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You may think I am stupid and unfair by giving five stars but this novel really deserves it.The reason is pretty simple .THE MC USES HIS BRAIN AS WELL AS THE ATHOR.I am not exaggerating when I say this is one of the most thoughtful novel on this platform not only is the MC well built but the world's and universes are so well thought out and with even real sciences
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Love this story. I remember reading this a long time ago when the mc was just getting past the full metal alchemist world, but left after no new updates came out during high school. Though I could’ve sworn that the entire back story from his rise to power in the first few chapters now actually happened in multiple chapters when he was younger when I first read this. Maybe it’s a different book but the auxiliary chapters and descriptions are the exact same. It’s driving me nuts!
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Man, it's already a month please upload the ch now we can't wait any longer, please author I am begging you to upload, please from behalf of all faithful reader upload
overall it's good. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is in French (because i'm not very good in english). L'histoire est excellente, les personnages sont bien développés, l'auteur comprend bien les histoires qu'il utilise et surtout, il arrive à les adapter. Même si la régularité n'est pas son fort, le novel mérite les 5 étoiles. Si jamais l'auteur lit ceci, ton travail est excellent, merci de l'avoir partagé. J'espère pouvoir continuer à le lire jusqu'à la fin.
Has dejado casi de lado las actualizaciones de este maravilloso libro y estas perdiendo tus seguidores hoy me planteo si dejar tu libro después de tantas donaciones que hice durante casi 2 años estuvo este dentro de mi favorito sino que se actualiza en mañana me despediré suerte y gracias
Has dejado casi de lado las actualizaciones de este maravilloso libro y estas perdiendo tus seguidores hoy me planteo si dejar tu libro después de tantas donación que hice durante casi 2 años estuvo este dentro de mi favorito sino actualizas en mañana me despediré suerte y gracias
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I'm absolutely living this fan fiction, I would love to see Edward go to the world of One Piece even though I know there is no magic in that world but I would just love to see it(or in this case read it). He could for example study how the Devil Fruits work, how haki works and somehow implement it in the profession of Aura masters. Overall I like the story so far(I'm currently on chapter 200-ish). Keep up the work author
Mc is confusing. One time is good, the writer presents him like he's good. He acts like his smart but he isn't. Every other character was just made dumber.
really love the novel! wish there were more chapters tho, finished all the available ones in 4 days lolol. author if you're reading this, can you make the mc go in the cyberpunk edgerunner universe and save david and rebecca? i feel like the tech in the night city will make the empire's tech go up a notch, especially in cybernetics, thank you :> just finished cyberpunk edgerunner and still sad about the main character's death :'>
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it's one of the best novel have read. this novel development and Author's ideas are Amazing.
Genial y demasiado lento desde hace rato............................................................................................................
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I Have Been reading this fanfic since 134th chapter release and right now i read 625th chapter and it is one of the best fanfics i have read. I hope it will go this way
This fanfiction is excellent, and I highly recommend it. I'm surprised I didn't discover it earlier because it's incredibly entertaining and well-written. Great job, Author 👍😋
No feeling quite as annoying as seeing a promising ff and scrolling through the synopsis only to encounter a harem warning. 😞
I'm currently in the last chapter released and I have praise for the plot, despite having certain parts that were a bit rushed, overall it's very good, I don't understand some of the criticisms of people complaining about Lily and Snape, with James being dead and it took too long for him to return, and when he returned Lily had already developed feelings for Snape, and as in society itself it was no longer problematic to have a polygamous relationship, she gave him a choice accept this relationship or they would not be husband and wife (I may not have described correctly, it's been a long time since I read this part of the story), not to mention that this novel takes place in the HP Universe but it's not about HP or its protagonist Harry Potter but about Edward, and honestly most of the characters end up being more secondary than relevant characters, so for me they don't even matter enough for me to put down the novel because of that, not to mention that when you get married you literally agree with "until death do us part".
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Hello Author your novel is fantastic, so if you can add 3 to 5 chapter of classroom of the elite world in your novel. Please Please 🥺🥺
Thing about the new season of Stranger is the first season is the only thing I have left in the house to do so far so far so I can be ready to get back in bed by the time the new seasons come in the morning so that we don’t get to go back in time to watch it again in a few hours so that we get a chance and I don’t get a lot done but I’m going back in time for season three of Stranger to come in and get it and I can do the rest and I will get the job and I can go back on my life in a week or so I will get back in time and I can make sure I have a little more money on my car so that way I’m going back in the car so that will get it all the way home from the new seasons is it is a little more of that I can do that will get a lot more than I need it will get a lot more than that is that is a little more expensive and then I’ll get back in a week and I don’t want you can do that is that will get it will be like a little more money to do it is to do is I love to see if I don’t want it and I
Mc has a bottom line to not harm children but then uses another person to abuse and torture children so that ge does not have to feel bad about it. THIS NOVEL IS PROMOTING CHILD ABUSE.
My favorite stories are the ones with a darker Main character and one that is more selfish. It’s like listening/ reading about the way that would be the most enjoyable way to act In real life. This storie portrays those fantasies really well. Would recommend reading!!
the overall story is good specially about the omniverse travel and the power ranking system is really good i pretty much like it.. hmm I'd like to make a suggestion... what about visiting one piece and study the devil fruit and like make a tree that can grant powers without the curse of course.. well that's it first time doing this thing🤷
the power scale is one of the best I've seen in all the fics I've read the world building is decent there are little to no spelling errors in the story a decent update rate to so over all one of if not the beast story's I've ever read
Great novel, it has some ups and downs but overall it is much better than most of the novels out there. It's about the main character exploring the vast universe/multiverse around them with a cautious nature.
[img=update]História bacana, com personagens interessantes, principalmente o prota, não é perfeito claro, mas muito agradável. O prota e forte, mas com base no futuro da obra ele vai ficando mais e mais forte, só espero que ele não perca a essência do motivo original dele.
The story is about a guy who got reincarnated in H.P. during Voldemort's War but it tells his life after a couple of years later when head canon starts. The Plot= Dude died reincarnated to H.P. did the standard rise to power and riches routine but it is told in the background since we all know those tropes already. His main goal is unique because it's about finding a way to other dimesions. I mean he was like us mortals but then he got transported in H.P. but what about other fictional worlds? Can he traverse other worlds? That's his goal, to travel across dimensions. The setting= Almost original H.P. world but his previous actions during his early years change some of it but not too much. Just read I don't want to spoil. The MC= A curious MC. He's also self aware of what he's doing. He's like a chimera of Slytherin's ambition, Gryffindor's courage and Ravenclaw's pursuit of knowledge. (sad Hufflepuff) My verdict= So it's another fun H.P. fanfic for now. But think of it as a prologue of how the man discovers a way to other worlds. Enjoying it now because he's drive for his goal is actually fun. The choices he makes is all for that one goal. I do hope author gets to the point where he explore other worlds.
You may think I am stupid and unfair by giving five stars but this novel really deserves it.The reason is pretty simple .THE MC USES HIS BRAIN AS WELL AS THE ATHOR.I am not exaggerating when I say this is one of the most thoughtful novel on this platform not only is the MC well built but the world's and universes are so well thought out and with even real sciences
what is the raws name? ....... what is the raws name? ....... what is the raws name? what is the raws name? .......what is the raws name? .......what is the raws name? .......what is the raws name? .......what is the raws name? .......what is the raws name? ....... .......
Love this story. I remember reading this a long time ago when the mc was just getting past the full metal alchemist world, but left after no new updates came out during high school. Though I could’ve sworn that the entire back story from his rise to power in the first few chapters now actually happened in multiple chapters when he was younger when I first read this. Maybe it’s a different book but the auxiliary chapters and descriptions are the exact same. It’s driving me nuts!
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Membuka SPOILER Man, it's already a month please upload the ch now we can't wait any longer, please author I am begging you to upload, please from behalf of all faithful reader upload
overall it's good. ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is in French (because i'm not very good in english). L'histoire est excellente, les personnages sont bien développés, l'auteur comprend bien les histoires qu'il utilise et surtout, il arrive à les adapter. Même si la régularité n'est pas son fort, le novel mérite les 5 étoiles. Si jamais l'auteur lit ceci, ton travail est excellent, merci de l'avoir partagé. J'espère pouvoir continuer à le lire jusqu'à la fin.
Has dejado casi de lado las actualizaciones de este maravilloso libro y estas perdiendo tus seguidores hoy me planteo si dejar tu libro después de tantas donaciones que hice durante casi 2 años estuvo este dentro de mi favorito sino que se actualiza en mañana me despediré suerte y gracias
Has dejado casi de lado las actualizaciones de este maravilloso libro y estas perdiendo tus seguidores hoy me planteo si dejar tu libro después de tantas donación que hice durante casi 2 años estuvo este dentro de mi favorito sino actualizas en mañana me despediré suerte y gracias
Membuka SPOILER I'm absolutely living this fan fiction, I would love to see Edward go to the world of One Piece even though I know there is no magic in that world but I would just love to see it(or in this case read it). He could for example study how the Devil Fruits work, how haki works and somehow implement it in the profession of Aura masters. Overall I like the story so far(I'm currently on chapter 200-ish). Keep up the work author
Mc is confusing. One time is good, the writer presents him like he's good. He acts like his smart but he isn't. Every other character was just made dumber.
really love the novel! wish there were more chapters tho, finished all the available ones in 4 days lolol. author if you're reading this, can you make the mc go in the cyberpunk edgerunner universe and save david and rebecca? i feel like the tech in the night city will make the empire's tech go up a notch, especially in cybernetics, thank you :> just finished cyberpunk edgerunner and still sad about the main character's death :'>
Membuka SPOILER it's one of the best novel have read. this novel development and Author's ideas are Amazing.
Genial y demasiado lento desde hace rato............................................................................................................
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I Have Been reading this fanfic since 134th chapter release and right now i read 625th chapter and it is one of the best fanfics i have read. I hope it will go this way
This fanfiction is excellent, and I highly recommend it. I'm surprised I didn't discover it earlier because it's incredibly entertaining and well-written. Great job, Author 👍😋
No feeling quite as annoying as seeing a promising ff and scrolling through the synopsis only to encounter a harem warning. 😞
I'm currently in the last chapter released and I have praise for the plot, despite having certain parts that were a bit rushed, overall it's very good, I don't understand some of the criticisms of people complaining about Lily and Snape, with James being dead and it took too long for him to return, and when he returned Lily had already developed feelings for Snape, and as in society itself it was no longer problematic to have a polygamous relationship, she gave him a choice accept this relationship or they would not be husband and wife (I may not have described correctly, it's been a long time since I read this part of the story), not to mention that this novel takes place in the HP Universe but it's not about HP or its protagonist Harry Potter but about Edward, and honestly most of the characters end up being more secondary than relevant characters, so for me they don't even matter enough for me to put down the novel because of that, not to mention that when you get married you literally agree with "until death do us part".
Membuka SPOILER Hello Author your novel is fantastic, so if you can add 3 to 5 chapter of classroom of the elite world in your novel. Please Please 🥺🥺
Thing about the new season of Stranger is the first season is the only thing I have left in the house to do so far so far so I can be ready to get back in bed by the time the new seasons come in the morning so that we don’t get to go back in time to watch it again in a few hours so that we get a chance and I don’t get a lot done but I’m going back in time for season three of Stranger to come in and get it and I can do the rest and I will get the job and I can go back on my life in a week or so I will get back in time and I can make sure I have a little more money on my car so that way I’m going back in the car so that will get it all the way home from the new seasons is it is a little more of that I can do that will get a lot more than I need it will get a lot more than that is that is a little more expensive and then I’ll get back in a week and I don’t want you can do that is that will get it will be like a little more money to do it is to do is I love to see if I don’t want it and I
Mc has a bottom line to not harm children but then uses another person to abuse and torture children so that ge does not have to feel bad about it. THIS NOVEL IS PROMOTING CHILD ABUSE.
My favorite stories are the ones with a darker Main character and one that is more selfish. It’s like listening/ reading about the way that would be the most enjoyable way to act In real life. This storie portrays those fantasies really well. Would recommend reading!!
the overall story is good specially about the omniverse travel and the power ranking system is really good i pretty much like it.. hmm I'd like to make a suggestion... what about visiting one piece and study the devil fruit and like make a tree that can grant powers without the curse of course.. well that's it first time doing this thing🤷
the power scale is one of the best I've seen in all the fics I've read the world building is decent there are little to no spelling errors in the story a decent update rate to so over all one of if not the beast story's I've ever read
Great novel, it has some ups and downs but overall it is much better than most of the novels out there. It's about the main character exploring the vast universe/multiverse around them with a cautious nature.
[img=update]História bacana, com personagens interessantes, principalmente o prota, não é perfeito claro, mas muito agradável. O prota e forte, mas com base no futuro da obra ele vai ficando mais e mais forte, só espero que ele não perca a essência do motivo original dele.
The story is about a guy who got reincarnated in H.P. during Voldemort's War but it tells his life after a couple of years later when head canon starts. The Plot= Dude died reincarnated to H.P. did the standard rise to power and riches routine but it is told in the background since we all know those tropes already. His main goal is unique because it's about finding a way to other dimesions. I mean he was like us mortals but then he got transported in H.P. but what about other fictional worlds? Can he traverse other worlds? That's his goal, to travel across dimensions. The setting= Almost original H.P. world but his previous actions during his early years change some of it but not too much. Just read I don't want to spoil. The MC= A curious MC. He's also self aware of what he's doing. He's like a chimera of Slytherin's ambition, Gryffindor's courage and Ravenclaw's pursuit of knowledge. (sad Hufflepuff) My verdict= So it's another fun H.P. fanfic for now. But think of it as a prologue of how the man discovers a way to other worlds. Enjoying it now because he's drive for his goal is actually fun. The choices he makes is all for that one goal. I do hope author gets to the point where he explore other worlds.