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As always... All your fanfics are top-quality. Thank you for a wonderful journey. Story, development and was so realistic 5/5[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Sometimes when I see a story like this, I have to ask myself. "Do I give it the 3 stars it (barely) deserves, or do I give it a 1 star to make the story's rating closer to what it should be? Well, I'm sure you can guess my decision.
Словами не выразить мои чувства полностью. Это был один из лучших фанфиков по Ван Пис, которые я видел. Хотя герой сам и говорил о себе, что он не является кем-то особенным, но на мой взгляд, даже до его перехода, он не был обычной серой массой. Уж слишком хорошо разбирался в мышлении людей и предсказывал их реакции. Ну и при попадании в новый мир, уж слишком талантливое ему попалось тело, даже по здешним меркам. Спасибо вам большое за эту работу.
some guy gave 1 star for balance wihtout reading so I will give 5 for umbalance, still dont know if I gona read it though. Should I? let me post it webnoveldotcom I finish it already
the authors interpretation on character power is really non-canon and unjustified. the mc is a retard (kidnaps a CD for no reason but somehow Stockholm syndromes her), devil fruit is boring. i didnt read the entire novel so maybe the author pulls out some bs to change the fruit but why would u even bother writing about the bear fruit. thats it, the zoan bear fruit. it would be better just to write about a garp-type character who dosent have a fruit.
Stopped when he killed innocent and Amalia easily.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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it stopped making sense when he kidnapped a dragon and everyone was okay with it. MC wasn't even smart, author just made everyone dumber than MC.
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I would rather prefer a MC with no devil fruit, than that pathetic one you gave him...also i'm pretty sure this novel only has above 4 star rating because of all the spam 5 stars reviews...
Only recommended for teenage psychopaths and edgelords. Contains a lot of broken English and a protagonist with the emotional depth and intelligence of a dead fish.
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Well it was my first op fanfic where I have seen such an unpredictable Mc. one ep hes training ace and later he kills him. Well enjoyed the authors works and his sociopathic mcs [img=recommend]
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Would be a five star review if it wasn’t for a lo of grammatical errors but, this novel was fantastic (well duh it’s written by holy joker) this novel is yet again another masterpiece written holy joker I love the fact that this delves into the psyche of a normal man that had bad circumstances the fact that the mc is intelligent but doesn’t let that turn him into an arrogant second rate villain is amazing please keep up the good work joker-San
hmm, this is not a FF novel that I like, well maybe the author thinks that realistically telling stories will be good to read, but if it's for a FF novel, you are in the wrong place, the author would be better off not making an FF novel, but a novel with your own imagination, and Also, you should know what an FF Novel is, right?, while the FF novel you made is not called FF, but like your own novel which is locked in chapters like other novels (not FF) and also I stopped reading this FF novel When the MC decides to become a Marine (or a noble's slave)
Is this fanfic dropped????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
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Well... After reading it... It got a good concept. But it kinda feels... the same. Reading this novel feels no different than every other of his works... At first, it was Unique & Interesting... But seeing It just gets 'boring'...
Piece of warning:Its Dark and i mean it.The writing,story development,powers and plots are really well played.Its just too dark,especially from ch 90 and i dropped it as it was taking toll on my mind
kinda cliche ending but hey it's a good read ............................................................................................................................................................................
Me encanto, el personaje como va la trama aunque un poco sádico pero al final me encanto la historia, acá de un año cuando la olvide como va la leeré de nuevo.
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I already finished reading the book and all I can say is that"AWESOME" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
my is a joke cause, I'm going to start reading this novel now. so I don't know anything about the story.... 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
I finished reading now, I'm still moved, seriously, there are few FF that really portrays the ambition of many men, we are imagining ourselves in universes like, one piece, naruto etc... We would have fun with the mc and such, but we we forget how fragile we are and if we went somewhere like that we wouldn't even be able to guarantee our survival properly. This FF is one of the best and you are the best FF writer that I had the pleasure of reading the works.
essa eu já li, mais esqueci de escrever uma crítica,eu acho.... não tenho certeza. .........................................................
Finally another fanfiction from my favorite author ................................................................................................................
Holy_Joker has continued to improve over time, bringing protagonists capable of more emotional depth than a teaspoon since his first big entry with Dreams. One thing that has remained consistent across his works is the focus on grand ambition. Joker won't bore you with aimless protagonists and though fear is often a huge driving force in his works, his MC's are never afraid to engage the plot. While often heavily speculative he doesn't get bogged down for too long in each chapter in navel gazing. Overall, a great piece of One Piece fiction.
God God God Una muy buena historia y una ejecución impecable, si bien la bear fruit me desánimo al principio, pronto me enamoró la manera de amasar poder del MC.
plz make a new fanfic novel we want your comeback 🙏 ......................................... ...... nothing beats your fanfic they are just PEAK 😭😭😭😫😫😫😢😢😢🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
As always... All your fanfics are top-quality. Thank you for a wonderful journey. Story, development and was so realistic 5/5[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Sometimes when I see a story like this, I have to ask myself. "Do I give it the 3 stars it (barely) deserves, or do I give it a 1 star to make the story's rating closer to what it should be? Well, I'm sure you can guess my decision.
Словами не выразить мои чувства полностью. Это был один из лучших фанфиков по Ван Пис, которые я видел. Хотя герой сам и говорил о себе, что он не является кем-то особенным, но на мой взгляд, даже до его перехода, он не был обычной серой массой. Уж слишком хорошо разбирался в мышлении людей и предсказывал их реакции. Ну и при попадании в новый мир, уж слишком талантливое ему попалось тело, даже по здешним меркам. Спасибо вам большое за эту работу.
some guy gave 1 star for balance wihtout reading so I will give 5 for umbalance, still dont know if I gona read it though. Should I? let me post it webnoveldotcom I finish it already
the authors interpretation on character power is really non-canon and unjustified. the mc is a retard (kidnaps a CD for no reason but somehow Stockholm syndromes her), devil fruit is boring. i didnt read the entire novel so maybe the author pulls out some bs to change the fruit but why would u even bother writing about the bear fruit. thats it, the zoan bear fruit. it would be better just to write about a garp-type character who dosent have a fruit.
Stopped when he killed innocent and Amalia easily.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Membuka SPOILER it stopped making sense when he kidnapped a dragon and everyone was okay with it. MC wasn't even smart, author just made everyone dumber than MC.
[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I would rather prefer a MC with no devil fruit, than that pathetic one you gave him...also i'm pretty sure this novel only has above 4 star rating because of all the spam 5 stars reviews...
Only recommended for teenage psychopaths and edgelords. Contains a lot of broken English and a protagonist with the emotional depth and intelligence of a dead fish.
.....................................................................................................................................................
Well it was my first op fanfic where I have seen such an unpredictable Mc. one ep hes training ace and later he kills him. Well enjoyed the authors works and his sociopathic mcs [img=recommend]
Membuka SPOILER Would be a five star review if it wasn’t for a lo of grammatical errors but, this novel was fantastic (well duh it’s written by holy joker) this novel is yet again another masterpiece written holy joker I love the fact that this delves into the psyche of a normal man that had bad circumstances the fact that the mc is intelligent but doesn’t let that turn him into an arrogant second rate villain is amazing please keep up the good work joker-San
hmm, this is not a FF novel that I like, well maybe the author thinks that realistically telling stories will be good to read, but if it's for a FF novel, you are in the wrong place, the author would be better off not making an FF novel, but a novel with your own imagination, and Also, you should know what an FF Novel is, right?, while the FF novel you made is not called FF, but like your own novel which is locked in chapters like other novels (not FF) and also I stopped reading this FF novel When the MC decides to become a Marine (or a noble's slave)
Is this fanfic dropped????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance Balance
Well... After reading it... It got a good concept. But it kinda feels... the same. Reading this novel feels no different than every other of his works... At first, it was Unique & Interesting... But seeing It just gets 'boring'...
Piece of warning:Its Dark and i mean it.The writing,story development,powers and plots are really well played.Its just too dark,especially from ch 90 and i dropped it as it was taking toll on my mind
kinda cliche ending but hey it's a good read ............................................................................................................................................................................
Me encanto, el personaje como va la trama aunque un poco sádico pero al final me encanto la historia, acá de un año cuando la olvide como va la leeré de nuevo.
Membuka SPOILER I already finished reading the book and all I can say is that"AWESOME" 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
my is a joke cause, I'm going to start reading this novel now. so I don't know anything about the story.... 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
I finished reading now, I'm still moved, seriously, there are few FF that really portrays the ambition of many men, we are imagining ourselves in universes like, one piece, naruto etc... We would have fun with the mc and such, but we we forget how fragile we are and if we went somewhere like that we wouldn't even be able to guarantee our survival properly. This FF is one of the best and you are the best FF writer that I had the pleasure of reading the works.
essa eu já li, mais esqueci de escrever uma crítica,eu acho.... não tenho certeza. .........................................................
Finally another fanfiction from my favorite author ................................................................................................................
Holy_Joker has continued to improve over time, bringing protagonists capable of more emotional depth than a teaspoon since his first big entry with Dreams. One thing that has remained consistent across his works is the focus on grand ambition. Joker won't bore you with aimless protagonists and though fear is often a huge driving force in his works, his MC's are never afraid to engage the plot. While often heavily speculative he doesn't get bogged down for too long in each chapter in navel gazing. Overall, a great piece of One Piece fiction.
God God God Una muy buena historia y una ejecución impecable, si bien la bear fruit me desánimo al principio, pronto me enamoró la manera de amasar poder del MC.
plz make a new fanfic novel we want your comeback 🙏 ......................................... ...... nothing beats your fanfic they are just PEAK 😭😭😭😫😫😫😢😢😢🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏