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Highschool DxD the son of skeleton dragon king
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A teenager called Kai was raised in a church as an orphan. But he then moves back to Japan because of the old church being too small for the other children to live in so Kai returns with his new girlfriend Mia,but fate has plans for just having one lover and meeting an old friend from the past before he moved also the truth behind his origin before he ended up in the hands of sister Vivian and the farther of the church.
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Honestly speaking, this novel is horrid. The only reason it didn't get a 1 star is because I reserved that rating for trash novels. The writing quality is only one step above mtl. Even mtl has a proper sentence structure. The author somehow doesn't know how to use a full stop or comma properly. Just reading it makes me feel suffocated like I was rapping for 3 mins straight. The conversations are also horrible. It felt too forced and direct. The rest is pretty fine. MC's background is pretty cliche but that's what anime is so I don't really mind that. Unfortunately, the story development was VERY unsatisfactory. Not being rude but you're better off spending your time reading something else.
good idea but chapters are to short make em 10 pages at least and maybe 3 chapters a week probably 2 chapters monday friday and if 3 monday wednesday and friday your wasting the talent you have with the 2-3 page chapters that make it unbearable to read
listen man same thing as before its good but your chapters are too short plese make them longer . z z z z zz. z z z. z z z. z z z z. z z z z z
The idea behind the fanfic is really good. The fanfic is only going along the anime storyline, but the personality of character was changed so bad that it makes no sense (for example Sona). The existing OC should have changend the plot. (spoiler: in the first conflict between OC and Raynare, Raynare had to flee, but on the date between OC and Asia Raynare could kidnap Asia alone. Another example is the scene of Isseis death. OC could have safed him and not only watched how he died.)
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