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The psychopath named Dan

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Penulis: sensei_24

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Dan grew up in a small village with orcs,half-orcs,ogres,giants and trolls. Day after day Dan would get in fights against students to test his strength. sometimes he won sometimes he lost. With his strength hitting a plateau Dan grew more and more apathetic until he felt no emotion. This all changed after receiving a system that allowed him to grow stronger without hitting a plateau. With this newly discovered power he drops out of school and travels the world with his friend who wants to kill the summoned heroes.

Listen I'm not going to lie, there is a shit ton of grammatical error in the beginning. I started writing this book for fun with zero experience but I started taking it more seriously. By book 2 everything is sorted out. That includes the messed up power system, the cheat system, the characters and the grammar.
I hope you can get through the beginning.
During the Elf Folulheim arc, that is when the true nature of the MC begins to show as a physchopath who only wants to cause problems and death.
Also side note MC is very racist towards elfs. He hates them and goes out of his way to kill them if he sees them. Also there will be a lot of disturbing things in this story.

Also I'm not gonna lie, the first volume and half of the second volume is trash. I wrote them when I was inexperienced. It is unbearable and terrible but if you somehow managed to get through that then I promise I will do my best to deliver quality writing to you.

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GREAT_DEMON_GOD

I did read upto 4 chapters before writing this review. just after reading only 1 chapters I thought of voting it with Power stone and so I did. this novel not boaring and some what intresting and so please give it a try relive yourself.

3yr
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Silver2285

It is a very good book, kinda loses its track near the end but overall it's a great book. Kept me on edge for a few days wondering what would happen next. Read it when I could. 10/10.

2yr
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Ahmed_Moha

I've read for quite a while and I thoroughly enjoyed this book. If you like evil mc's then this is definitely a must to read. Only logical and rational thinking and the funny scenes that happen every once in a while is to funny

2yr
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SpoiledSecrets

So this was a huge let down. I don’t know why there’s a villain and a scary tag, since the MC isn’t a villain and there isn’t anything scary. Not to mention the author said the MC is apathetic. I’ve read 30 chapters and the MC hasn’t shown anything similar to being apathetic.

2yr
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DannyLove

Have been reading for a couple of days. Although it needs more proofreading since there are some grammar errors and some of dialogues lack punctuation, it still makes a good read so far. [img=recommend]

2yr
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Silver2285

making another review on this book. Top Tier book. i reread it because I didn't have anything else to do and it was well worth it. Sadly though it ends on a cliffhanger but all things considered it's one of the best books I've read. Thank you author for making this book. I won't beg for more chapters even though this book was dropped and I want to read more but what's there is there. So thank you again to the author for making this book, as it was a pleasure reading it.

1yr
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Littlepsychfries

I'm new here, i like ur stories bro. speaking aren't my thing guess you deserve stars.

1yr
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MyDIsGrace

All me got to say is good very good.

2yr
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curiosity_of_a_cat

Wow really nice starting bro. Got hooked. For thriller readers, it's must read novel. Need more chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
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JSKOPOP
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I think is great just need to be proof reader and also needs to get a bit longer chapters and author needs to upload more but besides that this is a great novel for people who like evil mc like me

2yr
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TheCraZyaUthOr19

When I first saw this story, I was really not anticipating much, but after reading it, I realized it was well worth it. It's a bit of a slow plot, but it's rather nice. This narrative began off with a lot of mistakes and errors, but it quickly improved. , the number of typos and mistakes has been reduced.  Writing abilities have also improved significantly.

2yr
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Shiloh_Thedog

Second review because I love this book so much. I love the way the mc is just so bold. I mean that like he isn't scared of a woman who he is stronger than. I also love the fact that there are no young masters and the people who cause problem only do it with justified reason.

2yr
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Love_Hunter_1624

This is my second review and thus is my opinion after catching up to the current story. The mc is currently gaining character development and we get to see different aspects such as regression and transmigration in one story. I really do hope the story does not disappoint

2yr
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Shiloh_Thedog

This story started of with a lot of typos and errors but beyond that it is really good. By the end of volume 1 the typo and errors are close to zero. There is also great improvement in writing skills.

2yr
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Love_Hunter_1624

So far so good. The first episode is kinda cringe but as you keep reading, you can see the improvement in grammar, thinking and in general. I like the concept of it and I'm gonna be reading it for a while.

2yr
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Ahmed_Mohamed_6052

Dude what's taking so long. When will the next chapter be. I've been waiting for a few weeks now and there still has been no update. Please make a schedule for your books and tell us when you will be releasing.

3yr
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sensei_24

Guys I know "Shameless author five star review" but still I'm gonna do it. Guys this is my first story and I promise you wont regret it. There wont be any Romance but there will be a few scenes that show the mc being attracted to woman. I promise you wont regret it. I'm gonna try and make the mc a cold blooded person who sometimes become warm towards people. There will be tragedy in this story. I hope you enjoy it. If you enjoy it then please share it and vote for me.

3yr
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Sime_Kurosaki

When I saw this story I wasn't expecting much but then I read it and it was definitely worth it. A bit of a slow story but it is pretty good.

3yr
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Ahmed_Mohamed_6052

It is really good. I am enjoying it so far. The main character seems like a Chad. I hope it stays that way. The character designs are really good so far. Orcs and goblins aren't weak mob characters but pretty strong. Fria seems like a baddie.

3yr
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    escape 2 years ago
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    system update 2 years ago
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    How Dan and Pedro met (part 1) 2 years ago
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    How Dan and Pedro met (Part 2) 2 years ago
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    How Dan and Pedro met (Part 3) 2 years ago
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  15. 65
    Philosophy with a child 2 years ago
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    Just a normal fight? (Part 1) 2 years ago
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    Just a normal fight? (Part 2) 2 years ago
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    Just a normal fight? (Part 3) 2 years ago
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    Just a normal fight? (Part 4) 2 years ago
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    Final floor (1) 2 years ago
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    Final floor (2) 2 years ago
  22. 72
    Experiments (1) 2 years ago
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    Experiment (2) 2 years ago
  24. 74
    Haider(1) 2 years ago
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    Haider(2) 2 years ago
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    Haider (3) 2 years ago
  27. 77
    Death of a brother! 2 years ago
  28. 78
    I DUB THEE... SWORD! 2 years ago
  29. 79
    Causing Chaos! 2 years ago
  30. 80
    Causing chaos (part 2) 2 years ago
  31. 81
    Spreading chaos 2 years ago
  32. 82
    Haider's outburst 2 years ago
  33. 83
    Your a sucker! 2 years ago
  34. 84
    Let me show you how to bite! 2 years ago
  35. 85
    Face of with the hero! 2 years ago
  36. 86
    Fighting the hero! 2 years ago
  37. 87
    Your pregnant? You can go! 2 years ago
  38. 88
    Looting the Royal treasury 2 years ago
  39. 89
    Dance for me! 2 years ago
  40. 90
    Dan vs Medusa! 2 years ago
  41. 91
    flashbacks! 2 years ago
  42. 92
    The doppelganger! 2 years ago
  43. 93
    Meaning of strength! 2 years ago
  44. 94
    Distant memories! (Part 1) 2 years ago
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    Searching for the apothecary. 2 years ago
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    Chapter 96 2 years ago
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    Weird fetishes! (Part 1) 2 years ago
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    Weird fetishes (Part 2) 2 years ago

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