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Genial 👌 espero más capitulos!!!!😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
i have read this somewhere else too... Wattpad or probably in this site only...is this a copy paste book or are you gonna try to make it different
mainly the last part of this chapter when they find the protagonist passed out in the subway and they try to turn him into a demon created that this fanfic will have something different I really don't like the event.and especially when it was said that Rias and so would not ally.
nice Story just really bad grammar. A proof Reader should make it way better.....................................................................................................................
well not going to waste time , from what i see in the comments , the author is just crazy about the goku character then in the Forms for dxd universe and the system is really too controlling the owner . so the author made a 2x dxd fanfic and MC characters are just as boring and sickening. I always ask "does the writers who make things like this even berate the MCs that they made themselves? (sees that if you reincarnate you will act the same xixixi)
Interesting so far no complaints. Yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes
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Genial 👌 espero más capitulos!!!!😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
i have read this somewhere else too... Wattpad or probably in this site only...is this a copy paste book or are you gonna try to make it different
mainly the last part of this chapter when they find the protagonist passed out in the subway and they try to turn him into a demon created that this fanfic will have something different I really don't like the event.and especially when it was said that Rias and so would not ally.
nice Story just really bad grammar. A proof Reader should make it way better.....................................................................................................................
well not going to waste time , from what i see in the comments , the author is just crazy about the goku character then in the Forms for dxd universe and the system is really too controlling the owner . so the author made a 2x dxd fanfic and MC characters are just as boring and sickening. I always ask "does the writers who make things like this even berate the MCs that they made themselves? (sees that if you reincarnate you will act the same xixixi)
Interesting so far no complaints. Yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes
Membuka SPOILER
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