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honestly it could have been a lot better overall the updating schedule varies and really dragged the score down as well as the plot of the story kind of sloppy with plenty of room for improvement... I wish you good luck in your endeavors dear author but this is simply not a novel I particularly enjoyed
Author, do you know why you don't have as many readers? The main problem is that it does not exist, there is no main protagonist and main antagonists. It would be great if this story had a main character and other secondary characters. The story is currently too bland, there is no character development because they are NPCs, there is no personal goal or ambition that drives story development. Author, good luck with your projects. For the next story add main characters. Postscript; the anime "Gate" had 1 main character. The books, movies, comics, animes, manga, with the highest ratings and fundraising had a main character. Even the movie "Titanic" had 2 main characters, being a true story about a maritime accident. 🙂
This is a great book, personally think that it makes more sense than the actual book, I would definitely recommend to other people interested in the genre. Great job, honestly.
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Hey can you explain what is really transported over cause the president said it was only military equipment but why do they have skyscraper's and other things to help them trade with other nations cause if only military equipment were transferred then how do they make food and provide water cause the pipelines will not be there?
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It's quite the decent fic. There's no other way for me to say it. There's a good reason for what the popper are doing, and honestly, this intrigues me I hope that you continue writing.
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this is a hidden gem the only regret is i didnt find this novel sooner ., 10/10 please dont drop man :)))))) ..................................
honestly it could have been a lot better overall the updating schedule varies and really dragged the score down as well as the plot of the story kind of sloppy with plenty of room for improvement... I wish you good luck in your endeavors dear author but this is simply not a novel I particularly enjoyed
Author, do you know why you don't have as many readers? The main problem is that it does not exist, there is no main protagonist and main antagonists. It would be great if this story had a main character and other secondary characters. The story is currently too bland, there is no character development because they are NPCs, there is no personal goal or ambition that drives story development. Author, good luck with your projects. For the next story add main characters. Postscript; the anime "Gate" had 1 main character. The books, movies, comics, animes, manga, with the highest ratings and fundraising had a main character. Even the movie "Titanic" had 2 main characters, being a true story about a maritime accident. 🙂
This is a great book, personally think that it makes more sense than the actual book, I would definitely recommend to other people interested in the genre. Great job, honestly.
Good fanfic please dont drop . .. .. . ... . . .. . . . .. . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . . . .. .. . ..
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Hey can you explain what is really transported over cause the president said it was only military equipment but why do they have skyscraper's and other things to help them trade with other nations cause if only military equipment were transferred then how do they make food and provide water cause the pipelines will not be there?
Great story please dont drop. . .. . . .. . . .. . . . . .. . . . . ... . . .. . . . .. . . . . .. . .. . . .. . . . . .
Nice. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . ... . . . .. . ... . . . . . .. . . . . .. v. . . .. . . . .. . .v. . . v.. .v. . . v.. .v. .v. .
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It's quite the decent fic. There's no other way for me to say it. There's a good reason for what the popper are doing, and honestly, this intrigues me I hope that you continue writing.
This is basically the same as that Japanese manga/book. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Please don't drop this [img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]I need more...........