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This fanfiction is amazing... the only complain I have is its slow updates and the gradual shortening of chapters... I hope you will continue to write a lot of chapters....
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I loved this story so far and cannot wait till the next chapter ❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️ 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾 Loved the ending of chapter 7 with the in-house home run and that eijun still calls the coach boss😂😂
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I actually like the story and i hope you don't stop writing this fanfiction so i'll give you a five star rating so that i can support you and i hope this was able to motivate you to write more of thithis story.
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This is one of the very few baseball fanfics and I have to say, it is also one of the better ones. My only gripe is the interactions. The other side characters feel like they don't exist, MC keeps saying that the team is important but the interactions between him and the other players in his team are nonexistent. The comedic moments, fun moments, inspiring moments, it's almost like it's not there because it is heavily focused on the sole progress of the MC and his system.
Rlly good so far -;-;-;;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;/;/;/;;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;;-;-;-;-;-;-;/;-;-;;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;;-;-;-;-;/;-
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so far so good only downside is the chapters come out slowly........................................jxidjdkdjdjdkdkdkdkdjdjdjdjcjcjcjcjdjdjdkdkd
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Good.,.............................!!!!!!¡!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This is a great sports story. There are a couple sports story that grab my intrest and this is one of them. I just wish updates would be stable. I came across this story recently and read these 11 chapters and I'm hoping for more. I check every other day for updates.
This fanfiction is amazing... the only complain I have is its slow updates and the gradual shortening of chapters... I hope you will continue to write a lot of chapters....
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I loved this story so far and cannot wait till the next chapter ❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️❣️ 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾 Loved the ending of chapter 7 with the in-house home run and that eijun still calls the coach boss😂😂
Membuka SPOILER I actually like the story and i hope you don't stop writing this fanfiction so i'll give you a five star rating so that i can support you and i hope this was able to motivate you to write more of thithis story.
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This is one of the very few baseball fanfics and I have to say, it is also one of the better ones. My only gripe is the interactions. The other side characters feel like they don't exist, MC keeps saying that the team is important but the interactions between him and the other players in his team are nonexistent. The comedic moments, fun moments, inspiring moments, it's almost like it's not there because it is heavily focused on the sole progress of the MC and his system.
Rlly good so far -;-;-;;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;/;/;/;;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;;-;-;-;-;-;-;/;-;-;;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;-;;-;-;-;-;/;-
Membuka SPOILER so far so good only downside is the chapters come out slowly........................................jxidjdkdjdjdkdkdkdkdjdjdjdjcjcjcjcjdjdjdkdkd
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. .... . . . . .. ...... . .. . . . . . . . .
Good.,.............................!!!!!!¡!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This is a great sports story. There are a couple sports story that grab my intrest and this is one of them. I just wish updates would be stable. I came across this story recently and read these 11 chapters and I'm hoping for more. I check every other day for updates.