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Hilarious..... Is the one word that can discribe this novel perfectly for me.. Ohh author amazing work. character design is very amazing. my most favourite character till now is jiaxin and how can i forget Sleep of god. Jiaxin's humour is just...Extra level. What caught me off guard was that reincarnation of the late Li jing. Never saw that coming. But it is unique approach. I mean she died and someone else's in her body so she also should get new chance at life World background is very good. Story development is very smooth. For me this book has it all. Nice story line, amazing characters, suspens and the best part is its diloges and comedy. I think you should add one more comady tag ahahha. As i can see there is some grammar mistakes here and there but its not much of a problem since as a author i also suffer form bad English. But no worries they didn't make story any less better. You can use garmarly app for that. I have started to use it and its working good for me. At the end this book is very amazing and worth at least one read. I bet you won't regret it.
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The author giving the 2nd review: It wasn't my intention but I just couldn't help. The same old thing: grammar needs to improve. If you had read with focus then you would know that the book is now improved. I used Grammarly and changed the majority of things. Yes, a few grammatical errors still are here but not enough that most of you are mentioning it again and again!! I am a human whose first language isn't English. Cut me some slack!! PS: I am sorry if I sound rude but it's frustrating, to be honest. purple you all and love yourself 💜~~
First of all the synopsis is great. Second to the actual story. Great story with unique twist that all tie up very well without any loose ends. Grammar needs ish work, but it didn't bother me and my grammar also is off from time to time (curse of not being a native English speaker). Enjoyed it more then I thought I would.
This story doesn't shame of having humanly imperfect and flawed characters, which, combined with their relationships and their colliding interests, allows for very interesting dynamics. It keeps itself at a good pace instead of getting stagnated in the same place or jumping too quickly into the next thing and doesn't overwhelm you with text walls while still being clear and descriptive. Recommended!
Well written with good humor aspects to it. Also like your author notes, it makes us get to know you in a way. I have high hopes for this book.
Reviewing from the fourth chapter~ The story is really interesting and I love how the FL casually roast the god of sleep🤣 It's a fun read!!
This book is a gem. I love the characters and story line. I don't usually read female lead novels, but I'll make an exception for this. I recommend it to every reader too.
Great book, great writing and superb character development.The book stays consistent with writing and develops the world beautifully. Absolutely love how the MC learns her own potential. 5 stars all day long! Keep it up Author!
Review after 4 chapters Rating it with 5/5 This book has a creative way of exposition which would make the reader imagine the setting. Story pace seems to be just right. I didn't get the chance to read all the MC, as there should be 6, but the first MC design seems to maintain her character. It would be exciting to see her development. My only pointer is that when creating a chapter and starting with a particular character's point of view, only use the third person pronoun (she/he) for the person who owns the point of view. If the story needs to describe a different character, use an entire paragraph, perhaps with three sentences and include the name of the person being discussed with the third person pronoun. Overall, this has a good story. Good work!
At first, I thought this will be a book about a Cinderella-like stepdaughter who got sacrificed into a loveless marriage so that her family can prosper, and I was not excited about one more of those stories. But then... BOOM! There were angels and Gods and the FL found herself in the middle of a murder mystery in ancient times. Now, that's what I call an unexpected twist! The author's style is good as I like comedy and sarcasm intertwined into the story. Keep up the good work, author! 👍
so far so good I have read a few chapters and I have come to find out that this is an amazing book, i love the humour in the story a lot and I couldn't stop myself from laughing. good work author ❤️❤️❤️❤️
A refreshing story to read. The characters are well described and written. The pace of the story is well balanced and the writing quality is good. Keep up the good work.
Just read the few chapters and I can say this story here is gold! This book will make you laugh and cry along with the characters. And at some point, you would like to imagine yourself at the place of main character. Oh, and main character being a BTS army is an extra plus for me. Loving this book, dear author. Fighting!!
A fun read. I really like this story. Editing would really help it though and would go a long way into improving it. And, the creativity is refreshing! Looking forward to it.
I have to say.. Wow! I love the character development and the banter! The conversations are so natural and so interesting!! I need more chapters! I need them now!!
I love how funny the interaction of the character is! Very nice work. What I really appreciate here is how Author-san takes her time in detailing the mindset/point of view of the characters. Keep it up! <3
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I love this book. First thing I notice is the sweet, encouraging note of the author in the introductory chapter. Thank you for that. Then I notice how funny the author is! I love an author with a good sense of humour. Your book is sweet, relaxing and entertaining. I totally recommend to everyone! Great job author![img=recommend]
This book is a absolute masterpiece! I like the way the author wrote the story, it was unique and interesting, the plot was amazing and it adds on to the greatness of the story!! The book was easy to understand even though there were some small minor grammatical errors but it's fine! I'll say this book has the potential, I hope you keep up the good work of yours and hope to see more of where this will lead to~ good job author! [img=recommend]
what a fascinating book! the plot? Great. The characters? Fantastic. The way the author pulls it all into the chapters is even better. This book is a must read.
This novel has an interesting plot. I like it after reading three chapters and I will continue reading it :) Keep up the good work Author. Cheers.
LOVE IT! Disclaimer: I am a sucker for these types of stories anyway, but this one is really good! I love the plot and characters, and the author's writing style is great. Overall, it's really well done and I would definitely recommend it (:
I loved reading this story and I am so into the historical, romance genre. The story is nicely executed. Also I really liked the female lead and how the author showed the good side of every character. Keep it up. I am so rating this a 5 star.
I love the turn this story takes! I won't spoil anything but it is a great one! It is interesting how everyone is an MC. It makes it so you can fall in love with many different characters. Keep up the wonderful work!
This book is awesome, the character designs are well-written, it feels realistic, the writing quality is good, story development is going well. It was a great reading experience for me. I look forward to more updates and I will recommend everyone who is into this genre. Great job, author.
The plot dives straight to the point giving us the reader a chance to settle in and enjoy the story as a whole. Good background of the characters and a nice storyline. This story sure does have potential
the story and plot is so good and well thought , the characters are fresh the story hooks from the start and starts dope but if the writer chooses some other words in some paragraphs it could connect more overall good read
This author has the ability to come up with compelling storylines that almost force one to keep reading their work. Their love for writing is evident throughout the novel thus far, as is the reason for my five-star rating. The writer would do well to stabilise their audience more; create a consistent atmosphere within their novel (This can be done by building an emotion within yourself before you begin writing your chapter and keeping to the ambience of that emotion as you construct your story. Avoid switching from formal to informal narration to give your writing a more experienced feel.) Furthermore, synonyms are the spice of life. There are so many ways to says beautiful: gorgeous, magnificent, ephemeral, stunning, apple of the eye. By adding more flavours to the dish of your writing, you could escalate it to greater levels. All the best!
Nice story author! But I can't review much because I need more and more updates! Don't stop here! I really support the female lead. Kudos to the author!!!
"I am the one I should love in this world " 💜 Shameless but beautiful author here ✧(｡•̀ᴗ-)✧ giving her own work 5star ≧﹏≦ Maybe you will find grammatical or spelling mistake here and there but feel free to correct them. Correction with care is acceptable but I won't be taking any hate from anyone. Show love, support and care. Love you all (^з^)-☆Chu!! PS : stream BTS songs for a better life 💜
Hilarious..... Is the one word that can discribe this novel perfectly for me.. Ohh author amazing work. character design is very amazing. my most favourite character till now is jiaxin and how can i forget Sleep of god. Jiaxin's humour is just...Extra level. What caught me off guard was that reincarnation of the late Li jing. Never saw that coming. But it is unique approach. I mean she died and someone else's in her body so she also should get new chance at life World background is very good. Story development is very smooth. For me this book has it all. Nice story line, amazing characters, suspens and the best part is its diloges and comedy. I think you should add one more comady tag ahahha. As i can see there is some grammar mistakes here and there but its not much of a problem since as a author i also suffer form bad English. But no worries they didn't make story any less better. You can use garmarly app for that. I have started to use it and its working good for me. At the end this book is very amazing and worth at least one read. I bet you won't regret it.
Membuka SPOILER The author giving the 2nd review: It wasn't my intention but I just couldn't help. The same old thing: grammar needs to improve. If you had read with focus then you would know that the book is now improved. I used Grammarly and changed the majority of things. Yes, a few grammatical errors still are here but not enough that most of you are mentioning it again and again!! I am a human whose first language isn't English. Cut me some slack!! PS: I am sorry if I sound rude but it's frustrating, to be honest. purple you all and love yourself 💜~~
First of all the synopsis is great. Second to the actual story. Great story with unique twist that all tie up very well without any loose ends. Grammar needs ish work, but it didn't bother me and my grammar also is off from time to time (curse of not being a native English speaker). Enjoyed it more then I thought I would.
This story doesn't shame of having humanly imperfect and flawed characters, which, combined with their relationships and their colliding interests, allows for very interesting dynamics. It keeps itself at a good pace instead of getting stagnated in the same place or jumping too quickly into the next thing and doesn't overwhelm you with text walls while still being clear and descriptive. Recommended!
Well written with good humor aspects to it. Also like your author notes, it makes us get to know you in a way. I have high hopes for this book.
Reviewing from the fourth chapter~ The story is really interesting and I love how the FL casually roast the god of sleep🤣 It's a fun read!!
This book is a gem. I love the characters and story line. I don't usually read female lead novels, but I'll make an exception for this. I recommend it to every reader too.
Great book, great writing and superb character development.The book stays consistent with writing and develops the world beautifully. Absolutely love how the MC learns her own potential. 5 stars all day long! Keep it up Author!
Review after 4 chapters Rating it with 5/5 This book has a creative way of exposition which would make the reader imagine the setting. Story pace seems to be just right. I didn't get the chance to read all the MC, as there should be 6, but the first MC design seems to maintain her character. It would be exciting to see her development. My only pointer is that when creating a chapter and starting with a particular character's point of view, only use the third person pronoun (she/he) for the person who owns the point of view. If the story needs to describe a different character, use an entire paragraph, perhaps with three sentences and include the name of the person being discussed with the third person pronoun. Overall, this has a good story. Good work!
At first, I thought this will be a book about a Cinderella-like stepdaughter who got sacrificed into a loveless marriage so that her family can prosper, and I was not excited about one more of those stories. But then... BOOM! There were angels and Gods and the FL found herself in the middle of a murder mystery in ancient times. Now, that's what I call an unexpected twist! The author's style is good as I like comedy and sarcasm intertwined into the story. Keep up the good work, author! 👍
so far so good I have read a few chapters and I have come to find out that this is an amazing book, i love the humour in the story a lot and I couldn't stop myself from laughing. good work author ❤️❤️❤️❤️
A refreshing story to read. The characters are well described and written. The pace of the story is well balanced and the writing quality is good. Keep up the good work.
Just read the few chapters and I can say this story here is gold! This book will make you laugh and cry along with the characters. And at some point, you would like to imagine yourself at the place of main character. Oh, and main character being a BTS army is an extra plus for me. Loving this book, dear author. Fighting!!
A fun read. I really like this story. Editing would really help it though and would go a long way into improving it. And, the creativity is refreshing! Looking forward to it.
I have to say.. Wow! I love the character development and the banter! The conversations are so natural and so interesting!! I need more chapters! I need them now!!
I love how funny the interaction of the character is! Very nice work. What I really appreciate here is how Author-san takes her time in detailing the mindset/point of view of the characters. Keep it up! <3
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 Love it.
I love this book. First thing I notice is the sweet, encouraging note of the author in the introductory chapter. Thank you for that. Then I notice how funny the author is! I love an author with a good sense of humour. Your book is sweet, relaxing and entertaining. I totally recommend to everyone! Great job author![img=recommend]
This book is a absolute masterpiece! I like the way the author wrote the story, it was unique and interesting, the plot was amazing and it adds on to the greatness of the story!! The book was easy to understand even though there were some small minor grammatical errors but it's fine! I'll say this book has the potential, I hope you keep up the good work of yours and hope to see more of where this will lead to~ good job author! [img=recommend]
what a fascinating book! the plot? Great. The characters? Fantastic. The way the author pulls it all into the chapters is even better. This book is a must read.
This novel has an interesting plot. I like it after reading three chapters and I will continue reading it :) Keep up the good work Author. Cheers.
LOVE IT! Disclaimer: I am a sucker for these types of stories anyway, but this one is really good! I love the plot and characters, and the author's writing style is great. Overall, it's really well done and I would definitely recommend it (:
I loved reading this story and I am so into the historical, romance genre. The story is nicely executed. Also I really liked the female lead and how the author showed the good side of every character. Keep it up. I am so rating this a 5 star.
I love the turn this story takes! I won't spoil anything but it is a great one! It is interesting how everyone is an MC. It makes it so you can fall in love with many different characters. Keep up the wonderful work!
This book is awesome, the character designs are well-written, it feels realistic, the writing quality is good, story development is going well. It was a great reading experience for me. I look forward to more updates and I will recommend everyone who is into this genre. Great job, author.
The plot dives straight to the point giving us the reader a chance to settle in and enjoy the story as a whole. Good background of the characters and a nice storyline. This story sure does have potential
the story and plot is so good and well thought , the characters are fresh the story hooks from the start and starts dope but if the writer chooses some other words in some paragraphs it could connect more overall good read
This author has the ability to come up with compelling storylines that almost force one to keep reading their work. Their love for writing is evident throughout the novel thus far, as is the reason for my five-star rating. The writer would do well to stabilise their audience more; create a consistent atmosphere within their novel (This can be done by building an emotion within yourself before you begin writing your chapter and keeping to the ambience of that emotion as you construct your story. Avoid switching from formal to informal narration to give your writing a more experienced feel.) Furthermore, synonyms are the spice of life. There are so many ways to says beautiful: gorgeous, magnificent, ephemeral, stunning, apple of the eye. By adding more flavours to the dish of your writing, you could escalate it to greater levels. All the best!
Nice story author! But I can't review much because I need more and more updates! Don't stop here! I really support the female lead. Kudos to the author!!!
"I am the one I should love in this world " 💜 Shameless but beautiful author here ✧(｡•̀ᴗ-)✧ giving her own work 5star ≧﹏≦ Maybe you will find grammatical or spelling mistake here and there but feel free to correct them. Correction with care is acceptable but I won't be taking any hate from anyone. Show love, support and care. Love you all (^з^)-☆Chu!! PS : stream BTS songs for a better life 💜