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You have a way with words that make each read seem seamless. I like the story potrayed by the characters making their interaction realistic with an amusing theme. Great character development, overall a great story.
The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader I got sunk in this world the author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read :)
first of all great cover) FL sou ds fresh, I choose this novel for its ideas) I'm sure that the author will improve every aspect of the book in the future. pay attention to this story folks
I'm not a great fan of science fiction, but this one is mind-blowing. The story has a good plot with an amazing writing style. Good work, author!
That Pea soup fog got me good! The story is very fascinating, and I really love how detailed the announcements are in the chapters! Although I am still at the first few parts of the story, I can tell that this is going to progress as awesome as the book cover of your novel! I cannot wait to read more about this~
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Ah the start is really good. to be honest I loved the descriptions. you have a good writing style but I think you can work on your punctuation marks. I saw there are some unnecessary spaces between the punctuation marks. mostly in dailogues. Other than that it's a great read.
Great job. Your story is going on interesting. Please update daily. Good luck.Need more chapters. Overall awesome thought process. All the best.
Nice title and great book cover. The story is not one that grabs attention immediately but rather, it needs patience and a few more chapters to understand and truly fall in love with the character and that was epic! Nice storyline.
Hmmm, well written the synopsis and the world background but I don't know what is the point of the main character. I think we will know it for the upcoming chapters. No problem with the grammar.
Only have 10 chapters so far so we still couldn't see well where the plot would dive into. The idea is interesting enough. The writing could still be polished up nevertheless Keep up the good work!
the story and the concept is interesting the imagination of the author is wonderful the narration goes well with the characters and story but there were few grammatical, tense errors I hope the author have fixed those in the Futher chapters overall amazing story good work author
Good work👍. Your novel is getting more and more interesting now. Thank you so much it's gonna be my time killer on 2021.Need more chapters. Keep going✌
Awesome imagination & thrilling story line its really getting as into the story ....great start👏👏keep rocking shamiii🥳🥳🥳🥳 Egarly waiting for the upcoming chapter....
Excellent grip of language and taught process 👏👏 Fantabulous storyline✨✨. Keep posting us the delightful work💖.. Keep up the good work 💐💐. I'm thrilled!! Eagerly waiting for ur upcoming story track post it as soon as possible 🥳🥳
Well done! apt to current world pandemic....you had narrated everything in a clean and understandable way ...good luck interested to read more chapters..
You have a way with words that make each read seem seamless. I like the story potrayed by the characters making their interaction realistic with an amusing theme. Great character development, overall a great story.
The plot develops well throughout the chapter and the picture created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline. As a reader I got sunk in this world the author had created. A fascinating escape from reality into another world. A great read :)
first of all great cover) FL sou ds fresh, I choose this novel for its ideas) I'm sure that the author will improve every aspect of the book in the future. pay attention to this story folks
I'm not a great fan of science fiction, but this one is mind-blowing. The story has a good plot with an amazing writing style. Good work, author!
That Pea soup fog got me good! The story is very fascinating, and I really love how detailed the announcements are in the chapters! Although I am still at the first few parts of the story, I can tell that this is going to progress as awesome as the book cover of your novel! I cannot wait to read more about this~
Membuka SPOILER Ah the start is really good. to be honest I loved the descriptions. you have a good writing style but I think you can work on your punctuation marks. I saw there are some unnecessary spaces between the punctuation marks. mostly in dailogues. Other than that it's a great read.
Great job. Your story is going on interesting. Please update daily. Good luck.Need more chapters. Overall awesome thought process. All the best.
Nice title and great book cover. The story is not one that grabs attention immediately but rather, it needs patience and a few more chapters to understand and truly fall in love with the character and that was epic! Nice storyline.
Hmmm, well written the synopsis and the world background but I don't know what is the point of the main character. I think we will know it for the upcoming chapters. No problem with the grammar.
Only have 10 chapters so far so we still couldn't see well where the plot would dive into. The idea is interesting enough. The writing could still be polished up nevertheless Keep up the good work!
the story and the concept is interesting the imagination of the author is wonderful the narration goes well with the characters and story but there were few grammatical, tense errors I hope the author have fixed those in the Futher chapters overall amazing story good work author
Good work👍. Your novel is getting more and more interesting now. Thank you so much it's gonna be my time killer on 2021.Need more chapters. Keep going✌
Awesome imagination & thrilling story line its really getting as into the story ....great start👏👏keep rocking shamiii🥳🥳🥳🥳 Egarly waiting for the upcoming chapter....
Excellent grip of language and taught process 👏👏 Fantabulous storyline✨✨. Keep posting us the delightful work💖.. Keep up the good work 💐💐. I'm thrilled!! Eagerly waiting for ur upcoming story track post it as soon as possible 🥳🥳
Well done! apt to current world pandemic....you had narrated everything in a clean and understandable way ...good luck interested to read more chapters..
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