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After many fruitless searches for well-written, comedic, intense, thought-provoking ... novels on this website (which is quite the demand I know I know) I have come across this gem. It's wonderful. it has everything I could want and more. I won't go into the details, so please check it out for yourself!
Honestly the story itself is good. However. This is the most considerate system/video game author I've met. If you don't know, coin costs are calculated by number of words, and wherever possible, uses various forms of punctuation in system menus etc. to minimize word count, and keep costs from inflating with frequent system prompts. And as for story, in a nutshell, he has insane luck. Whether the outcome is positive or negative, he always gets extremely unlikely outcomes. It's an interesting premise.
an amazing book author, I wanted to ask you something really but I found the review/comment section isn't the best of place to ask is there a way we can talk privately. sincerely your dear reader
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Its pretty good story wise, but the writing style and grammatical errors are just huge deal breakers for me. Good luck author, but poor writing is poor writing.
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I absolutely love this story. The world they build is well thought out and interesting to read. The way they adapt gods and characters to fit in a video game world while still keeping their personalities from mythology is just really awesome.
i just want say this novel has a good flow. well I have a question but I will only ask in DMs and here's my discord . . . . . . . . . . . . . Kazethe_darkwolf#5683
Good Story mate but the stat panel is to hard to understand , currently reading at chapter 32 so far. Hope to find where the mc's luck to chaos in a funny ways
the writing feels alive .. like u can feel and see the characters . superb fight sequences . and overall very relatable dialogues .[img=recommend]
Author I really recommend that you need to make some informative auxillary chapters for informations like the grade of equips,items etc and for the stats. Thanks for the good read tho.
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Ive read chapter 102 and i think something is wrong with luke, I wonder if perhaps he might actually be an even older primordial than nyx and Gaia maybe he might be the Chaos primordial As with all the hints author been giving i feel my guess might be correct
I can harp on the bad spelling and uncapitalized letters and the punctuation that is all over the place but other than that it's The F****** Bomb. That's a Good thing.
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The aithor takes you on a wild ride from the most unfortunate Looking beginnings For our MC to the rollercoaster that is the world of gaming. I can’t wait for more and I look forward to going on this adventure the author is taking us on.
Besides a few easy To make tYpe errors the stoRy is very immeRsive. The game seems like it could actually exist which is nice. The only knock i have is that the side characTers arent developed enough early on
Update: I was not wrong in the original review. This novel is absolutely amazing. I still love it. The language style, the humor, the action..everything is on point.
The story is extremly good and somewhat unique the only problem i discovered were the loots and materials drops and the power system of the npcs are messy the plot is good but majority of the players and npcs are ignored like only the mc and the monster world and theres no player nearby though it can be attributed to the large world.
I absolutely love this novel !!! Must read !! If you are into VRMMORPG , you'll love it!!! I appreciate the author's hardwork in putting out TWO CHAPTERS A DAY ! It just doesn't get boring, i donno how the heck he manages to make it more interesting ALL THE TIME. Btw, Valerian Milo my favourite no cappppp.Good job man,great novel .
It's good so far! even if I'm only at chapter 53, I can tell that this is going to go somewhere- as for the stability of updates- I didnt really pay attention to that- so I just put it at a 4. But as it's going right now, I'm enjoying it!
I loved the storyline, it really gripped me from the beginning. Worldbuilding and character development are great. I am really looking forward to upcoming chapters.
This story feels very fresh, im really glad i started this and i cant wait for the end, this to me is a competition winner contender, absolute amazing writing!
This is pretty good, well our MC is unique quite similar with sun jiwoo in solo levelling. Overall, the novel still needs improvement and this is an hidden gem, and am adding this to my library.
i dont really know about gaming and stuff but this one got me hooked a chad mc and fantastic world creation overall a must read but pacing seemed a little but aside that it is really good
The character design can improve. It's a bit too straight forward. I want to experience the character getting all strong and I want to know how said character has a particular skillset, how did he/she accomplish it. But I really enjoy this one. Not many novels have piqued my interest, whereas this one has.
Pretty good start and I like it's pacing. Though the author feels the pacing is a bit disruptive. I've made it my daily schedule to read a couple of chapters and I'm happy with my resolution to read a bit online. In this day of a pandemic such novels help pass the time
Absolutely beautiful. Love the story, cant wait for more chapters. Give me moreeeeee Author doesn't need sleep. I dont need sleep. This is amazing, it has all the elements of an epic VR MMO novel.
Author here to let the new readers understand what to expect: 1)Basic info about the MC: With bad luck following him everywhere, he had no choice but to develop a rather carefree attitude, of course, this was also due to the trust in his skills. NO, this isn't a harem :/ :/ :/ 2)I'm definitely learning and getting better everyday. The style in the first 3-4 chapters may seem a bit all over the place. I would ask you to stick around and give it a try regardless. 3)The novel may seem fast-paced but that's only due to the world of Genesis being extremely vast. 4)Of course, since this is my first time doing this, it's natural I make mistakes but I go through the work multiple times before posting it so if there's still any mistake, it'll only be minor grammatical errors.(which isn't excusable but it's better than story-line errors) Thank you for reading and Bad luck FTW!
After many fruitless searches for well-written, comedic, intense, thought-provoking ... novels on this website (which is quite the demand I know I know) I have come across this gem. It's wonderful. it has everything I could want and more. I won't go into the details, so please check it out for yourself!
Honestly the story itself is good. However. This is the most considerate system/video game author I've met. If you don't know, coin costs are calculated by number of words, and wherever possible, uses various forms of punctuation in system menus etc. to minimize word count, and keep costs from inflating with frequent system prompts. And as for story, in a nutshell, he has insane luck. Whether the outcome is positive or negative, he always gets extremely unlikely outcomes. It's an interesting premise.
an amazing book author, I wanted to ask you something really but I found the review/comment section isn't the best of place to ask is there a way we can talk privately. sincerely your dear reader
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Its pretty good story wise, but the writing style and grammatical errors are just huge deal breakers for me. Good luck author, but poor writing is poor writing.
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I absolutely love this story. The world they build is well thought out and interesting to read. The way they adapt gods and characters to fit in a video game world while still keeping their personalities from mythology is just really awesome.
i just want say this novel has a good flow. well I have a question but I will only ask in DMs and here's my discord . . . . . . . . . . . . . Kazethe_darkwolf#5683
Good Story mate but the stat panel is to hard to understand , currently reading at chapter 32 so far. Hope to find where the mc's luck to chaos in a funny ways
the writing feels alive .. like u can feel and see the characters . superb fight sequences . and overall very relatable dialogues .[img=recommend]
Author I really recommend that you need to make some informative auxillary chapters for informations like the grade of equips,items etc and for the stats. Thanks for the good read tho.
Good, nuff said.......................................... ..................................................................................
Ive read chapter 102 and i think something is wrong with luke, I wonder if perhaps he might actually be an even older primordial than nyx and Gaia maybe he might be the Chaos primordial As with all the hints author been giving i feel my guess might be correct
I can harp on the bad spelling and uncapitalized letters and the punctuation that is all over the place but other than that it's The F****** Bomb. That's a Good thing.
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The aithor takes you on a wild ride from the most unfortunate Looking beginnings For our MC to the rollercoaster that is the world of gaming. I can’t wait for more and I look forward to going on this adventure the author is taking us on.
Besides a few easy To make tYpe errors the stoRy is very immeRsive. The game seems like it could actually exist which is nice. The only knock i have is that the side characTers arent developed enough early on
Update: I was not wrong in the original review. This novel is absolutely amazing. I still love it. The language style, the humor, the action..everything is on point.
The story is extremly good and somewhat unique the only problem i discovered were the loots and materials drops and the power system of the npcs are messy the plot is good but majority of the players and npcs are ignored like only the mc and the monster world and theres no player nearby though it can be attributed to the large world.
I absolutely love this novel !!! Must read !! If you are into VRMMORPG , you'll love it!!! I appreciate the author's hardwork in putting out TWO CHAPTERS A DAY ! It just doesn't get boring, i donno how the heck he manages to make it more interesting ALL THE TIME. Btw, Valerian Milo my favourite no cappppp.Good job man,great novel .
It's good so far! even if I'm only at chapter 53, I can tell that this is going to go somewhere- as for the stability of updates- I didnt really pay attention to that- so I just put it at a 4. But as it's going right now, I'm enjoying it!
I loved the storyline, it really gripped me from the beginning. Worldbuilding and character development are great. I am really looking forward to upcoming chapters.
This story feels very fresh, im really glad i started this and i cant wait for the end, this to me is a competition winner contender, absolute amazing writing!
This is pretty good, well our MC is unique quite similar with sun jiwoo in solo levelling. Overall, the novel still needs improvement and this is an hidden gem, and am adding this to my library.
i dont really know about gaming and stuff but this one got me hooked a chad mc and fantastic world creation overall a must read but pacing seemed a little but aside that it is really good
The character design can improve. It's a bit too straight forward. I want to experience the character getting all strong and I want to know how said character has a particular skillset, how did he/she accomplish it. But I really enjoy this one. Not many novels have piqued my interest, whereas this one has.
Pretty good start and I like it's pacing. Though the author feels the pacing is a bit disruptive. I've made it my daily schedule to read a couple of chapters and I'm happy with my resolution to read a bit online. In this day of a pandemic such novels help pass the time
Absolutely beautiful. Love the story, cant wait for more chapters. Give me moreeeeee Author doesn't need sleep. I dont need sleep. This is amazing, it has all the elements of an epic VR MMO novel.
Author here to let the new readers understand what to expect: 1)Basic info about the MC: With bad luck following him everywhere, he had no choice but to develop a rather carefree attitude, of course, this was also due to the trust in his skills. NO, this isn't a harem :/ :/ :/ 2)I'm definitely learning and getting better everyday. The style in the first 3-4 chapters may seem a bit all over the place. I would ask you to stick around and give it a try regardless. 3)The novel may seem fast-paced but that's only due to the world of Genesis being extremely vast. 4)Of course, since this is my first time doing this, it's natural I make mistakes but I go through the work multiple times before posting it so if there's still any mistake, it'll only be minor grammatical errors.(which isn't excusable but it's better than story-line errors) Thank you for reading and Bad luck FTW!