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dude, author, you have everyone liying to you, this story need major freaking improvements, you repeated the three paragraphs twice and the grammar is confusing, so those who rated it as full stars or at three stars then they are just liying.
it's a good story. I haven't read anything from Steven Universe worth reading. but this kept me entertained for a weekend until i finished it
A story that holds you by the sentimental content that it presents right at the beginning and thus process leaving a connection between the character and the reader. [img=recommend]
I just found this and started reading but you caught me from the first chapter and I read it in one siting it was amazing I just wish that he got married att the end since you hinted at it
So i'm here to leave my review, this book is great and once again i look forward to your future stuff, great work i highly recommend reading this, everything was great in my opinion.(P.S still kinda sad there isn't more to it) :]
Apenas duas palavras : Romance e Gems . O que vc quer mais??? Não apenas sobre a história principal mas também novidades e acréscimos a história, a pura perfeição.
Dude or Sis don't stop please , this is the only perfect Steven Universe fanfic I've found and I'm not sure I want to step on wattpad or fanfiction.com. I got no complains only that if possible please put names on the dialogue so we can see who's speaking but other than that it's all so perfect.
Love the idea! and with a good editor this can be a good webnovel. but the writing is atrocious, gonna be brutally honest... this reads as if it's written by a child who's still learning english. will come back to this if there's ever a rewrite.
1° good chapter, 2° I liked the grammar, 3° I put and stars because I liked the fic. 😀 😃 😄 😁 😆 😆 😅 😂 🤣😊 😇 🙂 🙃 😉 😌 😍 😘 😗 😙 😚 😋 😛 😝 😜 🤪 🤨 🧐 🤓 😎 😎🤩😏
I was looking for copper I found gold. it is inspiring, good plot, can't wait to see how the romance will be developed between the character. IT got me Hooked
Finally...... PERIDOT. YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES . (then look for "Peridot's Audition", only for men of culture.)
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For you who are thinking about reading this book, please give the book a chance, I promise you will not regret it and quite the opposite will ask you why you haven't read it before, and if you can leave an honest and mainly constructive review to help the author to improve and encourage him to continue, remembering that no one gets paid to write and he / she is doing it because he likes it, so leave your pamper to the author there.
I am here again to demonstrate to the author and that no matter what happens, there will always be supporters of your book.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
at first i thought it would be one of those books where it was impossible to understand and meaningless, but after q i started reading the book, when i realized it was already in the last chapter. the book holds you in a surreal way, and there are no Fanfics about Steven Universe already makes me anxious for the next chapters. Good Luck author.
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Eu só quero uma coisa ,... que ñ abandone esse livro , poste quando puder e se precisar de ajuda com algo sobre , eu adoraria ajudar mano , gostei muito do livro.
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Membuka SPOILER Eu li tudo em um dia , realmete incrível mano , adoraria ver uma cena romântica de um beijo o quanto antes. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Por el momento muy bueno este fic de steven universe, siga con el buen trabajo, más harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem
amazing I love you work it's good I also love the story and how it's going. I hope you continue and don't drop it and don't care about the haters if they come keep positive.👍♥️😁
Could I get a description of the mc or a picture? I dont think he is described in the fic. I could have just forgot it though. REEEEEEEE
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Amazing. I came here not hoping for much but you have my interest piqued. Some advice: gems are really faithful so I highly doubt that a harem would be possible.
first thing first, theres a lot of people who give it 5 stars, this fanfic at mos could reach 3.2 stars, so they are or lying or very new to the fanfic genre, this fanfic is interesting enough to read it but you have to turn off your brain a notch, the story is interesting but lack in the characters development, there is times where you like somebody who saw the series can really know that isn't how pearl would act, the story is very rushed wich makes a lack of deph in the characters involved, the MC thinking isn't exactly good stablished so he became more like a tool for the rushed progresion of the story, the romance part could be better if it wasn't rushed and forced, the writing and characters needs work. So, in resume if you are bored and don't have anything more to read then this is your fanfic, im in chapter 23 i think and i couldn't endure more so i had to make this review, but maibe i keep reading but that is because i really don't have any other fanfic that call my atention
dude, author, you have everyone liying to you, this story need major freaking improvements, you repeated the three paragraphs twice and the grammar is confusing, so those who rated it as full stars or at three stars then they are just liying.
it's a good story. I haven't read anything from Steven Universe worth reading. but this kept me entertained for a weekend until i finished it
A story that holds you by the sentimental content that it presents right at the beginning and thus process leaving a connection between the character and the reader. [img=recommend]
I just found this and started reading but you caught me from the first chapter and I read it in one siting it was amazing I just wish that he got married att the end since you hinted at it
So i'm here to leave my review, this book is great and once again i look forward to your future stuff, great work i highly recommend reading this, everything was great in my opinion.(P.S still kinda sad there isn't more to it) :]
Apenas duas palavras : Romance e Gems . O que vc quer mais??? Não apenas sobre a história principal mas também novidades e acréscimos a história, a pura perfeição.
Dude or Sis don't stop please , this is the only perfect Steven Universe fanfic I've found and I'm not sure I want to step on wattpad or fanfiction.com. I got no complains only that if possible please put names on the dialogue so we can see who's speaking but other than that it's all so perfect.
Love the idea! and with a good editor this can be a good webnovel. but the writing is atrocious, gonna be brutally honest... this reads as if it's written by a child who's still learning english. will come back to this if there's ever a rewrite.
1° good chapter, 2° I liked the grammar, 3° I put and stars because I liked the fic. 😀 😃 😄 😁 😆 😆 😅 😂 🤣😊 😇 🙂 🙃 😉 😌 😍 😘 😗 😙 😚 😋 😛 😝 😜 🤪 🤨 🧐 🤓 😎 😎🤩😏
I was looking for copper I found gold. it is inspiring, good plot, can't wait to see how the romance will be developed between the character. IT got me Hooked
Finally...... PERIDOT. YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES . (then look for "Peridot's Audition", only for men of culture.)
Membuka SPOILER For you who are thinking about reading this book, please give the book a chance, I promise you will not regret it and quite the opposite will ask you why you haven't read it before, and if you can leave an honest and mainly constructive review to help the author to improve and encourage him to continue, remembering that no one gets paid to write and he / she is doing it because he likes it, so leave your pamper to the author there.
I am here again to demonstrate to the author and that no matter what happens, there will always be supporters of your book.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
at first i thought it would be one of those books where it was impossible to understand and meaningless, but after q i started reading the book, when i realized it was already in the last chapter. the book holds you in a surreal way, and there are no Fanfics about Steven Universe already makes me anxious for the next chapters. Good Luck author.
Spinella Spinella Spinella Spinella Spinella Spinella Spinella Spinella Spinella Spinella Spinella Spinella Spinella Spinella Spinella Spinella
I Love The book , the Flow of the book is beautiful. [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
Eu só quero uma coisa ,... que ñ abandone esse livro , poste quando puder e se precisar de ajuda com algo sobre , eu adoraria ajudar mano , gostei muito do livro.
Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem Pearl For Harem
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Membuka SPOILER Eu li tudo em um dia , realmete incrível mano , adoraria ver uma cena romântica de um beijo o quanto antes. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Por el momento muy bueno este fic de steven universe, siga con el buen trabajo, más harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem
amazing I love you work it's good I also love the story and how it's going. I hope you continue and don't drop it and don't care about the haters if they come keep positive.👍♥️😁
Could I get a description of the mc or a picture? I dont think he is described in the fic. I could have just forgot it though. REEEEEEEE
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Amazing. I came here not hoping for much but you have my interest piqued. Some advice: gems are really faithful so I highly doubt that a harem would be possible.
first thing first, theres a lot of people who give it 5 stars, this fanfic at mos could reach 3.2 stars, so they are or lying or very new to the fanfic genre, this fanfic is interesting enough to read it but you have to turn off your brain a notch, the story is interesting but lack in the characters development, there is times where you like somebody who saw the series can really know that isn't how pearl would act, the story is very rushed wich makes a lack of deph in the characters involved, the MC thinking isn't exactly good stablished so he became more like a tool for the rushed progresion of the story, the romance part could be better if it wasn't rushed and forced, the writing and characters needs work. So, in resume if you are bored and don't have anything more to read then this is your fanfic, im in chapter 23 i think and i couldn't endure more so i had to make this review, but maibe i keep reading but that is because i really don't have any other fanfic that call my atention