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I like the concept of this book but they make the whole system way to complicated. I also would have liked them to focus more on the main world.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Writing Quality: 4: Pretty good until the Fate arc where he adds SHIROU EMIYA AND THE ENTIRETY OF SHIROUS's INTO HIS PEERAGE WASTING ALL 8 OF HIS PAWN SLOTS, and no one likes Hermione so Hermione as FIRST CHOICE seems pretty STUPID TO ME Stability of Updates: 1 Obviously. Story Development: 1 Character Design: 1: No comment World Background: 5 star: Its DxD
Plain, grammar is average and plot points are average as well. There’s no originality in it, like an old can of soup. It has no flavor. No world building noir character description. Just a jumble of words that leave little to no imagination.
Well it's enjoyable to read and pass some time but it's gets pretty boring. Honestly you are not writing an actual novel you are writing a ff so don't spend so much in useless things. But overall it's good 👍 bye-bye
I will be willing to give you 10 dollars if you update this absolute beautiful masterpiece of a ficccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccc
Most of the time the Waifu acquiring MC's would act lecherous and there would be lots of lemons that is the main premise of a lot of fics and such but our MC is a goody two shoes while i don't have any issues with that he has no qualities and nothing that makes him particularly interesting the info dumps are very shallow and i feel disconnected when reading MC is like a cardboard shows expressions and emotions but it's very shallow and doesn't last longer than a second he doesn't learn magic from other worlds either
Author should rewrite this and focus only on dxd everyone clearly loved it up until it stopped being about dxd that’d be like reborn in naruto with useless skills and he suddenly goes to bleach
sorry for the bad review but it started getting hard to read through this starting from chapter two onward no I didn't read the whole fanfiction but it's more than clear that the author did not know some very easily known things about the series in which fanfiction takes place. again it's almost physically uncomfortable to read on multiple occasions throughout the story.
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This book is very good ❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Overall a good story. One of the better stories that utilizes the theme. ______________________________________________________________________
Continue this loving it I don't know why someone hate it maybe cause of the summon tingy but I like it I'm the harem type guy so yeah... [img=update]
This story started of great, but like many of the other reviews, as soon as it gets to the fate arc and shirou is introduced it goes downhill. The author puts extreme focus on shirou, having the mc add him to his peerage along with shirous harem. it keeps going even after the fate arc and into the mcs world where even the gods and higher beings get interested in shirou. The mc during this time doesn’t even get any power ups or anything all he does is spit his phoenix flames and that’ all It’ just frustrating
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Merry chrismas Y aumenta el harem de riser Porque si comparamos a Shiruo emiya Con riser podemos ver que riser tiene mas aura protagonista de Harem (Canon) y mas ahora que literalmente puede tenet miles de WAIFUS
I was left very disappointed. I read up to ch 10 before I had to stop. The writing was lazy with slutlife Inc and some chapters were just copy pastes of other authors works. Rather than make MC stronger on their own, the beta gets a "System" to getting stronger faster. It cheapened the story and the dialog 6was so bad I couldn't stand it.
actually a well written wish fulfilment fict, give it a try. the update rate needs improvement though. .....................................
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Writing quality: 4/5 star World background: 0/5 World anime: High school DxD Character design: 2/5 MC is Riser Phonix, but have stupid hero complex. 🙄 MC buy Hermione Granger... is your "waifu" 💩... is the first choice for your haren / member of your nobility. MC is stupid? There are better options in world: High school DxD. I am disappointed in the story.😔
the story is not bad, that is of course until the mc travels to the world of fate stay night, the mc reincarnates shirou as a member of his peerage and lets sakura and illya (and probably rider in the future) join his harem (shirou) so if you do not like this type of situation, I do not recommend reading this, and by the way illya also joins the peerage of the mc, at this rate all the peerage of the mc will be filled with the harem of shirou
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I like this job. Of course, there are drawbacks. But this work on the Weifa collection, which makes a big plus. DXD is also well combined with this. Especially happy reincarnation in Raiser Phhaenex. I put the maximum score, because it's a shame for the author because of bad reviews. Comment at the time of the 15 chapter.
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Very good story. The of mc character is also good. Just increase the update rate. ,.,......................... More posts more posts more posts more posts more posts
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This is just a shitty fanfic where the mc buys waifus insults religion is racist and a lot more terrible shit. Hope you fix these. You probably wont since you never listen to the readers.
Membuka SPOILER I like the concept of this book but they make the whole system way to complicated. I also would have liked them to focus more on the main world.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Writing Quality: 4: Pretty good until the Fate arc where he adds SHIROU EMIYA AND THE ENTIRETY OF SHIROUS's INTO HIS PEERAGE WASTING ALL 8 OF HIS PAWN SLOTS, and no one likes Hermione so Hermione as FIRST CHOICE seems pretty STUPID TO ME Stability of Updates: 1 Obviously. Story Development: 1 Character Design: 1: No comment World Background: 5 star: Its DxD
Plain, grammar is average and plot points are average as well. There’s no originality in it, like an old can of soup. It has no flavor. No world building noir character description. Just a jumble of words that leave little to no imagination.
Well it's enjoyable to read and pass some time but it's gets pretty boring. Honestly you are not writing an actual novel you are writing a ff so don't spend so much in useless things. But overall it's good 👍 bye-bye
I will be willing to give you 10 dollars if you update this absolute beautiful masterpiece of a ficccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccc
Most of the time the Waifu acquiring MC's would act lecherous and there would be lots of lemons that is the main premise of a lot of fics and such but our MC is a goody two shoes while i don't have any issues with that he has no qualities and nothing that makes him particularly interesting the info dumps are very shallow and i feel disconnected when reading MC is like a cardboard shows expressions and emotions but it's very shallow and doesn't last longer than a second he doesn't learn magic from other worlds either
Author should rewrite this and focus only on dxd everyone clearly loved it up until it stopped being about dxd that’d be like reborn in naruto with useless skills and he suddenly goes to bleach
sorry for the bad review but it started getting hard to read through this starting from chapter two onward no I didn't read the whole fanfiction but it's more than clear that the author did not know some very easily known things about the series in which fanfiction takes place. again it's almost physically uncomfortable to read on multiple occasions throughout the story.
Title is wrong its became not become...... .................................................................................................
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This book is very good ❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Overall a good story. One of the better stories that utilizes the theme. ______________________________________________________________________
Continue this loving it I don't know why someone hate it maybe cause of the summon tingy but I like it I'm the harem type guy so yeah... [img=update]
This story started of great, but like many of the other reviews, as soon as it gets to the fate arc and shirou is introduced it goes downhill. The author puts extreme focus on shirou, having the mc add him to his peerage along with shirous harem. it keeps going even after the fate arc and into the mcs world where even the gods and higher beings get interested in shirou. The mc during this time doesn’t even get any power ups or anything all he does is spit his phoenix flames and that’ all It’ just frustrating
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Merry chrismas Y aumenta el harem de riser Porque si comparamos a Shiruo emiya Con riser podemos ver que riser tiene mas aura protagonista de Harem (Canon) y mas ahora que literalmente puede tenet miles de WAIFUS
I was left very disappointed. I read up to ch 10 before I had to stop. The writing was lazy with slutlife Inc and some chapters were just copy pastes of other authors works. Rather than make MC stronger on their own, the beta gets a "System" to getting stronger faster. It cheapened the story and the dialog 6was so bad I couldn't stand it.
actually a well written wish fulfilment fict, give it a try. the update rate needs improvement though. .....................................
Love it ❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️😍❤️
Writing quality: 4/5 star World background: 0/5 World anime: High school DxD Character design: 2/5 MC is Riser Phonix, but have stupid hero complex. 🙄 MC buy Hermione Granger... is your "waifu" 💩... is the first choice for your haren / member of your nobility. MC is stupid? There are better options in world: High school DxD. I am disappointed in the story.😔
the story is not bad, that is of course until the mc travels to the world of fate stay night, the mc reincarnates shirou as a member of his peerage and lets sakura and illya (and probably rider in the future) join his harem (shirou) so if you do not like this type of situation, I do not recommend reading this, and by the way illya also joins the peerage of the mc, at this rate all the peerage of the mc will be filled with the harem of shirou
Membuka SPOILER I like this job. Of course, there are drawbacks. But this work on the Weifa collection, which makes a big plus. DXD is also well combined with this. Especially happy reincarnation in Raiser Phhaenex. I put the maximum score, because it's a shame for the author because of bad reviews. Comment at the time of the 15 chapter.
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Very good story. The of mc character is also good. Just increase the update rate. ,.,......................... More posts more posts more posts more posts more posts
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This is just a shitty fanfic where the mc buys waifus insults religion is racist and a lot more terrible shit. Hope you fix these. You probably wont since you never listen to the readers.
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