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more chapters please ..........................................................................................................................................................
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Very nice. It is very rare to find a good steven universe fanfic with good flow.
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There aren't any good Steven Universe fanfics on this app except one other. And this is a pretty good take on it and loving it so far, just wish there were more chapters. Oh and if anyone knows a good Steven Universe fanfic please let me know.
the story is really beautiful and innovative even if the author I think he did not understand that all the abilities of the crystals are the manipulation of forces such as heat, light, magnetism and various abilities such as gravitational control there are no "elemental" powers so I hope that the author doesn't spoil the universe yes Steven (if he goes to other universes I don't care, I just wish he didn't spoil the original) in the canon series the gem technology has reached the multiversal level and can even get you to take fantastic characters and make them become real, however the pace of the story is good only that there are too many gems to match the various anime characters, I appreciate the idea it seems a bit ugly, the update of the chapters is slow and the length of the ch is quite good . you don't find many steven universe ff so I think it's very nice as a story
i already read and reread the description of the appearance of black but i cant realy imagine her so i just see her like this but more beauty
the story is quite entertaining. 100% recommendable. ........................................................................................................
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it's amazing, keep up the good work. I looked through many fanfics of SU but none of them were good in my opinion. I hope you don't drop it, would be sad to see such potential wasted.
Franchement je vois pas beaucoup de fanfic sur Steven universe et quand j'envoie ils sont pour la plupart trΓ¨s mauvais et trΓ¨s mal Γ©crit mais je dois admettre que celui-lΓ n'en fais pas partie je trouve le concept intΓ©ressant j'espΓ¨re pouvoir voir une suite parce que franchement c'est trop bien donc j'encourage fortement l'auteur a continuΓ© cette Εuvre[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
It is an interesting concept I have only ever found one other steven universe fanfiction that is still updating. I find the Steven universe fanfictions cool because I like the world and the quality is very good
A very interesting story. Always looking forward to more. I definitely can't wait to see the changes slowly happen over the course of the story :)
Looking forward to more of this. Have this cutie.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
more chapters please ..........................................................................................................................................................
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.................................................................................................................................................. 5.0
Very nice. It is very rare to find a good steven universe fanfic with good flow.
:,ππππππππππππͺπππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππβΊβΊππππππβΊβΊππππππβΊβΊπππππππππππππππππππππβΊππππͺπππππππππ
There aren't any good Steven Universe fanfics on this app except one other. And this is a pretty good take on it and loving it so far, just wish there were more chapters. Oh and if anyone knows a good Steven Universe fanfic please let me know.
the story is really beautiful and innovative even if the author I think he did not understand that all the abilities of the crystals are the manipulation of forces such as heat, light, magnetism and various abilities such as gravitational control there are no "elemental" powers so I hope that the author doesn't spoil the universe yes Steven (if he goes to other universes I don't care, I just wish he didn't spoil the original) in the canon series the gem technology has reached the multiversal level and can even get you to take fantastic characters and make them become real, however the pace of the story is good only that there are too many gems to match the various anime characters, I appreciate the idea it seems a bit ugly, the update of the chapters is slow and the length of the ch is quite good . you don't find many steven universe ff so I think it's very nice as a story
i already read and reread the description of the appearance of black but i cant realy imagine her so i just see her like this but more beauty
the story is quite entertaining. 100% recommendable. ........................................................................................................
Writing quality [β β β β ] Story development [β β β β β ] Character design [β β β β β ] Updating Stability [β β β β β ] world background [β β β β β ] the story is amazing and interesting,Can't wait to see more ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
it's amazing, keep up the good work. I looked through many fanfics of SU but none of them were good in my opinion. I hope you don't drop it, would be sad to see such potential wasted.
Franchement je vois pas beaucoup de fanfic sur Steven universe et quand j'envoie ils sont pour la plupart trΓ¨s mauvais et trΓ¨s mal Γ©crit mais je dois admettre que celui-lΓ n'en fais pas partie je trouve le concept intΓ©ressant j'espΓ¨re pouvoir voir une suite parce que franchement c'est trop bien donc j'encourage fortement l'auteur a continuΓ© cette Εuvre[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
It is an interesting concept I have only ever found one other steven universe fanfiction that is still updating. I find the Steven universe fanfictions cool because I like the world and the quality is very good
A very interesting story. Always looking forward to more. I definitely can't wait to see the changes slowly happen over the course of the story :)
Looking forward to more of this. Have this cutie.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
One of the best and most entertainment fanfics Iβve read.