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I like the story it's pretty good with a good start but I don't get all the hate it is getting I wish the author will come back. the thing about the titans is unique and cool but the only problem is the fact it does not go into detail about the powers as much as other fanfics
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Its a good story in my opinion. Wish there were more chapters thou. I pray you will come back from your haitus and write again but take your time its your choice. Well Ye thats all i wanted to say so Have a Good day mister authur. P.S im not an experience reader so i cant tell what things need improvment or what things are already good. I just like fhe story so keep up the good work mister aurthur. And remeber not all people who read this book hated it some liked it like me some so potential to improve so dont give up your work. People improve from hardships and failures so yes first few chapter might not be perfect but so what you could always rewrite the old mistakes with New experience and write better future chapters. So ye thats all i wanted to say so thank you authur for The good chapters i cant wait for more. I tried to edite my review but its hard God webnovel has hard review and copy past mechanism cant coPy my last sentence from the first Paragraph and put it in the end oH well we old do mistakes . And again have a good day mister authur and take your time. Love From reader ... (not that kind of love more like a letter you know how in the end of a letter people put Love from ... ye that kind i think) ( love comes in different forms dis one is a respect to you and your great fanfic)
It's kinda badㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Membuka SPOILER
I mean I like the idea but it was ruined with all the stupid wishes that he had he could have just asked to be able to modify his titan form and be done with it or have him reincarnate and have his quirk be a suprises.
Gg as a man is trash and totally unconvincing..................................................................................................................
This is what happens when the MC wants to be OP and want to be able to seduce any girl but has to keep up appearances infront of ROB. He literally went with 10/10 looks with charm and even a charm ability but suddenly thought oh ROB is watching me I can't be a bad person so, yeah I can only use it twice and only when the favorabili ty is very high. I wrote all this because I can't some up with any other season for him to nerf himself.
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I’m just doing this to start off the reviews, review my fic so I know if you guys are enjoying this or not. Comment your ideas and whatnot and make sure you give constructive critiscm.
I really like the twist the author threw in there about the mc’s quirk. I’m throughly enjoying the story and seeing it go forward. I am curious how he’s gonna resolve the whole women sharing thing with the girls. There’s lots of i guess easy fixes but those usually come with bigger groups. So definitely curious to see how the author helps the girls get over their conflicting feelings.
I LOVE IT ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
ive seen stories with the 9 titan powers on other websites/apps but they usually get dropped, I hope this one doesnt drop!
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Very well written I sincerely applaud. Chapter - 5 author burned his brain to get that idea out.**************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS NOVEL..............................................................................................................................
I like the story it's pretty good with a good start but I don't get all the hate it is getting I wish the author will come back. the thing about the titans is unique and cool but the only problem is the fact it does not go into detail about the powers as much as other fanfics
Adorei está obra Adorei está obra Adorei está obra Adorei está obra Adorei está obra Adorei está obra Adorei está obra Adorei está obra Adorei está obra Adorei está obra Adorei está obra Adorei está obra Adorei está obra Adorei está obra
Its a good story in my opinion. Wish there were more chapters thou. I pray you will come back from your haitus and write again but take your time its your choice. Well Ye thats all i wanted to say so Have a Good day mister authur. P.S im not an experience reader so i cant tell what things need improvment or what things are already good. I just like fhe story so keep up the good work mister aurthur. And remeber not all people who read this book hated it some liked it like me some so potential to improve so dont give up your work. People improve from hardships and failures so yes first few chapter might not be perfect but so what you could always rewrite the old mistakes with New experience and write better future chapters. So ye thats all i wanted to say so thank you authur for The good chapters i cant wait for more. I tried to edite my review but its hard God webnovel has hard review and copy past mechanism cant coPy my last sentence from the first Paragraph and put it in the end oH well we old do mistakes . And again have a good day mister authur and take your time. Love From reader ... (not that kind of love more like a letter you know how in the end of a letter people put Love from ... ye that kind i think) ( love comes in different forms dis one is a respect to you and your great fanfic)
It's kinda badㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Membuka SPOILER I mean I like the idea but it was ruined with all the stupid wishes that he had he could have just asked to be able to modify his titan form and be done with it or have him reincarnate and have his quirk be a suprises.
Gg as a man is trash and totally unconvincing..................................................................................................................
This is what happens when the MC wants to be OP and want to be able to seduce any girl but has to keep up appearances infront of ROB. He literally went with 10/10 looks with charm and even a charm ability but suddenly thought oh ROB is watching me I can't be a bad person so, yeah I can only use it twice and only when the favorabili ty is very high. I wrote all this because I can't some up with any other season for him to nerf himself.
.....................................,.................................................,.................................................,............
I’m just doing this to start off the reviews, review my fic so I know if you guys are enjoying this or not. Comment your ideas and whatnot and make sure you give constructive critiscm.
I really like the twist the author threw in there about the mc’s quirk. I’m throughly enjoying the story and seeing it go forward. I am curious how he’s gonna resolve the whole women sharing thing with the girls. There’s lots of i guess easy fixes but those usually come with bigger groups. So definitely curious to see how the author helps the girls get over their conflicting feelings.
I LOVE IT ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
ive seen stories with the 9 titan powers on other websites/apps but they usually get dropped, I hope this one doesnt drop!
More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More
More-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Incredible, I need to say no more 🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺🤺
Very well written I sincerely applaud. Chapter - 5 author burned his brain to get that idea out.**************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************
PLEASE CONTINUE THIS NOVEL..............................................................................................................................