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It is not best i have read, but it shows great creativity in the story line. I like the MC but i wish there a more defined way of showing her power (like a system or comparison of other characters) otherwise great story. Ps: For future story's i recommend using a storyboard to make it easier for you to keep the story on track. That is all from me, keep up the good work hope to read more from you in the future.
the best story ive found of a second reincarnated person alongside rimuru. love the character, they are quite unique. really needs to be updated more like a lot more though. ive literally been searching the internet for months trying to find this story because it was so good and i couldnt find it.
Sheeshㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
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it's good there's few grammar mistakes the updates schedule is making me sad still overall it's a good read for me i hop the author can update it more so i can binge
will u be continuing this later down the line it is really good I do hope u continue this somewhat later again thankssss.......................................
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I want to see Demon Lord Shinju And Demon Lord Rimuru. if thay happens that will be pretty cool.. maybe lemon scenes with Lumi and Shinju? I am a man of culture after all..
So far it's pretty interesting and I'm enjoying it. Keep up the good work author!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I have read till chapter 10. All I can say is this is just copy-paste from the OG story with some extra pov... there is nothing new or unique or another element... I'm out! peace!
PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP
❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️
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One thing this story seems to be lacking is uniqueness, essentially what I am reading is a retelling of Tensei Slime but from a different perspective, I have already read the WN why would i read it basically again. Obviously the story is still in early days so it could go very differently but it could benefit from having new and different elements. One thing i think that could be really cool is a conflict of interest between Rimuru and OC, obviously they both have immensely different morals, one from a modern peaceful society the other from a seeming Grimdark world so their are going to be disagreements there and part of me even wants to see that to create factions within the TJF as one majour criticism i have of the OG story is that there isn't enough internal struggle and the addition of a second reincarnated person could really help stimulate that. Great story though, always looking forward to the updates.
Everything on this novel is written well so far and I hope author-san doesn't dropped this novel,keep a good work and I'm currently waiting for the update have a good day and take care yourself!
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Pretty good! keep up the great work, author-san! i love this fic =) <33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
I must say this novel in the first chapter was amazing with the main character killing 50,000 enemy troops, But in the next chapter where the main character arrives in the world of Tensura this novel goes bad. The main character has turned into a supporting character, The main character only existed as a complement to Rimuru's actions and only watched from the side. The character who was said to be used to killing and was respected by the people was just a naive character who didn't even interrupt Rimuru's rule that made his own people die. It's just like watching the anime with the addition of the main character of this novel, Quite disappointed to say the least. It really disappoints me to be honest. My dissapointment is immeasurable and my day has ruin.
Membuka SPOILER
5 star shameless review for myself cause why not, reincarnated as a slime is one if my favorite animes and i’ve been planning this fanfic for a few days now and it’s finally going to be released soon! I hope you all enjoy this fanfic as well as my other stories, this fanfic is written a bit differently by the way so if you don’t like it....well not much I can say or do but I hope you’ll all enjoy it when it gets released!
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It is not best i have read, but it shows great creativity in the story line. I like the MC but i wish there a more defined way of showing her power (like a system or comparison of other characters) otherwise great story. Ps: For future story's i recommend using a storyboard to make it easier for you to keep the story on track. That is all from me, keep up the good work hope to read more from you in the future.
the best story ive found of a second reincarnated person alongside rimuru. love the character, they are quite unique. really needs to be updated more like a lot more though. ive literally been searching the internet for months trying to find this story because it was so good and i couldnt find it.
Sheeshㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ
Membuka SPOILER it's good there's few grammar mistakes the updates schedule is making me sad still overall it's a good read for me i hop the author can update it more so i can binge
will u be continuing this later down the line it is really good I do hope u continue this somewhat later again thankssss.......................................
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I want to see Demon Lord Shinju And Demon Lord Rimuru. if thay happens that will be pretty cool.. maybe lemon scenes with Lumi and Shinju? I am a man of culture after all..
So far it's pretty interesting and I'm enjoying it. Keep up the good work author!👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I have read till chapter 10. All I can say is this is just copy-paste from the OG story with some extra pov... there is nothing new or unique or another element... I'm out! peace!
PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP PLEASE DON'T DROP
❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️
❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️Yuri_is_life❤️❤️
One thing this story seems to be lacking is uniqueness, essentially what I am reading is a retelling of Tensei Slime but from a different perspective, I have already read the WN why would i read it basically again. Obviously the story is still in early days so it could go very differently but it could benefit from having new and different elements. One thing i think that could be really cool is a conflict of interest between Rimuru and OC, obviously they both have immensely different morals, one from a modern peaceful society the other from a seeming Grimdark world so their are going to be disagreements there and part of me even wants to see that to create factions within the TJF as one majour criticism i have of the OG story is that there isn't enough internal struggle and the addition of a second reincarnated person could really help stimulate that. Great story though, always looking forward to the updates.
Everything on this novel is written well so far and I hope author-san doesn't dropped this novel,keep a good work and I'm currently waiting for the update have a good day and take care yourself!
nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice ecin nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice nice
✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨Awesome fanfic✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨ ✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨✨
Pretty good! keep up the great work, author-san! i love this fic =) <33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
I must say this novel in the first chapter was amazing with the main character killing 50,000 enemy troops, But in the next chapter where the main character arrives in the world of Tensura this novel goes bad. The main character has turned into a supporting character, The main character only existed as a complement to Rimuru's actions and only watched from the side. The character who was said to be used to killing and was respected by the people was just a naive character who didn't even interrupt Rimuru's rule that made his own people die. It's just like watching the anime with the addition of the main character of this novel, Quite disappointed to say the least. It really disappoints me to be honest. My dissapointment is immeasurable and my day has ruin.
Membuka SPOILER 5 star shameless review for myself cause why not, reincarnated as a slime is one if my favorite animes and i’ve been planning this fanfic for a few days now and it’s finally going to be released soon! I hope you all enjoy this fanfic as well as my other stories, this fanfic is written a bit differently by the way so if you don’t like it....well not much I can say or do but I hope you’ll all enjoy it when it gets released!
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