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This is a hidden gem. The author has described sasuke's character properly and the grammer is also good. sasuke is actually thinking logically and using all the resources he has to his disposal properly. He could easily beat cannon zuko and given 8 more years even avatar would not be able to defeat him. Keep going Author San this book has so much potential that it is a bit vexing that you update slowly.
I liked the origin story but the Mc doesn't act a way a child eho died reincarnated act. he'd have loved his second family and got just as attached, yet its not true here. He's more decisive than any child would ever be in two lives. Its just over the top and the story seems a bit confusing and its progress doesn't feel smooth. It isn't a bad story tho.
Para mim ate agora foi a melhor fanfic de avatar, o mc é o tipo de personagem q eu mais gosto, não tem toda aquela frescura de mc tipico po ex: amiguinhos, ser todo amoroso com a familia e esses típico de frescura, gosto da história como ta sendo e espero q ele tenha uma reviravolta igual o original teve
Author you got a flying colors from me for your story. You really know the how the characters from canon behave, even to the point that you get Sasuke's edginess spot on. And, sadly that's also your flaw. Your MC himself is flawed. Though, you don't have to feel down, as it's only my subjective view.
really amazing novel be nice if he accepted his new family though and moved on. or else it become something that'll hold him back and prevent him from getting stronger by Becaming a bug knot in his heart
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This is a good avatar fanfic. It started with Sasuke killing himself in the process of Uchiha Massacre in front of Itachi then he got reincarnated as the first grandchild of Azulan. He showed a great talent as a firebender and hailed as a prodigy. This story has a nice pace and development, however since its only a few chapters yet i don't know what's gonna happen. Just give it a try if you like Avatar fanfic, it's Sasuke so expect him to be edgy, but maybe there will be development in the future.
A avatar last airbender fanfic featuring sasuke with his firebending skill. It's good give it a try. It's good give it a try. It's good give it a try.
This is pretty good! More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more Need more Sasugay!
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As custom, authors shameless self review here. But yeah as the summary says, I write in my downtime. Updates to ANY of my books are sporadic, it's not like I can make a living off of this anytime soon. I'm just currently inspired with writing this particular story at the moment. Anyways, don't be afraid to leave a comment and review my works. Please. Constructive feedback is always welcome Enjoy ✌🏾
This is a hidden gem. The author has described sasuke's character properly and the grammer is also good. sasuke is actually thinking logically and using all the resources he has to his disposal properly. He could easily beat cannon zuko and given 8 more years even avatar would not be able to defeat him. Keep going Author San this book has so much potential that it is a bit vexing that you update slowly.
I liked the origin story but the Mc doesn't act a way a child eho died reincarnated act. he'd have loved his second family and got just as attached, yet its not true here. He's more decisive than any child would ever be in two lives. Its just over the top and the story seems a bit confusing and its progress doesn't feel smooth. It isn't a bad story tho.
Para mim ate agora foi a melhor fanfic de avatar, o mc é o tipo de personagem q eu mais gosto, não tem toda aquela frescura de mc tipico po ex: amiguinhos, ser todo amoroso com a familia e esses típico de frescura, gosto da história como ta sendo e espero q ele tenha uma reviravolta igual o original teve
Author you got a flying colors from me for your story. You really know the how the characters from canon behave, even to the point that you get Sasuke's edginess spot on. And, sadly that's also your flaw. Your MC himself is flawed. Though, you don't have to feel down, as it's only my subjective view.
really amazing novel be nice if he accepted his new family though and moved on. or else it become something that'll hold him back and prevent him from getting stronger by Becaming a bug knot in his heart
Humm~ Humm~ Humm~ Humm~ Humm~ Humm~ Humm~ Humm~ Humm~ Humm~ Humm~ Humm~ Humm~ Humm~ Humm~ Humm~ Humm~ Humm~ Humm~ Humm~Humm~ Humm~ Humm~ Humm~ Humm~ Approved
More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More
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This is a good avatar fanfic. It started with Sasuke killing himself in the process of Uchiha Massacre in front of Itachi then he got reincarnated as the first grandchild of Azulan. He showed a great talent as a firebender and hailed as a prodigy. This story has a nice pace and development, however since its only a few chapters yet i don't know what's gonna happen. Just give it a try if you like Avatar fanfic, it's Sasuke so expect him to be edgy, but maybe there will be development in the future.
A avatar last airbender fanfic featuring sasuke with his firebending skill. It's good give it a try. It's good give it a try. It's good give it a try.
This is pretty good! More more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more Need more Sasugay!
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More
Membuka SPOILER Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More
As custom, authors shameless self review here. But yeah as the summary says, I write in my downtime. Updates to ANY of my books are sporadic, it's not like I can make a living off of this anytime soon. I'm just currently inspired with writing this particular story at the moment. Anyways, don't be afraid to leave a comment and review my works. Please. Constructive feedback is always welcome Enjoy ✌🏾