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The Mc's TL'd name is Betta, and it pretty much sums up the novel. A complete Beta MC that is op yet behaves like a bullied kindergartener. Despite living two lifetimes he behaves like he's 7 and has 0 logic to his actions. 0/10, don't vote.
I hope thia will be picked. This story is awesome and somehow no boring plots. pick this please hehe exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
I havent read this but his name Betta makes me think of 'Beta' for Beta male and i just cant unsee it......................................................................
This is not a China number one novel because mc starting city is new York, although its the magical type.. But still, no China number one and that had push it into my favorite list..
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Great story, great characters . Being disabled, i read to entertain myself - and this is one of my favorites . Can’t wait to see how the love interests turn out.
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Good characters and storyline. The update of the Story Needs to be improved, but this is true for all of the novels. I enjoy reading, and being disabled, this is my entertainment
Typical MC. Even I am speechless by who shameless he is.................... bd dbdj dbdj bddn bdn bdnd hdhf bdnd dbdj .... . . . ... . . . .
La trama atrae mucho, pero la historia no tiene sentido , el mundo creado por el autor casi ni existe, todo forzado y la trama se tuerce de formas ridículas. Los primeros capítulos son pasables pero luego se descuida mucho la historia, un MC que pasa de ser interesante a ser solo una basura más de MCs que están saliendo actualmente.
There is alot of confusing parts to this novel like the gender of an character. Plus sometime the mc is smart but the other times he is basically stupid.
Really like this story. Being disabled and unable to leave my home, reading helps keep me stable. I like the characters and ghe storyline is very entertaining.
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it's a funny type novel with main characters having at least a little bit of brain and mc having questionable relationship starts and it's not too great nor down right bad like previous trial read and as always translation problem
it's a new take on the classic reincarnation story, and it doesn't change much as of yet but it inexplicably draws you in. It doesn't have much background but I expect there to be some more added in at a later chapter.
The author isn't even trying. If you want to create a fictional universe do so, but don't copy stupid things from different cultures in this world and mesh them badly. If there was a negative world building rating, this novel would deserve it. You ask why? First, the American high school system does not work like the chinese/asien systems. The author gets everything wrong there. Second, a supposedly talentless idiot can simply enter the most prestigious school on a wim after skipping school for a year. Third, the MC relationships with the rest of the world, his background, are unrealistic, contradictory and purely there to give MC the underdog feel. Fourth, the superpowers are unimaginative, teaching them in a classroom setting is a waste of time and don't have an impact on society. Writing a fantasy novel with super powers, but taking a setting from the real world without paying attention to the consequences of super powers in the past and present is just lazy. You know, if the MC wanted to meet as many super powered individuals as possible, then handing out fliers would have been a lot easier. Becoming a talent scout, by pretending to have the superpowers to identify others talents would work much better than wathever this novel is trying and failing to do. Also MC is a crepe who preyes on others and a pedophile, it is rare for me to dislike a MC this much, but his supposedly mature ways of preying on underaged kids, while he himself is at least mentally an adult gives me hives.
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if their gonna write a novel with the us as the background at least make it seem realistic, stick to their lane and write use china as the setting.
So, before you read, let me give you a tl;dr with minor spoilers but will help: n chapter three is an info dump explaining the ranks. However, in the chapter, the translator/author says the ranks are distributed by the colors of the rainbow. Yet, The colors in the very same chapter include CYAN and PURPLE. So, incase Mr. Translator/author reads this: The colors of the rainbow are Red, Orange, Yellow, Green, Blue, Indigo, Violet. Please go back to kindergarden. Anyway, the true progression in this novel is as follows: Red Orange Yellow Green Cyan Blue Purple Now, fast forward to chapter 10. His so called ‘desk mate’ in the synopsis (and I presume the cover picture, which mind you the translator has the girl with blond hair, blue eyes, and english name just like everyone else in the novel.) is suspicious of our MC and asks him to use magic to prove his rank - one’s magic is the color of their rank. MC’s magic should be Cyan colored. But, he tricks her with a useless ability he stole (convenient ofc) that changes the color, thus making it red. Then, he acts hurt that she would force him to show his useless magic. (He’s hiding his abilities, what do you expect) Now it gets good fellow readers. This innocent SIXTEEN year old deskmate now feels guilty, asking how he can forgive her for hurting his feelings. MC’s first thought? Literally to and I quote, ‘bed her’. But, he decides to be merciful and forces her to kiss him. Her first kiss, despite him tricking her. He legitimately guilt tripped a 16 year old into a sexual assault. Thank you for reading my review, I hope your brain cells can continue to work, as mine no longer do.
Really annoying that these novels always try to hype up a mc as some op god but then make them go to school where a mere teacher or student can order them around. Lame by default 😑
Membuka SPOILER
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petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Can someone tell me the raw pls thanks . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . ... .. . . .. .. . . . . ... . . . . .. .. .
While camping, my crush suddenly stopped loving me. I had to think fast! So I removed my brain, and maintain my heart inside, Connect the veins and surprise her back! I'm an alpha kid😎
🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿 A harem novel, stealing powers of anothers, combining them to make him #1. No creativity. This batch is trash.
Really do like this story, so I am wondering when the story will continue? It really shouldn’t take this long. No real complaints , just curious
The Mc's TL'd name is Betta, and it pretty much sums up the novel. A complete Beta MC that is op yet behaves like a bullied kindergartener. Despite living two lifetimes he behaves like he's 7 and has 0 logic to his actions. 0/10, don't vote.
I hope thia will be picked. This story is awesome and somehow no boring plots. pick this please hehe exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
I havent read this but his name Betta makes me think of 'Beta' for Beta male and i just cant unsee it......................................................................
This is not a China number one novel because mc starting city is new York, although its the magical type.. But still, no China number one and that had push it into my favorite list..
Ggfffffycycfyvyctctctctctctctftctctctctcyvyvuvvuvyctcuvuvyvyvyvyvyvyvyvycycyggffggygggygg fun energy full one something for eco so it do TV into
Great story, great characters . Being disabled, i read to entertain myself - and this is one of my favorites . Can’t wait to see how the love interests turn out.
Check Xhaare in the reviews to help you understand the book. Check Xhaare in the reviews to help you understand the book. Check Xhaare in the reviews to help you understand the book.
Good characters and storyline. The update of the Story Needs to be improved, but this is true for all of the novels. I enjoy reading, and being disabled, this is my entertainment
Typical MC. Even I am speechless by who shameless he is.................... bd dbdj dbdj bddn bdn bdnd hdhf bdnd dbdj .... . . . ... . . . .
La trama atrae mucho, pero la historia no tiene sentido , el mundo creado por el autor casi ni existe, todo forzado y la trama se tuerce de formas ridículas. Los primeros capítulos son pasables pero luego se descuida mucho la historia, un MC que pasa de ser interesante a ser solo una basura más de MCs que están saliendo actualmente.
There is alot of confusing parts to this novel like the gender of an character. Plus sometime the mc is smart but the other times he is basically stupid.
Really like this story. Being disabled and unable to leave my home, reading helps keep me stable. I like the characters and ghe storyline is very entertaining.
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it's a funny type novel with main characters having at least a little bit of brain and mc having questionable relationship starts and it's not too great nor down right bad like previous trial read and as always translation problem
it's a new take on the classic reincarnation story, and it doesn't change much as of yet but it inexplicably draws you in. It doesn't have much background but I expect there to be some more added in at a later chapter.
The author isn't even trying. If you want to create a fictional universe do so, but don't copy stupid things from different cultures in this world and mesh them badly. If there was a negative world building rating, this novel would deserve it. You ask why? First, the American high school system does not work like the chinese/asien systems. The author gets everything wrong there. Second, a supposedly talentless idiot can simply enter the most prestigious school on a wim after skipping school for a year. Third, the MC relationships with the rest of the world, his background, are unrealistic, contradictory and purely there to give MC the underdog feel. Fourth, the superpowers are unimaginative, teaching them in a classroom setting is a waste of time and don't have an impact on society. Writing a fantasy novel with super powers, but taking a setting from the real world without paying attention to the consequences of super powers in the past and present is just lazy. You know, if the MC wanted to meet as many super powered individuals as possible, then handing out fliers would have been a lot easier. Becoming a talent scout, by pretending to have the superpowers to identify others talents would work much better than wathever this novel is trying and failing to do. Also MC is a crepe who preyes on others and a pedophile, it is rare for me to dislike a MC this much, but his supposedly mature ways of preying on underaged kids, while he himself is at least mentally an adult gives me hives.
cxcdfcccccccccccccccccc vvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvbvbvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv
if their gonna write a novel with the us as the background at least make it seem realistic, stick to their lane and write use china as the setting.
So, before you read, let me give you a tl;dr with minor spoilers but will help: n chapter three is an info dump explaining the ranks. However, in the chapter, the translator/author says the ranks are distributed by the colors of the rainbow. Yet, The colors in the very same chapter include CYAN and PURPLE. So, incase Mr. Translator/author reads this: The colors of the rainbow are Red, Orange, Yellow, Green, Blue, Indigo, Violet. Please go back to kindergarden. Anyway, the true progression in this novel is as follows: Red Orange Yellow Green Cyan Blue Purple Now, fast forward to chapter 10. His so called ‘desk mate’ in the synopsis (and I presume the cover picture, which mind you the translator has the girl with blond hair, blue eyes, and english name just like everyone else in the novel.) is suspicious of our MC and asks him to use magic to prove his rank - one’s magic is the color of their rank. MC’s magic should be Cyan colored. But, he tricks her with a useless ability he stole (convenient ofc) that changes the color, thus making it red. Then, he acts hurt that she would force him to show his useless magic. (He’s hiding his abilities, what do you expect) Now it gets good fellow readers. This innocent SIXTEEN year old deskmate now feels guilty, asking how he can forgive her for hurting his feelings. MC’s first thought? Literally to and I quote, ‘bed her’. But, he decides to be merciful and forces her to kiss him. Her first kiss, despite him tricking her. He legitimately guilt tripped a 16 year old into a sexual assault. Thank you for reading my review, I hope your brain cells can continue to work, as mine no longer do.
Really annoying that these novels always try to hype up a mc as some op god but then make them go to school where a mere teacher or student can order them around. Lame by default 😑
Membuka SPOILER ............................................................................................................................................
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
Can someone tell me the raw pls thanks . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . ... .. . . .. .. . . . . ... . . . . .. .. .
While camping, my crush suddenly stopped loving me. I had to think fast! So I removed my brain, and maintain my heart inside, Connect the veins and surprise her back! I'm an alpha kid😎
🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿🗿 A harem novel, stealing powers of anothers, combining them to make him #1. No creativity. This batch is trash.
Really do like this story, so I am wondering when the story will continue? It really shouldn’t take this long. No real complaints , just curious