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It is a real shame that this story is no longer being updated, I hope one day this project will be resumed although I can sense that the efforts are directed towards the other story that is being carried out.
Lastima el abandono.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Was enjoying the ride but disappointed this was dropped. Though i wasnt particularly happy about the vampire plotline. It felt like author made too much of a big deal of it than it actually was. But very annoyed theres no notice of this being dropped. I wanted more
its very good, mc is very likeable and comedy is fantastic. one of the very few downside is the dramas it has about traumas and the fact that it has dropped for a fanfic which was bad against this one in my opinion. i hope someday you will continue writing this author. im out✌
while I like the story I'm going to have to agree with the multiple of people who have been discouraged to read it because an author drops a story that had A LOT of potential to be really good for another book of the same world. I like how you put some of the cannon but made good use of the ripple effect. this book should be continued
Hey dude will you be continuing this fanfic....This the fanfic that actually brought me into the the fanfic world so just wanna say thanks for that
amigo por favor vuelve a actualizar la historia, enserio la estoy amando pero no veo actualización y en patrón está hasta el capítulo 178, por favor amo esta serie :(
Es una historia que conocí en YouTube per la quise buscar desde el original me costó mucho encontrarla pero está muy buena tiene un buen desarrollo de personaje con un toque cómico espero con ansia los siguientes capítulos
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The author lied to us, he/she promised about a great story about goblet of fire, but it wasn't even in the story. I'm quite mad about that... Even more so, because I enjoyed it so much!!!
A bit dark but the best HP fanfic I have read so far , thanks snollgoster It has intresting plots , goes way out of hp to even say it is a fanfic
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Pls resume this amazing novel. I love your other novel too but I feel this has a better mc with better powers. I would rate this 5 stars if the author resumes this novel This is one of the best hp fanfics and deserves to be completed
It's so far so good. u know in most reincarnated or transmigration novels , when the topic of the Mc's childhood is being written - the writers mostly focus on who he meets or how he power ups , but mainly forgets about what he is going through or delivers it poorly . I mean I read these type of novels in 100s but very few(like <10) wrote about a kid having to loose his milk teeth and awkward smile in front of mirrors. T author did a great job in bringing out these minor but better details and made the story more realistic ☺️. i started reading this when there are already 170 chs but no update 😢, so i gave only 4 * in that ,hope u don't mind.
I just don't like how this begins. The actions the MC takes are too unrealistic and its jarring. I really cant get submerged in the story due to the characters weird choices and reactions.
Me encanta esta historia la forma en que se desarrolla y los personajes algunas abilidades son omuy op pero que mas puedo pedir, porfavor mas capitulos
It is a good novel but idk why author writing another novel while the first is not done yet..so the update fr the first novel is halted fr now. Last update is last month.. Dear author, Pls give this more thought on which novel to prioritize so you wouldn’t loose your readers. I see some of the authors do this because they either got “bored” or have no idea to write any plot anymore.
where are you author-san come back.. ....... ...... ..... ...... ........ . .... ...... ......... ......... ......... ........ ....
Uma ótima historia, bastante interessante tem um bom desenvolvimento, gostaria de saber se o sr. SnollyGoster poderia publicar a fanfic essa e outras suas em outros locais, além patreon, devido a recente atualização da webnovel se possível, obrigado . Não pare é uma ótima historia.
Can you pass this FF to Scribble Hub and also continue the other one there, what webnovel have done to force us to download the app and no consider a lot of us use laptops or PC that are no compatible is just stupid
Can you post this on scribblehub, now computer users can't read any fanfiction on webnovel it seems....................................................
So, this review is after I've written 90 chapters of the story. First of all, I'd like to say that this is a story through which I'm improving my writing. And as you might have noticed, it's currently improved enough to have quite high rankings if I update it regularly. It starts off cliche, since I didn't have anything planned at that time, but as the story progressed I had quite a few strokes of geniuses and was able to put some very unique and interesting factors to the story. Now, the character, the story, and the world has me so engrossed that I can't quit writing this story halfway, neither can I just rush it. Though I'm pretty sure I wouldn't be allowed to do that even if I wanted to, since many readers are even more immersed in it that I am. So, whoever actually read this whole rant, I'd give you some useful info. as well: ->Pacing: Slow-medium ->Lenght of chapters, from chapter 90 onwards, it's 2000-3000. since there are pátreon suppoters now. ->Pairing: Undecided. There's romance, but not yet committed relationship. There will be sweetness and quarreling. But there will be no drama like ntr.
It is a real shame that this story is no longer being updated, I hope one day this project will be resumed although I can sense that the efforts are directed towards the other story that is being carried out.
Lastima el abandono.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Was enjoying the ride but disappointed this was dropped. Though i wasnt particularly happy about the vampire plotline. It felt like author made too much of a big deal of it than it actually was. But very annoyed theres no notice of this being dropped. I wanted more
its very good, mc is very likeable and comedy is fantastic. one of the very few downside is the dramas it has about traumas and the fact that it has dropped for a fanfic which was bad against this one in my opinion. i hope someday you will continue writing this author. im out✌
while I like the story I'm going to have to agree with the multiple of people who have been discouraged to read it because an author drops a story that had A LOT of potential to be really good for another book of the same world. I like how you put some of the cannon but made good use of the ripple effect. this book should be continued
Hey dude will you be continuing this fanfic....This the fanfic that actually brought me into the the fanfic world so just wanna say thanks for that
amigo por favor vuelve a actualizar la historia, enserio la estoy amando pero no veo actualización y en patrón está hasta el capítulo 178, por favor amo esta serie :(
Es una historia que conocí en YouTube per la quise buscar desde el original me costó mucho encontrarla pero está muy buena tiene un buen desarrollo de personaje con un toque cómico espero con ansia los siguientes capítulos
Membuka SPOILER The author lied to us, he/she promised about a great story about goblet of fire, but it wasn't even in the story. I'm quite mad about that... Even more so, because I enjoyed it so much!!!
A bit dark but the best HP fanfic I have read so far , thanks snollgoster It has intresting plots , goes way out of hp to even say it is a fanfic
......................................................................................................................................................................
Pls resume this amazing novel. I love your other novel too but I feel this has a better mc with better powers. I would rate this 5 stars if the author resumes this novel This is one of the best hp fanfics and deserves to be completed
It's so far so good. u know in most reincarnated or transmigration novels , when the topic of the Mc's childhood is being written - the writers mostly focus on who he meets or how he power ups , but mainly forgets about what he is going through or delivers it poorly . I mean I read these type of novels in 100s but very few(like <10) wrote about a kid having to loose his milk teeth and awkward smile in front of mirrors. T author did a great job in bringing out these minor but better details and made the story more realistic ☺️. i started reading this when there are already 170 chs but no update 😢, so i gave only 4 * in that ,hope u don't mind.
I just don't like how this begins. The actions the MC takes are too unrealistic and its jarring. I really cant get submerged in the story due to the characters weird choices and reactions.
Me encanta esta historia la forma en que se desarrolla y los personajes algunas abilidades son omuy op pero que mas puedo pedir, porfavor mas capitulos
It is a good novel but idk why author writing another novel while the first is not done yet..so the update fr the first novel is halted fr now. Last update is last month.. Dear author, Pls give this more thought on which novel to prioritize so you wouldn’t loose your readers. I see some of the authors do this because they either got “bored” or have no idea to write any plot anymore.
where are you author-san come back.. ....... ...... ..... ...... ........ . .... ...... ......... ......... ......... ........ ....
Uma ótima historia, bastante interessante tem um bom desenvolvimento, gostaria de saber se o sr. SnollyGoster poderia publicar a fanfic essa e outras suas em outros locais, além patreon, devido a recente atualização da webnovel se possível, obrigado . Não pare é uma ótima historia.
Can you pass this FF to Scribble Hub and also continue the other one there, what webnovel have done to force us to download the app and no consider a lot of us use laptops or PC that are no compatible is just stupid
Can you post this on scribblehub, now computer users can't read any fanfiction on webnovel it seems....................................................
So, this review is after I've written 90 chapters of the story. First of all, I'd like to say that this is a story through which I'm improving my writing. And as you might have noticed, it's currently improved enough to have quite high rankings if I update it regularly. It starts off cliche, since I didn't have anything planned at that time, but as the story progressed I had quite a few strokes of geniuses and was able to put some very unique and interesting factors to the story. Now, the character, the story, and the world has me so engrossed that I can't quit writing this story halfway, neither can I just rush it. Though I'm pretty sure I wouldn't be allowed to do that even if I wanted to, since many readers are even more immersed in it that I am. So, whoever actually read this whole rant, I'd give you some useful info. as well: ->Pacing: Slow-medium ->Lenght of chapters, from chapter 90 onwards, it's 2000-3000. since there are pátreon suppoters now. ->Pairing: Undecided. There's romance, but not yet committed relationship. There will be sweetness and quarreling. But there will be no drama like ntr.