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I really like the book but it definitely could use a better story plot after the first 30 or so chapters. I also think the updating should be a lot more stable especially when you are doing online books. I mean it's been 10 months since it's been updated and to be perfectly honest with the current state of the book it's not worth it to spend coins on it until it gets updated with at least 50 more chapters at the minimum. Now, no I'm not hating on the author or the book but from a realistic standpoint it's not worth it
Poorly written and hard to understand. Honestly embarrassingly immature. A lousy attempt to rehash an already over used trope. It also commits the sin of ridiculous numbers, I guess the author Googled big numbers and found some that looked cool.
It started good and the reason i liked this novel a lot is because of the main characters power and dominance, this was unfortunately lost in the later chapters when he literally get’s toyed with, it is stated that he has the power to destroy the galaxy yet he struggles in fights against people who can barely destroy a city much less a whole galaxy. He also get’s tricked multiple times and he just seems like the person who is always a step behind which rly sucks.
This is a good story. A new concept to me. Like a new writing style. It's not so easy to come up with things even as a writer. But reading books you learn. I was fascinated by this book and it's added to my library.
Read only 30+, so I don't know what happens in later chapters. Story is very childish. MC acts like he 10~12 yr old. He wants commit suicide because he is evaluated as 'No Seed' without a thought for family or friends. Which is main drawback, as it dampens reader mood and makes them have bad impression for later chapters.
Okay what I must first say about this novel is the well thought out power system of revokers and seeds... the beginning does well to introduce these concepts in the prologue and auxiliary chapter. The following plot is good and has great development and the writing quality is quite consistenly great... Great Work Author-san
The Plot and world design is quite good and unique but the mc too immature Like he just ran and jumped right away like it was so random and his Thought process is childish but It’s A good story hope My opinion on it helps😁
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i don't know why there are so many people complaining about this story well i know every person has the right to tell their opinion but for me this story is so fxcking great, i also love how the author replies on every comment or raitings. I wish the author don't stop this story.
very good, I'm really enjoying the story, this MC is very good even he try all this power the personality is still an innocent boy, and his love for the family was something I liked a lot and something I feel I'm not so focused on some construction!! Continue with this excellent work. I hope one day to see a webtoon of this work!!!
Guys, sorry for being this late, but it seems that the site through which I upload the story is no more working, I'm sorry for the delay, might take some weeks at most to repair the error. Meanwhile, if you do want a good read, plz check out Hunters Royale, I promise you won't regret it!.
You know people are willing to read anything, when someone who failed math class can actually get this popular. The story is dumb, begining is absolute catastrophy and it doesn't matter how good it gets later, if I have to read garbage for an entire day to get a meh, then I will just not read.
Here to ask you to either continue this or completely focus on Hunters Royale. Because i have been loving your other new work and it isnt even biased of from this work.
a falta de criatividade na história me impede de ler isso, isso é basicamente copiar e colar. ja vi tipo, umas 30 sinopses iguais. a falta de criatividade na história me impede de ler isso, isso é basicamente copiar e colar. ja vi tipo, umas 30 sinopses iguais.
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oh my God!!! The novel is absolutely great! I haven't read it completely yet but I can tell it's gonna be awesome. It is totally the kind of book I like to read and I already added to my Library!!!! Good work!!!
I'll be replying here because I want others to see this as well. So. I've been like writing my second book, That's HUNTERS ROYALE. and it's way better than this, both in story development and grammar. I hope you guys could give it a try. I want you guys to see this because I've been recruiting readers to my discord as character creators. Yes, it means, you can create a character of your own for my second story, and trust me it's awesome!!. Because you also get to choose the MC side of the antagonist side, and the powers over there are way more different, and yes the MC ain't lame and stupid like the beginner Marcus. 😅 please give it a try, I believe you guys won't regret it. I hope you meet some of you guys over there.
I like how this story has started. Although the author mentioned that the first chapters are being edited, I would like to say that it has potential. I also appreciate his vocabulary ('cause I have poor vocabulary hahaha), and the character development😅 Great job and keep writing!😊👍
It may be good novel but not enough for rating it currently has. ...........................................................................
Leaving a review after deleting one of my past reviews. Just wanted to tell important stuff to the readers of The Cheat Seed. Lately, I've been so be demotivated to continue this that I might even drop this at this point. Thanks to all the guys who've supported TCS and Marcus's journey wholeheartedly. Don't worry, I don't plan on dropping it yet. But yes I've found interest in writing my second story which you might find interesting, maybe it's more interesting than TCS. So please check it out from my profile or just search Hunters Royale and enjoy reading and support me there!!. Will continue TCS once I have a clear view of what I should write and how I should continue.
Honestly, the writing here is good. But it's not just good, it's unique. It's nice and relaxed, you flow with the reading like a river and it just feels great to get through the book with clarity and relaxation. That's how it should be! The reader isn't struggling to get through the words. For that I admire your writing. The books got some humor in there as well and that's hard to find in these sorts of places. Keep it up!
World development is disappointing, in chapter one - fighting of world's strongest is very lacking in power. There should be more destruction and violence. It was very mild. Then in auxiliary chapter the chances of legendary perk is shown as 10%. This is ridiculous, every tom rick harry have a legenday skill. I can't imagine a world like that working. I request the auther to improve it and make it believable.
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Simply amazing, I won't say much but at least up to chap 31 it is exactly what i wanted it to be. Funny, OP, Engaging etc. The writing quality is my cup of tea with minimal to no mistakes and a lot of correct cap usage. Story is going nicely and i like the small comic plot twists here and there. The character design feels real since even the MC doesn't really understand his lvl of power, just like we readers don't. World design is well thought till now and i hope it stays that way. That is all <3
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We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye
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If you enjoy Dungeons and Dragons or Sword Art Online then you shall probably like this book. After the first two chapters the writing improves a lot. The author has a large imagination with their magic system and especially world building. I especially like the magical creatures. Keep going author, you are doing really well with your work.
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The shameless author here. Landing a review here because as of now, Volume 1 of this book has been completed. It shall be continued soon. Thank you for your support people.
I really like the book but it definitely could use a better story plot after the first 30 or so chapters. I also think the updating should be a lot more stable especially when you are doing online books. I mean it's been 10 months since it's been updated and to be perfectly honest with the current state of the book it's not worth it to spend coins on it until it gets updated with at least 50 more chapters at the minimum. Now, no I'm not hating on the author or the book but from a realistic standpoint it's not worth it
Poorly written and hard to understand. Honestly embarrassingly immature. A lousy attempt to rehash an already over used trope. It also commits the sin of ridiculous numbers, I guess the author Googled big numbers and found some that looked cool.
It started good and the reason i liked this novel a lot is because of the main characters power and dominance, this was unfortunately lost in the later chapters when he literally get’s toyed with, it is stated that he has the power to destroy the galaxy yet he struggles in fights against people who can barely destroy a city much less a whole galaxy. He also get’s tricked multiple times and he just seems like the person who is always a step behind which rly sucks.
This is a good story. A new concept to me. Like a new writing style. It's not so easy to come up with things even as a writer. But reading books you learn. I was fascinated by this book and it's added to my library.
Read only 30+, so I don't know what happens in later chapters. Story is very childish. MC acts like he 10~12 yr old. He wants commit suicide because he is evaluated as 'No Seed' without a thought for family or friends. Which is main drawback, as it dampens reader mood and makes them have bad impression for later chapters.
Okay what I must first say about this novel is the well thought out power system of revokers and seeds... the beginning does well to introduce these concepts in the prologue and auxiliary chapter. The following plot is good and has great development and the writing quality is quite consistenly great... Great Work Author-san
The Plot and world design is quite good and unique but the mc too immature Like he just ran and jumped right away like it was so random and his Thought process is childish but It’s A good story hope My opinion on it helps😁
Membuka SPOILER i don't know why there are so many people complaining about this story well i know every person has the right to tell their opinion but for me this story is so fxcking great, i also love how the author replies on every comment or raitings. I wish the author don't stop this story.
very good, I'm really enjoying the story, this MC is very good even he try all this power the personality is still an innocent boy, and his love for the family was something I liked a lot and something I feel I'm not so focused on some construction!! Continue with this excellent work. I hope one day to see a webtoon of this work!!!
Guys, sorry for being this late, but it seems that the site through which I upload the story is no more working, I'm sorry for the delay, might take some weeks at most to repair the error. Meanwhile, if you do want a good read, plz check out Hunters Royale, I promise you won't regret it!.
You know people are willing to read anything, when someone who failed math class can actually get this popular. The story is dumb, begining is absolute catastrophy and it doesn't matter how good it gets later, if I have to read garbage for an entire day to get a meh, then I will just not read.
Here to ask you to either continue this or completely focus on Hunters Royale. Because i have been loving your other new work and it isnt even biased of from this work.
a falta de criatividade na história me impede de ler isso, isso é basicamente copiar e colar. ja vi tipo, umas 30 sinopses iguais. a falta de criatividade na história me impede de ler isso, isso é basicamente copiar e colar. ja vi tipo, umas 30 sinopses iguais.
Membuka SPOILER oh my God!!! The novel is absolutely great! I haven't read it completely yet but I can tell it's gonna be awesome. It is totally the kind of book I like to read and I already added to my Library!!!! Good work!!!
I'll be replying here because I want others to see this as well. So. I've been like writing my second book, That's HUNTERS ROYALE. and it's way better than this, both in story development and grammar. I hope you guys could give it a try. I want you guys to see this because I've been recruiting readers to my discord as character creators. Yes, it means, you can create a character of your own for my second story, and trust me it's awesome!!. Because you also get to choose the MC side of the antagonist side, and the powers over there are way more different, and yes the MC ain't lame and stupid like the beginner Marcus. 😅 please give it a try, I believe you guys won't regret it. I hope you meet some of you guys over there.
I like how this story has started. Although the author mentioned that the first chapters are being edited, I would like to say that it has potential. I also appreciate his vocabulary ('cause I have poor vocabulary hahaha), and the character development😅 Great job and keep writing!😊👍
It may be good novel but not enough for rating it currently has. ...........................................................................
Leaving a review after deleting one of my past reviews. Just wanted to tell important stuff to the readers of The Cheat Seed. Lately, I've been so be demotivated to continue this that I might even drop this at this point. Thanks to all the guys who've supported TCS and Marcus's journey wholeheartedly. Don't worry, I don't plan on dropping it yet. But yes I've found interest in writing my second story which you might find interesting, maybe it's more interesting than TCS. So please check it out from my profile or just search Hunters Royale and enjoy reading and support me there!!. Will continue TCS once I have a clear view of what I should write and how I should continue.
Honestly, the writing here is good. But it's not just good, it's unique. It's nice and relaxed, you flow with the reading like a river and it just feels great to get through the book with clarity and relaxation. That's how it should be! The reader isn't struggling to get through the words. For that I admire your writing. The books got some humor in there as well and that's hard to find in these sorts of places. Keep it up!
World development is disappointing, in chapter one - fighting of world's strongest is very lacking in power. There should be more destruction and violence. It was very mild. Then in auxiliary chapter the chances of legendary perk is shown as 10%. This is ridiculous, every tom rick harry have a legenday skill. I can't imagine a world like that working. I request the auther to improve it and make it believable.
I like this comic................................................................................. ............ ............... .. . . .
Simply amazing, I won't say much but at least up to chap 31 it is exactly what i wanted it to be. Funny, OP, Engaging etc. The writing quality is my cup of tea with minimal to no mistakes and a lot of correct cap usage. Story is going nicely and i like the small comic plot twists here and there. The character design feels real since even the MC doesn't really understand his lvl of power, just like we readers don't. World design is well thought till now and i hope it stays that way. That is all <3
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We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye
Membuka SPOILER If you enjoy Dungeons and Dragons or Sword Art Online then you shall probably like this book. After the first two chapters the writing improves a lot. The author has a large imagination with their magic system and especially world building. I especially like the magical creatures. Keep going author, you are doing really well with your work.
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The shameless author here. Landing a review here because as of now, Volume 1 of this book has been completed. It shall be continued soon. Thank you for your support people.