Yin-Yang Harmony System

LV 12

Sabin_Subedi_Fei

This is the third review after 210 chapters that includes two volumes. Please read this so that you won't need to waste words to complain. First, Mike is not a hero, not a cold killer, not smart, and not even fearless to his death. He is an idiot that doesn't feel likes thinking through the circumstances. He is emotionally weak so character development is the major part of this book. As a writer, I apologize for not being consistent over some factors that are explained early in the story which over explains many things that are not necessary. You can freely skip those details in your mind. For writing this book, I am very satisfied with my story development and if you read it carefully, you can find hints of future events early in the story. As much as I spent time writing MC, I have tried to keep other main characters 3D. You can find it as you reach the second volume. Finally, the last thing that I want to tell you is something that speaks to the story tags. It's an action, adventure, adult, comedic, dramatic, story set in a world where adult stuff is very common.

LV 12

Sabin_Subedi_Fei

This is the perfect rating I could give myself. Well, now let's talk thoroughly about each quality and why they deserve stars that are given: (Disclaimer- This book is extremely dedicated to improving the length of your little brother, so if you are under eighteen. Please proceed with caution) Writing Quality- It has been around nine months since I've started writing my first book. And I don't how much I've improved? I don't even know whether I have improved or not. So, please comment after reading the chapter whether my writing was good, bad, or worst. Stability of Updates- You'll get a chapter each day and it will increase as the conditions set in the first chapter of this book. So, please support this book with voting power stones for more content. Till now, I haven't missed a single day and I am not planning to miss either. Story Development- It's not going for rapid development or slow development. Everything will improve at its own pace and if you read the story carefully, you will understand why? And it has a unique story plot behind each arc. Character Design- My characters aren't the perfect ones that's why character development is one of the main scopes in my books. My characters will suffer, they will understand and thoroughly change to become what they were meant to be. World Background- It is a bit lacking in the first twenty chapters, but the world will be soon revealed with lots of new techs, explorations, story plots, and exciting adventures. Now, let's talk about why should you read this story. - To improve the length of your little brother - To laugh out and forget all kinds of tension - To immerse yourself in the world of VR and superheroes - To support me!!!

LV 15

Dreamstrafe

just finna say one thing and leave a perfectly avg review since I just started reading this novel... the author thinks writing a reta®ded mc is what constitutes comedy...

LV 2

Suoshi

Pretty good writing style. I have no major grammar or vocab errors to report. But the world background could do with a bit of shaping up. Other than that, not bad.

LV 4

Manabu_Horikita

The story is a bit difficult to read due to the grammar and general sentence construction but if you can power through that then there is a decent story to be explored. I am still in the beginning chapters and there haven't been any major plot-holes yet. Sometimes things don't make sense but if you just turn-off your brain and read this as a light-hearted story without trying to find mistakes then you will definitely have an enjoyable experience. The Author has replied to someone else's review about the editing so the language might change in the future and let the story shine with it's full potential. The only concern is the power system of the MC as there is a lot going on with that and that means that it can turn into a Deus Ex Machina really quickly. Till now the Author has kept things well balanced mostly so that may be unnecessary concern. Definitely recommended for anyone intrested in harem OP protagonist with some cultivation mixed in.

LV 3

Castor_Med0

MC is retard and a masochist. He gets abused and hit by all girls, and gets together with a prostitute. He is the ultimate beta!

LV 4

Nom_Nom_1836

This novel is very good to read, but Mc is too lazy in my opinion and the ending of the story made me dissatisfied. I really like such novels, if anyone knows similar to this one, please write in the comment.

LV 14

ProfessorofCulture

My only problem is with your grammar, and maybe some plot holes. improve on it and we are good to go.........................................

LV 13

kommers

Very clear writing style and world building, a good mix between isekai, superpowers and system. if author can expand the universe and create more unique settings it will definitely be a big hit.

LV 11

Fujiwara_San

The onomatopoeia is ruining the reading immersion because it is used in a wrong way. Who daheck “Bam”, “Boom” in s*x scene? As for the story it is a fun read. Too much info dump every 2-3 chapter at the start and too many word count that is too confusing and annoying.

LV 1

Kalleby_Augusto

O protagonista é extremamente estúpido ele merece perder tudo só por isso, e irritante como ele sempre faz as escolhas errada ( não pensa sobre nada a não ser em mulher) ou parece consegue tudo com muita facilidade estou no meio da novel e ele só ficou mais estúpido e não parece estar evoluindo como pessoa ele é um completo lixo absurdo

LV 11

IamSuperflous

An interesting story. I’m not a fan of naive protags but story kept me going. Thankfully, after 200 chapters, protagonist starts showing maturity and story becomes even more intereating. I quite like the Cultivation world volume. Overall, a good novel. By the way, author, does the story end at 314 chaps? I’m not preveliged user

LV 3

RnzG

Very clear writing style and world building, a good mix between isekai, superpowers and system. if author can expand the universe and create more unique settings it will definitely be a big hit.

LV 1

DaoistDRg1HC

Bastante bueno, aunque siento que el personaje es ingenuo al principio, entiendo que es parte de la trama. Me gustó mucho los giros de la trama totalmente inesperado.[img=recommend]

LV 1

DaoistS6clE0

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LV 14

B_L_A_C_K_Soul

The story and worldbuilding is realy interesting so far and I love to read it! This story needs an editor though, as the grammar and choice of words make reading this a real chore.

LV 5

CouchPotatoDandy

The author put such an info dump on the first few chapters I got an headache, and I didn't even know if it's worth it! Later on I lost interest since it got too cliche with the plots and the grammar and compensations were too awkward so I dropped it a chapter 10.