made her the 2nd main character it means alot to me
i love keep doing it ......................................................................................................................................
There is always an issue with giving your character way too many powers especially if it's someone OP like Saitama, also, why the heck would you stick to the plot and why the double heck is there another reincarnated person in your story? that's a taboo when it comes to reincarnation novels, if never bodes well for the story.
Hmmm.... Nothing too much what i want to say for this fanfict, cuzz i not read till the last chapter yet ... Imagining Saitama's hair not getting bald really excited n can't help but looking for some mood to read this fict again.
See; this is what I don't understand about these types of fanfics, It is basically just cannon with slight changes.. Author why would we read a fanfic, if the story is the same as cannon?!?!?! who would do that? I'd rather just read the original if that is the case,, apart from small changes here and there, it isn't anything interesting.. and not even funny like how this series was supposed to be.. (SD1/5) writing quality is "meh", if you ignore the random 4th wall breaks.. (WQ2/5) stability of updates is terrible.. (SOU1/5) character design, it is basically Saitama but boring (CD1/5).. world background, hardly any descriptions of locations, it is like Mc is here, the goes home, then goes to the supermarket or manga store.. I mean, where are they? whats the time when he did that? so yeah, no world building.. honestly.. this is a poor attempt at a fanfic.. that's my review.. (OVERALL1.2)
Can't say I'm impressed with the character given other abilities if already godlike. The power of Flight I'm rather content with, but the other powers were unnecessary...
dude the author is just not able to make original plot so he is rewriting OPM well up to chapter 9 i say 9 becous i droped it ther the mc is saitama with hair (that is all) and i was bored after 3chapters
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1)Качество письма - 5. 2)Обновление стабильности - 5. 3)Развитие сюжета - 3. 4)Дизайн персонажа - 3 5)фон мира - 2. 6)Общая оценка - 3. 1) Quality of writing - 5. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 3. 4) Character design - 3. 5) background of the world - 2. 6) Overall rating - 3.
Membuka SPOILER Everything would be fine if not for the mc's attitude, dude this is a fanfic you should've made him an alpha, It's irritating to see our Idol acting like a beta male.
i have not seen a fanfic which saitama has hair [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Really like and good especially with the main character very OP because I'm a fan of MC OP ________________________/-------------------------------------------\________________________
It's Average,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
the story is good from the start and the Mc is to OP not until on chapter 30+ and when Fubuki is from another world too and he know all the plot and the you know is not what you think she's annoying keep asking the mc about his past and power and the suddenly become a simp and dumb he tell all his power to Fubuki and all he's secret as well.... I just waste my time reading this!!!!
Story is okay I guess.The Mc have too many superpower that is unnecessary to the story,this is not a Chinese novel lol.One last thing,for god sakes please choose Saitama or Camden as name not freaking both in the story,its making me mad just why can't you choose one to use.
I liked it for a while but he started staying completely on canon and it's really irritating I can't go through everything cause I have work but this is just my honest opinion
I have read till chapter 31 before losing interest. The grammar is somewhat ok, but the writing style is weird. The plot itself was nice until Fubuki appeared to be also a transmigrator. So overall I will give this fanfic 3 stars and recommend to others to give this a try as it might suit you.