My Goddess Mother Gave Me A SYSTEM AND KICKED ME OUT

LV 14

AshtynKC

good OK fun to read for 30 minutes frun 1 to 31 Which is the chapter from when I'm creating this review so if you want to read this thin read I'm not stopping you your the one who clicked or taped on the novel so stop reading this and read

LV 2

Mr_Imagination

The story and plot is good but you are trying too hard to write the words. The grammar becomes bad because you are trying to make some english shenanigans. You should've make it simple and make the words have an easier flow and easier to read.The system's words also suck because it's capital letters. "Hey system", silver called. [Bla Bla Bla] Should've make it look like this so it would look nicer. 5 star for everything except for writing style with 1 star

write more plz and don’ t give up on this novel plz

LV 12

Hopkins

Honestly liked it until, he became a father.... Plus the story is so slow to progress like 10 chapters for 1 story line I don't like long story arcs.

LV 4

Jorge_Luis_5341

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Clover_D

I'm not good in doing reviews nor have I caught up but all I can say for now is that dis novel is great, so please please PLEASE dont drop it, I can tell that dis will get very well known some day

LV 15

Slushy_Apollo

So far I love the story and other then a few writing issues along the way I don’t see any other issues and I would recommend giving this story a try

LV 4

ichigo7ma

unique story but explaining very long skills 🤔.................................................................................................

LV 10

StarDragon

Noice* .

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Bra_kelly

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alfie0123

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LV 13

Theoritizer

Very nice. The story is engaging and easy to read. There is only one problem I have and it's that 70% of the book are skill explanations and entity appraisals. The story itself is very detailed, maybe due to the thing I have a problem with, and it's kind of confusing when there are like 5 types of immortality - although I think this is more of 'my brain problem' than with a story.

LV 10

adeadlegend

Могло быть намного лучше. . . . .. . . . .. .. . . .. .. . . .. .. . . .. .. . . .. .. . . .. .. . . .. .. . . .. .. . . .. .. . . .. .. . . .. .. . . .. . .

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