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Just read the first few chapters, you'll understand why I gave such a low score. The translation seems good, but the actual novel is just. . . bad. It only goes into small amounts of detail, and makes the peoples reactions incredibly unbelievable. The characters actions bring you away from being immersed into the story every sentence, or two if you're lucky. I've seen better written fan-fictions on wattpad, and I'm not saying those were even close to decent.
ii really like this series!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Joder que mala novela.. ,........................,.........................,................................................................................................................................................... .........................................................................................Publicar algo asi casi parece un insulto.
Its got promise but sadly the author made one major mistake not very many people are going to want to read about an immortal old man he needs to be young enough to do more then shuffle around and have people take care of him who wants to be a geriatric for a thousand yearsni would try to find a way to die
Names change, unintelligent characters, nonsense reasoning, portrayed as western setting but characters have distinct asian mannerisms, bland over all, not worth the time.
This novel is good for a quick fun read. It is definitely a comedy genre novel, so don’t click on it expecting dog-blood drama or hot-blooded protagonists. Personally, I think that the best part of this novel is learning about the alternate earth that it is set in. Humans can live to be over 200 years old, with the publically known oldest being 280. Of course, the MC is several hundred millenia old, and has the historical artifacts to prove it. Summary: popular alternate-universe celebrities are participating in a reality tv series, and happen to encounter the MC who is living in a small village. The MC’s house is full of super-expensive items, which shocke the world when experts analyze it. For the public, even the food the MC eats can make A-level celebrities bankrupt, but to the MC it’s just low-level items that he’s been gifted ‘recently’. TLDR: a good comest story for a quick read, but almost no potential as a popular novel
This is translation review, not novel review. If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator. With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity. And with the worth case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel). overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.
its very interesting book to pass the time. and its not too fast paced. defenitly give it a try its worth it. the only downside would be none its a great read.
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I must say this reads like something an alien pretending to be human would write lol. Characters don't act like they're people and are unnatural as hecc
I got tired to the obsession on price of everything, even risking of being called racist I would like to known is it a asian thing or just something else entirely. I mean it’s quite evident in many other novels not just this one but it’s very highlighted in this novel. interesting idea though but not really my thing
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so - the TL is bad the plot is stupid, punching a hole in a painting cause he won't give it to you, ffs, even toddlers dont do that i dont know where it will even go, it could have been him telling stories or teaching skills, would have been bad but readable cause the author isnt very clever but i would put up with it, instead its utter garbage...
If you value your time then dont read. The plot is nonexistent and the characters are very stupid. An example is they ask if a ransom old guy was someone from 200 years ago, he says yes and they just believe him
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I think it will be a good read . I am optimistic about this . 😉😉😉😎😎😎😎😎😚🙂😚😊😋🙂😚😊☺☺😎😎☺☺🙂😎😎🙂🙂🙂😍😎😋😊😊😋😎 and thats all.
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Just read the first few chapters, you'll understand why I gave such a low score. The translation seems good, but the actual novel is just. . . bad. It only goes into small amounts of detail, and makes the peoples reactions incredibly unbelievable. The characters actions bring you away from being immersed into the story every sentence, or two if you're lucky. I've seen better written fan-fictions on wattpad, and I'm not saying those were even close to decent.
ii really like this series!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Joder que mala novela.. ,........................,.........................,................................................................................................................................................... .........................................................................................Publicar algo asi casi parece un insulto.
Its got promise but sadly the author made one major mistake not very many people are going to want to read about an immortal old man he needs to be young enough to do more then shuffle around and have people take care of him who wants to be a geriatric for a thousand yearsni would try to find a way to die
Names change, unintelligent characters, nonsense reasoning, portrayed as western setting but characters have distinct asian mannerisms, bland over all, not worth the time.
This novel is good for a quick fun read. It is definitely a comedy genre novel, so don’t click on it expecting dog-blood drama or hot-blooded protagonists. Personally, I think that the best part of this novel is learning about the alternate earth that it is set in. Humans can live to be over 200 years old, with the publically known oldest being 280. Of course, the MC is several hundred millenia old, and has the historical artifacts to prove it. Summary: popular alternate-universe celebrities are participating in a reality tv series, and happen to encounter the MC who is living in a small village. The MC’s house is full of super-expensive items, which shocke the world when experts analyze it. For the public, even the food the MC eats can make A-level celebrities bankrupt, but to the MC it’s just low-level items that he’s been gifted ‘recently’. TLDR: a good comest story for a quick read, but almost no potential as a popular novel
This is translation review, not novel review. If you are not familiar with it, webnovel has started westernizing most of the novels in 2021. This is awful practice that kills original novel. At best you get only names, places and organizations westernized and at worst you get half novel gutted and other half totally rewritten by translator. With best case scenario you get only names, places and organizations westernized which introduces plotholes cause while names are westernized, actual writing and character culture arent. You get chinese way of thinking, chinese places and organizations translated into most famous western (USA) alternatives and as a result you see absurdity. And with the worth case scenario, you are not actually reading original authors work, but some "translators" plagiarization cause half novel is removed (sometimes critical explanations) and other half is badly rewritten. And cause this requires so much work compared to normal translation, either webnovel is stealing original authors work and rewriting it (cause most of those novels dont come from qidian) or they are just using translators that dont know chinese so they are rewriting story with help of MTL (seen too many edited MTL translations lately on webnovel). overall any westernized novel deserves automatic 1 star review.
its very interesting book to pass the time. and its not too fast paced. defenitly give it a try its worth it. the only downside would be none its a great read.
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I must say this reads like something an alien pretending to be human would write lol. Characters don't act like they're people and are unnatural as hecc
I got tired to the obsession on price of everything, even risking of being called racist I would like to known is it a asian thing or just something else entirely. I mean it’s quite evident in many other novels not just this one but it’s very highlighted in this novel. interesting idea though but not really my thing
I need moreeeeeeee chapterrrrrr [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
so - the TL is bad the plot is stupid, punching a hole in a painting cause he won't give it to you, ffs, even toddlers dont do that i dont know where it will even go, it could have been him telling stories or teaching skills, would have been bad but readable cause the author isnt very clever but i would put up with it, instead its utter garbage...
If you value your time then dont read. The plot is nonexistent and the characters are very stupid. An example is they ask if a ransom old guy was someone from 200 years ago, he says yes and they just believe him
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I think it will be a good read . I am optimistic about this . 😉😉😉😎😎😎😎😎😚🙂😚😊😋🙂😚😊☺☺😎😎☺☺🙂😎😎🙂🙂🙂😍😎😋😊😊😋😎 and thats all.
Seems good..................................................................................................................................
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
RELEASE IT NOW RELEASE IT NOW RELEASE IT NOW RELEASE IT NOW RELEASE IT NOW RELEASE IT NOW RELEASE IT NOW RELEASE IT NOW RELEASE IT NOW RELEASE IT NOW
i hope it gets picked.....................................................................................................................................
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Can I have the raw of this?iwbwgossbjshsgisbsksksjsbisbdjskskbsksksbsjskbsuebsbkalalwowiwpowyterwwwwtipplkgfsaasdcbkllnbccxc Gsjskkaosnsbsksoskksdlr Disosoehhsiss Shisowiiajshane Sishhshsb
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