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Tulis ulasanBe warned when he says the grammar is bad, it is REALLY bad. Like drunk texting your ex in the middle of the night bad. So many just straight up misspelled words that a quick reread or grammarly could fix, he constantly goes between using u and you every sentence which is kinda confusing. Iโm a big fan of both TBATE and Naruto so I was pretty exited and thought I could just ignore it, but unless it gets much better some point later on I donโt think I can. The story itself doesnโt seem too bad and the author did warn readers about the bad grammar in his synopsis, which is already quite cool of him since he says heโs just writing for fun, so not much to do about it. Just kinda sad that I thought I found a cool and unique story with two of my favorite verses, and kinda got turned off by the writing.
Sad that author can't continue this novel but its understandable from what happened to him. So the mc have some bit of Madara personality so not the story if you were searching for one where its fully Madara, also the writer like to use "u" instead of "you". Hmm i don't have anything else to say
Simplesmente estranho โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ
respect you author it really freaking good novel..... author don't drop this plesss๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
I made some bad comments in the first chapters but d*mn I love how author made this story. Mc is not acting like madara in the first years because he is not fully grown up but when he grows up, he acts like the real madara. It seems author managed to capture madara's personality. I hate tbate because of that whole School arc. The story went downhill after Elf Princess got another soul or something. But this story really made me want more.
it's a shame that such a good FF meet it's end so soon ๐ ฯ^ยฐยฐ}โฌ[โฌโ ยฅ{ยฅ{ยฅ[ยฅ{ยฅ{^โ ยฎยฎรรยฅยถโฌยถโฌ[โฌยฎยถโโฌ}ยข[โฌโ ยฎ}ยฎ}โฌโ ^_โ 6ยฝยฒยณโ ยฅยถยฅ{โฌ}โฌ}ยฎ[ยฎ{ยฅ}ยฅ{ยฅ{
Membuka SPOILERAuthor, will you continue to post chapters????????????????????? ???????????????????????mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Well at the start it sucks, but it progressively gets better. I almost quit reading this novel a few times, but I'm glad to say that I didn't! I'll give it a four star rating
Man I will say that I love your work, is entertaining, exiceted, and simple. The way you use madara and make him overpowered and use his power against those who oppose him is satisfactory. AND the reason way is my review low is because is that your writing is not the best and the history is simple due to how madara crush everybody and how he enjoy in the process.
าะพะน ะถะฐะฝัะผ ะฐั ะผะตะฝ ัะฐาะฐะฝ ะฐะนัััะผ ะผะตะฝ ะผะตะฝ ัะตะฝั าะฐััั าะฐััั ัะฐาัะฝะดัะผ าะฐััั ัะฐาัะฝะดัะผ ัะตะฝั าะฐััั าะฐััั ัะฐาัะฝะดัะผ าะพะน ะถะฐะฝัะผ ะฐั ะถะฐะฝัะผ ะฐั ะผะตะฝ ะดะต ัะพะปะฐะน ะพะนะปะฐะฟ ะตะดัะผ! ะะพะฝะพััะฑะฐ ะะฐัััะท าาฑััั ะฑะพะปััะฝ ะถะฐะฝัะผ ะผะตะฝัาฃ ะถาฏัะตะณัะผ ะผะตะฝัาฃ ะถาฏัะตะณัะผ ะฐััััะฟ ัาฑั
ะะฐะปะฐะน ะตะบะตะฝ ะตะบะตะฝ ะณะพะน ะฑะฐัะธ ะฝะพัะผะฐะปัะฝะพ! Rtgye rights reserved worldwide to get to a new and other items listed as an important in your password gag rights and other items listed below and the following information is an important
Tbate what you have not have the following review helpful for your password and other hand of your password is the following the first and is that are a few years and is an important role as well with
The only thing I don't like about this is how you messed up the timeline where tessia and arthurs interactions... ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐.............
good novel... ............................................................................................................................. .
Muy genial me gusta y creo que es excelente bueno me gusta y es genial sigue asรญ bro Muy genial me gusta y creo que es excelente bueno me gusta y es genial sigue asรญ bro
Increรญble fanfic amigo, la verdad que felicidades por el buen trabajo, espero sigas escribiendo ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐ฌ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ, estarรฉ al tanto de tus nuevos trabajos
๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค
Perfect One word to describe the fan fic. Madara's arrogance check, dominance check etc... i loved it was amazing. World, story everything perfect.
โM not sure wut to say... Ok the story is a preetyy good way to pass time. Itโs alright, so Iโm putting average for everything, 3 stars Ok I need to waste some letters
great novel, the whole shebang and good Grammer, only complaint is the story and characters especially the romance felt so emotionless, maybe it's just me idk, either way keep ep it up author
this fanfic is actually very good in my opinion let me tell you why. Well first off i like the beginning it was very interesting, he doesn't really tell us the world background that much and that's kinda fine i really don't mind it but it would be cool if he said the background more so we can picture where they at. Also he really updates a lot and i really appreciates that. the character design fine, i really love the story development it was so interesting i read through 50 chapters without knowing until now. the writing Quality pretty neat i Haven't seen that much mistakes but there still some writing mistakes. So after all i think it's deserves a 5 star thank you for reading my opinion and hope you have an fantastic day.
desculpe tenho que fala autor no ep 10 quando o cara chamou ele de pirralho ele estava ofendendo ele mas se lembra que ele nao podia deixar ninguen o ofender foi uma promeรงa pro tutor ou mordomo dele tamben nao force ele muito a ficar em lugarees que ele nao que seria otimo se vc mostrasse novos ambientes que nao foram mostrados nao obra tbat
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.....................................................................................................................................5_Star!..
La gramรกtica me parece bien a demรกs la actitud de Madara es casi igual o incluso de lo que fue en Naruto [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Membuka SPOILERmantap saya baru nemu novel yang bercerita tentang reinkarnasi ke The Beggining After the End, apalagi dengan karakter Uchiha Madara Dewa di Dunia Shinobi.. aah saya sangat menyukai novel ini.. dan saya mengharapkan novel ini agar tidak dropped,.. sekian dari saya terimakasih, semoga harimu menyenangkan! xD
i think your grammar is pretty good[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I don't know any of you guys, but i Respect you....HEAVY. . . This story is for my own enjoyment, so you can already understand that, I'm not taking it serious. For those who want to read it, just read it. But for those who wants a good grammar story, I'm sorry. This is not for you
Be warned when he says the grammar is bad, it is REALLY bad. Like drunk texting your ex in the middle of the night bad. So many just straight up misspelled words that a quick reread or grammarly could fix, he constantly goes between using u and you every sentence which is kinda confusing. Iโm a big fan of both TBATE and Naruto so I was pretty exited and thought I could just ignore it, but unless it gets much better some point later on I donโt think I can. The story itself doesnโt seem too bad and the author did warn readers about the bad grammar in his synopsis, which is already quite cool of him since he says heโs just writing for fun, so not much to do about it. Just kinda sad that I thought I found a cool and unique story with two of my favorite verses, and kinda got turned off by the writing.
Sad that author can't continue this novel but its understandable from what happened to him. So the mc have some bit of Madara personality so not the story if you were searching for one where its fully Madara, also the writer like to use "u" instead of "you". Hmm i don't have anything else to say
Simplesmente estranho โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ โโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโโ
respect you author it really freaking good novel..... author don't drop this plesss๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
I made some bad comments in the first chapters but d*mn I love how author made this story. Mc is not acting like madara in the first years because he is not fully grown up but when he grows up, he acts like the real madara. It seems author managed to capture madara's personality. I hate tbate because of that whole School arc. The story went downhill after Elf Princess got another soul or something. But this story really made me want more.
it's a shame that such a good FF meet it's end so soon ๐ ฯ^ยฐยฐ}โฌ[โฌโ ยฅ{ยฅ{ยฅ[ยฅ{ยฅ{^โ ยฎยฎรรยฅยถโฌยถโฌ[โฌยฎยถโโฌ}ยข[โฌโ ยฎ}ยฎ}โฌโ ^_โ 6ยฝยฒยณโ ยฅยถยฅ{โฌ}โฌ}ยฎ[ยฎ{ยฅ}ยฅ{ยฅ{
Membuka SPOILERAuthor, will you continue to post chapters????????????????????? ???????????????????????mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Well at the start it sucks, but it progressively gets better. I almost quit reading this novel a few times, but I'm glad to say that I didn't! I'll give it a four star rating
Man I will say that I love your work, is entertaining, exiceted, and simple. The way you use madara and make him overpowered and use his power against those who oppose him is satisfactory. AND the reason way is my review low is because is that your writing is not the best and the history is simple due to how madara crush everybody and how he enjoy in the process.
าะพะน ะถะฐะฝัะผ ะฐั ะผะตะฝ ัะฐาะฐะฝ ะฐะนัััะผ ะผะตะฝ ะผะตะฝ ัะตะฝั าะฐััั าะฐััั ัะฐาัะฝะดัะผ าะฐััั ัะฐาัะฝะดัะผ ัะตะฝั าะฐััั าะฐััั ัะฐาัะฝะดัะผ าะพะน ะถะฐะฝัะผ ะฐั ะถะฐะฝัะผ ะฐั ะผะตะฝ ะดะต ัะพะปะฐะน ะพะนะปะฐะฟ ะตะดัะผ! ะะพะฝะพััะฑะฐ ะะฐัััะท าาฑััั ะฑะพะปััะฝ ะถะฐะฝัะผ ะผะตะฝัาฃ ะถาฏัะตะณัะผ ะผะตะฝัาฃ ะถาฏัะตะณัะผ ะฐััััะฟ ัาฑั
ะะฐะปะฐะน ะตะบะตะฝ ะตะบะตะฝ ะณะพะน ะฑะฐัะธ ะฝะพัะผะฐะปัะฝะพ! Rtgye rights reserved worldwide to get to a new and other items listed as an important in your password gag rights and other items listed below and the following information is an important
Tbate what you have not have the following review helpful for your password and other hand of your password is the following the first and is that are a few years and is an important role as well with
The only thing I don't like about this is how you messed up the timeline where tessia and arthurs interactions... ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐.............
good novel... ............................................................................................................................. .
Muy genial me gusta y creo que es excelente bueno me gusta y es genial sigue asรญ bro Muy genial me gusta y creo que es excelente bueno me gusta y es genial sigue asรญ bro
Increรญble fanfic amigo, la verdad que felicidades por el buen trabajo, espero sigas escribiendo ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐ฌ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ, estarรฉ al tanto de tus nuevos trabajos
๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค๐ค
Perfect One word to describe the fan fic. Madara's arrogance check, dominance check etc... i loved it was amazing. World, story everything perfect.
โM not sure wut to say... Ok the story is a preetyy good way to pass time. Itโs alright, so Iโm putting average for everything, 3 stars Ok I need to waste some letters
great novel, the whole shebang and good Grammer, only complaint is the story and characters especially the romance felt so emotionless, maybe it's just me idk, either way keep ep it up author
this fanfic is actually very good in my opinion let me tell you why. Well first off i like the beginning it was very interesting, he doesn't really tell us the world background that much and that's kinda fine i really don't mind it but it would be cool if he said the background more so we can picture where they at. Also he really updates a lot and i really appreciates that. the character design fine, i really love the story development it was so interesting i read through 50 chapters without knowing until now. the writing Quality pretty neat i Haven't seen that much mistakes but there still some writing mistakes. So after all i think it's deserves a 5 star thank you for reading my opinion and hope you have an fantastic day.
desculpe tenho que fala autor no ep 10 quando o cara chamou ele de pirralho ele estava ofendendo ele mas se lembra que ele nao podia deixar ninguen o ofender foi uma promeรงa pro tutor ou mordomo dele tamben nao force ele muito a ficar em lugarees que ele nao que seria otimo se vc mostrasse novos ambientes que nao foram mostrados nao obra tbat
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.....................................................................................................................................5_Star!..
La gramรกtica me parece bien a demรกs la actitud de Madara es casi igual o incluso de lo que fue en Naruto [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Membuka SPOILERmantap saya baru nemu novel yang bercerita tentang reinkarnasi ke The Beggining After the End, apalagi dengan karakter Uchiha Madara Dewa di Dunia Shinobi.. aah saya sangat menyukai novel ini.. dan saya mengharapkan novel ini agar tidak dropped,.. sekian dari saya terimakasih, semoga harimu menyenangkan! xD
i think your grammar is pretty good[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I don't know any of you guys, but i Respect you....HEAVY. . . This story is for my own enjoyment, so you can already understand that, I'm not taking it serious. For those who want to read it, just read it. But for those who wants a good grammar story, I'm sorry. This is not for you