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In contrary to what you guys are saying about this novel, I believe it is a wonderful novel. The character development of the MC is rare even though he is reincarnated He doesn't immediately become cold-blooded like other MCs he is mature but is still a little naive. When the MC got trapped in an avalanche and found the followers of the Demon God then stopped serving the kingdom because they were killing newborns then got betrayed by the followers of the demon god. That was mind-blowing because I didn't expect the plot twist. Overall it is a pretty amazing story regardless of what people say I admit I did skip a few chapters but, the story deserves at least 4.9.
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The story might have been better without reading the prologue, I kept thinking about it and trying to find the link for the first few chapters.
This is a great read I find myself waiting spicifically for this book to release new chapters. Great story development, world building, charicter intersctions, etc. I highly recommend this to anyone who wants to pickup something new to read.
Read about 50 chapters too truly get the charm of this novel. You'll get to see a MC who truly struggles and achieves things with his own two hands. If your looking for a MC who is OP at chapter 2 then no this is not for you, if you want a Mc who works to deserve what he has then read this novel.
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Good novel, with some spelling errors, up until chapter 31 where the authors forgets to add resistance from sorcery lvl up, which are 10 points. Even worse at chapter 40 the author increases the resistance by 30 (with the 10 missing) / 20 (if you use the value which it should have) without an explanation. So a drop for me. Bye.
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Story is really good but there are occasional crammar and spelling mistakes. Character degelopment is decent but mc’s emotions are just all over the place and don’t machup with regular behavior and also the context of the situation. Overall a really good story MC needs some work
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Very unique story with calm protagonist. Zaos came to new world, which was very different. Magic wasnt very liked, but thanks to his talent for magic he was able to learn it. For some people can be story not so interesting, but this novel focus on character development. ( during reading we follow process of our protagonist) This kind of novel shows us harsh reality and necessary to become strong. Recommended for fans of action and fantasy
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It's good have only read upto 64 chapters. the main character personality is neutral the origin of his transmigration is written to be a mystery the novel has stable development thill chapter 64
Great story overall with decent pace of development. Warning though that the author always focus on technical aspect aka detailed fight, world building, detailed training regime. Always felt that the MC is in danger or not powerful enough cause every fight is deadly. Needs more side characters stories/development cause they are interesting.
The fact that the MC is 10 ruins the immersion, I could get behind these things happening to 14-15 year olds but 10 is just too young. What kind of bow could 10 years olds use to kill with or without training. Bows are not something someone can pick up and just use in that manner. Everything gets solved if there is a 4 year time skip before the first guarding mission. The other issues of using the wrong word here and there dont matter as much. Wheres the hook, we were promised someone to protect but this may as well be forgotten. The first chapter ends up as a mess, is this a scene that happens in the future or was this from a previous timeline. I liked the idea but my expectations were subverted and at this point I have little desire to continue reading.
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The synopsis is making me think he’s the dude who ran away in your frst novel The one Who made The system
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This is so much better than the author’s other book that is limited free today! I’m pleasantly surprised. It’s hard for me to believe it’s the same author. Writing is engaging. MC doesn’t feel overpowered for no reason and so far nothing jumps out as obvious filler. Pace is slower than the average novel but is still quite palatable. Good stuff!
only giving 5 star because of the dark souls novel cover...............................................................................................
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Chap 160 : Only negative thing was that want mc was fighting I couldn't take it seriously because he was 10 years old. Else great world and character, great update stab and great quality overall.
Grammar could be better but is above average for webnovel. Starts a bit slow but gets pretty exciting and is hard to stop reading. I recommend it for people that enjoy battles involving strategy and high stakes.
Might as well be the last review. Im reading his other book and can say with confidence that its a good read. This book should be no less. Reccomend a read for any new readers That find this author! 😄
Everything is more or less good (I can tout judge grammar btw). I got a serious problem with the MC, 10 years old and behing that OP. All the battles that should be epic around chapter 100 130 become like idk weird ? I can t imagine a 10 years old 1m30 baby face armored magic soldier. I also imagined some kind of bodyguard stuff from the synopsys. Im a bit disapointed because there is almost nothing yet with the "protect someone" part. Overall its good.
it's good the main characters progress makes sense the grammar is good its easy to read to lazy to say anything else 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
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What you will find in this novel, dear reader? A story of a soul that stayed for a long time in the darkness and is transmigrated to another world with a simple job: protect someone. Maybe the fate of the world will be decided if he suceeeds or not.
The One the best review is the no review... because you can't describe it in words... All the best to the novel... [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Writing Quality is as good as it can be (with some error's here and there but not anything major). Stability of Updates. With 2 chaps a day is really good, you can always comeback the next day and read 2 more chapters. Story Development is a bit slow in the start, but it builds up in later chapters, and frankly is really good. Character Design is a bit lacking in my opinion as I don't really know what the mc is looking like, other than he looks like his father, and what we were told in chapter 1. World Background is really good but slow, we first really get some world building in later chapter (around chapter 60) Altogether a really good story with good upload schedule, super immersed in the world, and is really looking forward to what happens next!
I was totally shocked, when I saw that nobody is reviewing this work. I'm not an english native speaker so pls have mercy. :) From the start on the author shows us a quality of writing, which is a pleasure to read. The story starts a bit confusing and anticlimatic but it evolved in a masterpiece in my opinion. From beginn on the author gives us daily 2 Chapters, except on Weekends. Since today the Story is going premium (congrats author) we have to see how it is going to be now. The World is quite unknown and we discover it along the story. I really like the characters and I'm looking forward to some more and development of the MC. How will he grow up? All in all I only want to encourage the Author to keep up this fantastic story and give you people the recommendation to follow us along this exciting journey.
when I was reading child sodiers in this novel (chapter 80) I wanted to share this cute image with ya. Although I havent encountered any articles depicting kids at the age of 10 as soldiers, my little bro is 12 and as a profossinal archer I taught my bro archery as well but let me tell ya kids at that age can only use toy bows. Not literally toys perhaps but its not too far from that as well they cant with their low muscle strength, use bows that can kill a man lets say at 20 meters of distance and using a bow is immensely easier then being effiecent sword user/master. kids at modern time are illegally used in wars and skirmeshes but thats because using a gun is utterly much easier than bows and swords. But I would like to be proven if I in fact am.
In contrary to what you guys are saying about this novel, I believe it is a wonderful novel. The character development of the MC is rare even though he is reincarnated He doesn't immediately become cold-blooded like other MCs he is mature but is still a little naive. When the MC got trapped in an avalanche and found the followers of the Demon God then stopped serving the kingdom because they were killing newborns then got betrayed by the followers of the demon god. That was mind-blowing because I didn't expect the plot twist. Overall it is a pretty amazing story regardless of what people say I admit I did skip a few chapters but, the story deserves at least 4.9.
Membuka SPOILER The story might have been better without reading the prologue, I kept thinking about it and trying to find the link for the first few chapters.
This is a great read I find myself waiting spicifically for this book to release new chapters. Great story development, world building, charicter intersctions, etc. I highly recommend this to anyone who wants to pickup something new to read.
Read about 50 chapters too truly get the charm of this novel. You'll get to see a MC who truly struggles and achieves things with his own two hands. If your looking for a MC who is OP at chapter 2 then no this is not for you, if you want a Mc who works to deserve what he has then read this novel.
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Good novel, with some spelling errors, up until chapter 31 where the authors forgets to add resistance from sorcery lvl up, which are 10 points. Even worse at chapter 40 the author increases the resistance by 30 (with the 10 missing) / 20 (if you use the value which it should have) without an explanation. So a drop for me. Bye.
Membuka SPOILER Story is really good but there are occasional crammar and spelling mistakes. Character degelopment is decent but mc’s emotions are just all over the place and don’t machup with regular behavior and also the context of the situation. Overall a really good story MC needs some work
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Very unique story with calm protagonist. Zaos came to new world, which was very different. Magic wasnt very liked, but thanks to his talent for magic he was able to learn it. For some people can be story not so interesting, but this novel focus on character development. ( during reading we follow process of our protagonist) This kind of novel shows us harsh reality and necessary to become strong. Recommended for fans of action and fantasy
you make me cry😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭. well done ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
It's good have only read upto 64 chapters. the main character personality is neutral the origin of his transmigration is written to be a mystery the novel has stable development thill chapter 64
Great story overall with decent pace of development. Warning though that the author always focus on technical aspect aka detailed fight, world building, detailed training regime. Always felt that the MC is in danger or not powerful enough cause every fight is deadly. Needs more side characters stories/development cause they are interesting.
The fact that the MC is 10 ruins the immersion, I could get behind these things happening to 14-15 year olds but 10 is just too young. What kind of bow could 10 years olds use to kill with or without training. Bows are not something someone can pick up and just use in that manner. Everything gets solved if there is a 4 year time skip before the first guarding mission. The other issues of using the wrong word here and there dont matter as much. Wheres the hook, we were promised someone to protect but this may as well be forgotten. The first chapter ends up as a mess, is this a scene that happens in the future or was this from a previous timeline. I liked the idea but my expectations were subverted and at this point I have little desire to continue reading.
Membuka SPOILER The synopsis is making me think he’s the dude who ran away in your frst novel The one Who made The system
Membuka SPOILER This is so much better than the author’s other book that is limited free today! I’m pleasantly surprised. It’s hard for me to believe it’s the same author. Writing is engaging. MC doesn’t feel overpowered for no reason and so far nothing jumps out as obvious filler. Pace is slower than the average novel but is still quite palatable. Good stuff!
only giving 5 star because of the dark souls novel cover...............................................................................................
Bla bla bla great bla bla its the third review I don t want to write relevent stuff bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla bla
Chap 160 : Only negative thing was that want mc was fighting I couldn't take it seriously because he was 10 years old. Else great world and character, great update stab and great quality overall.
Grammar could be better but is above average for webnovel. Starts a bit slow but gets pretty exciting and is hard to stop reading. I recommend it for people that enjoy battles involving strategy and high stakes.
Might as well be the last review. Im reading his other book and can say with confidence that its a good read. This book should be no less. Reccomend a read for any new readers That find this author! 😄
Everything is more or less good (I can tout judge grammar btw). I got a serious problem with the MC, 10 years old and behing that OP. All the battles that should be epic around chapter 100 130 become like idk weird ? I can t imagine a 10 years old 1m30 baby face armored magic soldier. I also imagined some kind of bodyguard stuff from the synopsys. Im a bit disapointed because there is almost nothing yet with the "protect someone" part. Overall its good.
it's good the main characters progress makes sense the grammar is good its easy to read to lazy to say anything else 😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈😈
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What you will find in this novel, dear reader? A story of a soul that stayed for a long time in the darkness and is transmigrated to another world with a simple job: protect someone. Maybe the fate of the world will be decided if he suceeeds or not.
The One the best review is the no review... because you can't describe it in words... All the best to the novel... [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Writing Quality is as good as it can be (with some error's here and there but not anything major). Stability of Updates. With 2 chaps a day is really good, you can always comeback the next day and read 2 more chapters. Story Development is a bit slow in the start, but it builds up in later chapters, and frankly is really good. Character Design is a bit lacking in my opinion as I don't really know what the mc is looking like, other than he looks like his father, and what we were told in chapter 1. World Background is really good but slow, we first really get some world building in later chapter (around chapter 60) Altogether a really good story with good upload schedule, super immersed in the world, and is really looking forward to what happens next!
I was totally shocked, when I saw that nobody is reviewing this work. I'm not an english native speaker so pls have mercy. :) From the start on the author shows us a quality of writing, which is a pleasure to read. The story starts a bit confusing and anticlimatic but it evolved in a masterpiece in my opinion. From beginn on the author gives us daily 2 Chapters, except on Weekends. Since today the Story is going premium (congrats author) we have to see how it is going to be now. The World is quite unknown and we discover it along the story. I really like the characters and I'm looking forward to some more and development of the MC. How will he grow up? All in all I only want to encourage the Author to keep up this fantastic story and give you people the recommendation to follow us along this exciting journey.
when I was reading child sodiers in this novel (chapter 80) I wanted to share this cute image with ya. Although I havent encountered any articles depicting kids at the age of 10 as soldiers, my little bro is 12 and as a profossinal archer I taught my bro archery as well but let me tell ya kids at that age can only use toy bows. Not literally toys perhaps but its not too far from that as well they cant with their low muscle strength, use bows that can kill a man lets say at 20 meters of distance and using a bow is immensely easier then being effiecent sword user/master. kids at modern time are illegally used in wars and skirmeshes but thats because using a gun is utterly much easier than bows and swords. But I would like to be proven if I in fact am.